篇一:《作文讲评-our spring outing》
时态：过去时, 上周发生
人称：第一人称
Our Spring Outing
Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.
The next day, we set off early in the we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively. We were tired but happy. (112字)
边慧婷
Our class intended to go out for spring outing. We discussed where to go. Some preferred to go to amusement park; some felt like going boating in the park and others were willing to climb the mountain. In the end, we made up our mind to climb the mountain. Early in the next morning, we set out to climb the mountain. The sun was shining and the air was fresh. the beautiful trees and flowers, we were all impressed by the scenery. As we got to the top of the mountain, we were exhausted. But to our surprise, there were a variety of wastes lying on the ground, such as the plastic cans, the food wastes and so on. , we all picked up the wastes and put them into our bags. When we reached
the foot of the mountain, we found two bins. One was intended for recycled wastes and the other was for non-recycled wastes. So we sorted out the wastes and threw them into the correct bins. After everything was finished, we were all tired but we thought it was worthwhile to protect the environment. (but our efforts didn’t prove to be in vain.) We should pay more attention to it and take measures to protect it. We all believe if we do so we will have a more beautiful environment. (228字)
郝语
I’m Li Hua studying in Class 1 Grade
3. Last week, we discussed about the places for spring outing. The three choices were amusement park, going boating and climbing mountain.
Eventually, we decided to climb mountain.
Early in the morning, we arrived at Xiang Shan Park together. It was a sunny day. And the beautiful scenery surrounding us seemed like a painting. The trees and flowers kept us spellbound. We enjoyed the fresh air. On the top of the mountain, we spotted a variety of rubbish, such as bananas, empty bottles, plastic bags and so on. We aimed to protect the environment, so we picked up the rubbish. On the way back, we sorted out the rubbish and threw them into the bins. To our delight, we helped to protect the environment, which made our day more meaningful. It is our responsibility to protect our earth. We couldn’t get the day off our mind. (146字)
篇二:《Spring outing》
March 8th
Spring Outing
Spring outing in March is a good season.We classes that day Spring Outing on Saturday.
Today is right Women’s Day.We all look very happy. Along the way,we talk and smile. Mr.Yang also join us.We all look on him as our good friend. Warm spring breeze is
gently touching us.The lovely birds are flying in the air and singing beautiful
songs.All the things are green:the hills,the water,the trees and the beautiful
flowers.We are enjoying ourselves a lot.
3月8日
春游
阳春三月正是春游的好时节。我们班在星期六这天春游。今天正好是妇女节。我们都
显得特别高兴。一路上，我们有说有笑，杨老师也加入到我们当中。我们都把他当成我们的
好朋友。和煦的春风轻轻的抚摸着我们，可爱的小鸟在空中飞来飞去,并唱着动听的曲子。
一切都是绿的：这山，这河，这树，还有这美丽的花儿。我们都玩得很开心。
教师点评：小作者的文笔确实不错呵！阳春三月，万物复苏，同时也是我们外出踏青的好时
节。从我们的小作者的字里行间，无不透露出我们的孩子们热爱自然以及走出校门的那份轻
松和喜悦。
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指导教师：杨成东
地址：四川省马边彝族自治县张坝中学
邮编：614600
电话：13438709791
邮箱：mbycd@163.com
篇三:《各区二模作文范文》
应用文(15分):
东城区二模:
第一节（15分）
你申请参加了美国某校今年7月份的夏令营，现在想更改时间。请你根据以下提示给校方写一封信。
1. 表达歉意；
2. 更改到8月份；
3. 解释原因。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir,
I applied for the summer camp in your school. I'm sorry to tell you about some changes. I had planned to attend the camp in July, but now I can’t make it because our school has organized a volunteer activity in the summer vacation. I am interested in it and want to take part in it first. I wonder if I can register for the summer camp in August. I apologize for the inconvenience I have caused. Looking forward to your early reply!
Best wishes！
Sincerely,
Li Hua
第二节（20分）
假设你是红星中学高一（1）班的学生李华，下面四幅图描述了你周末生活方式变化的经过。请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。词数不少于60。
_______________________________________________________________________________
内容要点：
1. 室内玩电脑游戏 2. 身体变化 3. 看医生 4. 户外锻炼
I used to play computer games almost every weekend. Computer games were so appealing to me that I was totally addicted to it. After some time, my eyesight became weak. Meanwhile, I gained a lot of weight. With the situation getting worse, I had to go to see a doctor. The doctor gave me a physical examination and I had my eyes examined as well. The doctor advised me to do
some exercise in the open air as much as possible. To improve my health, I accepted his advice and began to ride bicycle every weekend. And now I’m feeling much better.
海淀二模
第一节 （15分）
你刚刚从美国游学归来，请你给美国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：
1. 告知旅途顺利，你安全到家；
2. 感谢他们一家对你寄宿期间的悉心照顾;
3. 邀请他今年暑假来北京游览，你提供食宿。
注意：1. 词数不少于50。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I had a pleasant journey back from America and I just arrived home safe. I want to thank you and your family for taking such good care of me during my time in America. I would like to return the favour and invite you to come sightseeing in Beijing this summer. You would also be welcome to stay at my home during the visit. I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Joe
第二节
假设你是红星中学的学生会主席李华，最近，你就三个景点进行了“我最喜欢的春游地点”的调查。请根据下面图表提供的信息，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，介绍调查结果，并提出你自己的春游建议。
注意：1. 词数不少于60。
2. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：植物园 botanical garden
喜欢每个春游地点的学生比例及理由
Recently, I have conducted a survey on “My Favorite Spring Outing Spot”.
内容要点
1．16%的学生喜欢去植物园； 2．33%的学生愿意去欢乐谷；
3．51%的学生倾向去妙峰山； 4．你的春游建议。
Recently, I have conducted a survey on“My Favorite Spring Outing Spot”. I aimed to find out the best place for the spring outing.
Only 16% of the students surveyed prefer botanical gardens. The reason they give is that they can get closer to nature, admiring the flowers and appreciating the natural environment.
Even more popular than botanical gardens is the Happy Valley. Not only do they say that the transportation is convenient, but also that it will be a breathtaking experience.
However, the most popular spring outing spot is Miaofeng Mountain, with 51% of the
students choosing it as their preferred place. This is because it will give them a chance to do some outdoor camping and challenge themselves.
According to the results, my suggestion is that we choose Miaofeng Mountain as our spring outing spot.
朝阳二模
你校将组织外国留学生去北京欢乐谷（Beijing Happy Valley）游玩，请你根据下面提供的信息，口头通知活动安排和注意事项。
1. 集合时间和地点：周六早上8:00；学校门口；
2. 交通工具：校车；
3. 提示：自带水和食物；最好穿运动鞋和休闲服。
注意：1. 词数不少于50。
篇四:《大学英语作文范文The Tomb Sweeping Day》
The Tomb Sweeping Day
The tomb sweeping day is one of the traditional festivals in China. On April 5th, people start to visit their ancestors’ tombs. Generally speaking, people will bring the home-made food, some fake money and paper-made mansion to their ancestors. When they start to honour their ancestor, they will light up some candles and incense, put some flowers around the tombs. The most important thing is to put the home-made food in front of the tombs. The food, also known as sacrifices, is usually made up with a chicken, a fish and some pork. It’s a symbol of the offspring’s respect to the ancestors. People believe that the forbears will share the food with them. The children dedicate the food and money to their forbears in order to show their love and caring. The young offspring will go down on their knees and pray for their ancestors. They can say their wishes in front of the tombs and the ancestors will make their dreams come true.
清明节是中国的传统节日之一。从每年的4月5日开始,人们就开始去祭拜自己的祖先。一般来说,人们会带一些自制的食品,冥币和祭品烧给他们的祖先。当人们开始拜祖的时候,就会点燃蜡烛和香火,在坟墓周围挂上鲜花。最重要的事情是把祭祀的食物摆在坟墓前。这些食物,又称之为祭品，通常由一只鸡、一条鱼、一些猪肉组成。这是后代对祖先所表示的一种尊重。人们认为老祖宗会和他们一同分享美食。后代们献上食物和钱财表示他们对先人的爱和关心。晚辈们则会跪在坟前,说出自己的心愿,向先人祷告,让祖宗保佑自己的愿望得以实现。 In some provinces of China, people use different activities to commemorate this day, for instance, spring-outing, swinging, tree planting and making special food. One special food is Ay Tsao rice balls. It looks like Tang-yuan, but its colour is green. Mix the ay tsao juice with the rice powder, then make it into small balls. The Ay Tsao rice ball is done. People believe that eating ay tsao rice balls can get rid of the bad luck and everything will go smoothly. Other activities such as spring outing, tree planting are the other ways to commemorate the forbears. For one thing, it is a sign that people should look into the future and embrace the hope; for another thing, we do hope our ancestor rest in peace.
在中国的某些省份,人们通过举行不同的活动来纪念清明节。例如,春游、荡秋千、植树以及做特殊的食物。其中一种特别的小吃叫艾粑粑。艾粑粑看起来像汤圆,但它的颜色的是绿色的。把艾草汁和糯米粉混合在一起,搓成小球,艾粑粑就做好了。人们认为吃艾粑粑能祛除邪气,让诸事顺利。其余的活动,例如春游、植树都是纪念先人的方式之一。一方面,这些活动告诉人们要展望未来,拥抱希望;另一方面,我们希望先人能安息。
篇五:《作文-正反方观点》
1、最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。
60％的同学认为
1．不应该收门票 2公园是公众休闲的地方 3如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象 40％的同学认为
1．应收门票，但票价不要太高 2．支付园林工人工资 3．购新花木
注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。2．词数：100左右。3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.
With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?
Yours truly, Li Hua
2.春天是旅游的好季节,某外国语学校校长要求各班同学就春游一事展开讨论.讨论的主题是:学校要不要组织学生春游.校长还要求班长就讨论的情况用英语写一封信给他.
假定你是某班班长李华,请你根据下列表格中的信息客观地介绍讨论情况.
注意:1,信的格式已为你写好;2,词数:100左右;3,生词:拓宽 broaden
70%的学生赞成春游
1. 可以领略大自然的优美风景;2. 拓宽视野,增长知识;3. 呼吸新鲜空气,有益于身体健康. 30%的学生反对春游
1. 时间紧,耽误学习;2. 增加父母经济负担;3. 担心安全.
Dear Headmaster,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had on whether the school should Opinions on the question are divided as follows:70% of the students think that the school should organize the spring outing. They believe that the spring outing can make them enjoy the nature's beautiful scenery, which can broaden our vision and fill us with more knowledge. They also say that the air in the open fields is fresher. What's more, fresh air does a lot of good to our health.
On the other hand,30% don't like the idea of going out for a spring outing. In their opinions, time is very precious, so they have to grasp every minute to work hard at their lessons. Traveling costs a lot. In that case, it will add to their families' burden. Above all, no one can be sure of the safety of every student.
Yours truly
Li Hua
3.当前，广东省已经恢复了五一黄金周，有人选择恢复长假，有人则认为没有必要。请你以“Shall we get May Golden Week Back or not”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文： １、 恢复：发展经济，放松心情，探亲访友
２、 不恢复：交通拥挤，商场和风景点人满为患
３、 我的看法和理由
注意：词数100-120，文章题目和开头已给出（不计词数）。
Shall we get May Golden Week Back or not the May Golden Week back because they can take full advantage of the holiday to pay a visit to their favourite attractions and their relatives and friends. Others, however, claim that the practice of getting the week back is of no benefit for the public. Heavy traffic and crowded markets and attractions are the main factors that get them to say no to the May Golden Week.
I believe, with proper planning, we can have a good chance to have a get-together or arrange a family tour. Most of time we bury ourselves into endless work, which causes heavy pressure and burden in our daily life. Having a 7-day holiday, we can have a good rest from the stressful job and refresh ourselves, ready for the next challenge.
4.近来，学生会作了一次调查，发现80%的学生都有在课间和睡前吃零食的习惯，对此不同的学生持着不同的看法。请你根据不同的观点，写一篇英语短文。
一些学生认为：课间吃零食有损班级形象；影响正常三餐饭的食欲且不一定卫生；睡前吃零食导致发胖。
一些学生认为：青少年正处在生长发育时期，应当适当吃点零食，保证体力。
你的观点：……
注意：1.词数 100～120左右。 2. 包含以上要点，可适当发挥。
Some think eating snack in-between classes more or less damages their class image, which, eventually, leaves the classrooms in a mess. Also if the snack-lovers continuously take in snack, they will lose appetite for the three regular meals. Besides, the food bought from the shops is not always healthy. And it is obvious that eating before sleep is the main cause of obesity.
Others insist that it is pretty necessary to have some snack as teenagers are growing so fast that they need nutrition to keep energetic all the time. It is said that constant hunger may lead to a slow mind.
Personally, while I don’t think it good manners to keep filling our stomachs with jungle food, I am in favor of having some bits of bread or fruit to refresh ourselves. But I totally disagree to go to bed with a very full stomach.
篇六:《情景作文附件1》
北京高考作文——情景作文
近几年的北京高考情景作文以图画式为主; 一般由四幅画组成
的组图，同时给出一定的文字说明。
题材主要涉及到学生熟悉或经历的日常生活。
考查学生对图画内容的观察和理解，要求学生有条理，有重点，
生动准确地把图画内容加工成书面语言。
1．图画式作文