篇一:《难忘的吆喝声》
难忘的吆喝声
世界上有各种各样的声音，有悦耳的歌声，有尖厉的噪声，有欢快的笑声„„而我则喜欢那沙哑的吆喝声。
“来喽！补鞋喽„„”“一大清早在那里吆喝，烦死了！”我在床上不禁抱怨起来。这种难听的吆喝声经常打扰本小姐的美梦，得想个十全十美的办法除去才行，不久我便有了一个“好主意”。
放学后，我看见那老头儿还在补鞋，便从垃圾堆里捡了一对破得不能再破的鞋，然后脱了自己的鞋放在书包里，走过去说：“帮我补一下这双鞋。”同时脸上装出难过的表情。那老人抬起头，他的面色是那样的苍白，额头上的皱纹勾勒出一个醒目的“王”字，两鬓是苍苍的白发。他笑了一笑，说道：“这双鞋你是怎么弄破的？”我只好支支吾吾地说：“是刚才上体育课时弄破的。”“怎样？没摔着吧。”我一时不知该说什么好。他接着说道：“这双鞋得明天才能修好。现在已经晚了，孩子，你该回家了。明天再来拿吧！”看他那认真的样子，我偷偷笑着走开了。
到了第二天，为了不让他看见我，我便绕了路去上学。放学了，我看见他的东西还在那里摆着，人却不见了。一连几天，我都没有去拿那双鞋。
“来喽！补鞋喽„„”不久后的一天清早传来的这熟悉的吆喝声唤醒了我，使我很快没有了睡意。我起床往窗外一看，老人仍然在那儿补着鞋，他看起来更加消瘦了，脸色好像也更苍白了。此时，我的眼睛湿润了，不知是因为老人的辛勤，还是因为自己捉弄他的行为感到羞耻。我再也看不下去了，急忙冲下楼去取那双鞋。他一见我就说：“孩子，你的鞋我已经补好了，这几天总不见你来拿，是忘了带钱吧？呵呵，没关系，我帮你们学生补鞋是不要钱的，拿着，可得好好读书啊！”听完他的话，我关心地问：“老大爷，您没事吧？”“没事。”他笑道。然后我依依不舍地走开了。
鞋补好了，看着这双鞋我仿佛看到了老大爷日夜辛劳的身影。
“来喽！补鞋喽„„”我永远也忘不了这吆喝声。
篇二:《巴中雅思8分万能作文》
智课网IELTS备考资料
巴中雅思8分万能作文
雅思写作是雅思考试中比较难搞的一部分，考得雅思写作高分，通常需要扎实的基础和得当的方法，如果考生具备其中之一就有可能考得高分。有时参照优秀范文也可以帮你获得一些高分灵感。下面是智课教育小编为大家整理的巴中雅思8分万能作文。
雅思8分范文
Topic：Water resources around the world are falling deficient. Analyze the possible reasons and provide your suggestions.
范文：
Access to water is vital to every living creature on the planet. Despite the fact that approximately two thirds of the earth surface is covered with all forms of water bodies, countries worldwide are faced with different levels of water shortages. Some reasons can be cited to explain the emergence of this problem.{巴中的吆喝声作文}.{巴中的吆喝声作文}.
前两句简要介绍文章写作背景，第三句既承接前两句又为下面正文做了铺垫，引出下文。作文首段一般需要简要介绍写作背景和简单描述个人立场。
A trigger for water crisis is people’s lack of knowledge of the value of the water. Given the ready availability of water in many countries, people tend to believe that the reserve of water in the world is infinite. Notwithstanding the
increased expenditure on water supply, water is perceived as a cheap commodity by many families. Many people see water a perpetual resource. For this reason, the unbridled use of water is commonplace, accelerating the exhaustion of this valuable resource.
第一句话是段落的中心句，后文为展开论述支持论点。第二三四句话讲的是人类对水资源重要性的认识是如何的缺乏，最后一句话是前面论述的逻辑推论，句与句之间逻辑性强, 连接顺畅。
Rapid population growth is another force contributing to the water crisis. Not only does it reduce the amount of water available for manufacture, farming and households, but also has a profound effect on the sustainability of aquatic ecosystems. Massive urban and industrial growth fuels unprecedented demands, often at the expense of aquatic ecosystems. Many water resources are not replenished before being re-used and depleted.
第一句话是段落的中心句。后面的分句逐层论述为什么人口增长助长了水资源危机。使用了not only ……but also 的句式，巧妙地连接两个原因。
Human-induced pollution is worthy of concern as well, a factor regarded by many as the root cause of the rapid loss of drinkable water. The untreated discharge of various pollutants such as heavy metals, organic toxins, oils and solids in water bodies is believed to have severe impacts. Industrialization, meanwhile, results in abnormal climate and
biological destruction. While some areas have become barren, other areas are hit by floods. Floods ravage everything, including reservoirs, dams and cannel. The water supply problem will intensify.
同样第一句话是段落的中心句。第二句和第三句例举了人为原因引起的污染，四五句给出了这些不合理人类行为的后果。最后一句表明问题趋势。
这三段是文章的主体部分，在一般情况下，原因通常可以归分成三段。一般来说最重要的，最有说服力的原因应该放在第一段，第二段第三段的重要性依次降低。这样可以使文章具有逻辑性和层次性。每段的段首用一句话简明的概括本段的中心论点。接着对每段的主体句进行支持性论述，分别使用了推理和例证的方法。这样不仅段落之间逻辑严密，段落内部也逻辑明朗，使文章整体富有说服力。文章注重了长短句的变换，富有节奏感。表示同一个意思时作者也变换了不同的表达方式以增加文采：如表达……的原因时使用了“a trigger for…., another force contributing to…, worthy of concern as well”。
As noted above, the steady loss of water is attributable to inappropriate usage, population growth and pollution. In order to tackle the above-mentioned problems, one can adopts various approaches, besides the existing strategies, such as restoration of ecosystems, rainwater harvest. New technologies can help ease water shortages, by tackling pollution and making used water recyclable. In agriculture, water use can be made far more efficient by introducing new farming techniques (e.g. drip irrigation). Drought-resistant plants can help cut the amount of water needed.
按照逻辑顺序，分析原因之后应该提出对策，文章最后一部分即对策部分。作者用 “As noted above……”承上启下，接下来用举例的方式给出对策。
总评：本文逻辑清晰，使用总分结构，这种结构是比较容易借鉴的。虽然使用的都是常见词汇，没有华丽的高深词汇，但是通过变换句式和表达方法使文章很富有文采，这也是可以借鉴的。大家只要在平时的雅思写作练习中有意识的注意这两点是可以掌握的。
尾段：再次亮明观点 提出建议
雅思写作题目：
Some people believe that personal happiness is directly related to economic success.
Others believe there are other factors.
Discuss the two sides and give your opinion.
雅思写作范文：
The pursuit of happiness has long been the dream of generations of human beings. They have always been puzzled Get Word ("puzzled"); by the essence of happiness. What is happiness? Is it closely related to one’s economic success? Will one’s financial success lead to happiness directly? Personally Get Word ("Personally"), I don’t agree that one’s economic success is the only prerequisite of one’s happiness in life.{巴中的吆喝声作文}.
对幸福的追求一直都是人类世世代代的梦想，尽管人类一直困惑于幸福的真谛。幸福是什么?幸福和经济的成功有密切联系吗?个人经济上的成功能够直接带来幸福吗?就个人而言，我不认为经济上的成功是人类幸福的唯一前提。
Happiness may fall into different categories Get Word ("categories");. An old saying goes like this: “One man’s meat is another man’s poison”. Happiness may mean being a successful and respected leader of a company, or a stable and comfortable job in a large international company, or a big flat downtown, a fantastic set of furniture, etc. However, happiness can also be a harmonious and peaceful family, or a hospitable and considerate friend, or just a smile, a gesture, a hint. In fact, happiness may be composed of anything you could ever think of. At least, we may have two types of happiness: [wv]spiritualGetWord("hospitable and considerate friend, or just a smile, a gesture, a hint. In fact, happiness may be composed of anything you could ever think of. At least, we may have two types of happiness:
[wv]spiritual"); happiness and materialistic happiness.
幸福有很多种。俗话说得好，“一个人的美食可能是另一个人的毒药”。幸福可能意味着成为一个成功的受人尊敬的领袖，或是一份稳定舒适的大型跨国公司的工作，又或是市区的大房子、一套漂亮的家具等等。然而，幸福也可以是一个和谐平静的家庭，或是一个体贴热情的朋友，或者只是一个微笑、一个手势、一个暗示。事实上，幸福可以是你能够想到的任何事情。至少，我们可以有两种幸福：精神幸福和物质幸福。
One’s materialistic happiness is dependant on one’s economic success, though not completely. Without a strong and steady economic background, one could never imagine an easy and simple life, let alone an affluent and luxurious one. If you aren’t able to afford a house, a car, or even a book, anybody would be horrified at the mere mention of this kind of life. Definitely, some people will feel happy right away if their basic demands for life are satisfied. However, we have to admit that these people still need to be successful materialisticallyGetWord("materialistically"); to some degree.
一方面，一个人的物质幸福依赖于经济上的成功，尽管不是完全依赖。没有稳定的经济后盾，很难想象如何过上轻松简单的生活，更不用说富庶奢侈的生活了。如果买不起房子、车，甚至是一本书，任何人提到这种生活都会害怕。当然，有一些人只要基本的生活需求得到满足就可以立刻感到很幸福。但是我们仍然必须承认，这些人也需要某种意义上的经济成功。
On the other hand, one’s success in economy may not necessarily lead to one’s spiritual happiness. As we all know, money doesn’t get you everything and some even say that money is the root of all evilsGetWord("evils");. One’s
financial success may be built on the sacrifice of time, health and love, which are the three most essential elements of spiritual happiness. All of us are not new to this picture: a successful business man tasting loneliness alone with a broken heart.
另一方面，个人经济上的成功不见得能带来精神层面的幸福。众所周知，金钱不能带来一切，甚至有人说金钱是万恶之源。经济上的成功可能就是建立在牺牲时间、健康和爱情的基础之上，而这三件事情是个人精神层面幸福的基本要素。我们对于这个画面并不陌生：一位职场成功的男士带着一颗破碎的心独自品味孤独。
In my point of view, one’s economic success is only one of the key factors of happiness, but never the only one. To be happy, one needs to be both spiritually and materially satisfied Get Word ("satisfied"); though each of us may have a totally different picture of happiness.{巴中的吆喝声作文}.{巴中的吆喝声作文}.
以我的观点，经济上的成功只是幸福的一个重要因素，但绝对不是唯一因素。尽管我们每一个人对于幸福有完全不同的理解，要幸福就要精神上和物质上都能得到满足。
Generally speaking, gun is recognized as a emblem of power and justice of police. It is clear that a police with gun on is able to prevent those potential criminal activities. For instance, a pistol on the belt works effectively to stop crimes range from those robbery, theft, and rape and it can also force the criminals to be arrested.
雅思写作8分范文
大作文：some people say the purpose of education is to prepare individuals to be useful adults for society. Others say the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions.Do you agree or disagree?
我的观点是教育的短期目标是实现学生技能和思维能力的提升，从而实现个人梦想;而终极是必然是为了服务于社会，甚至人本身存在的意义就是在于服务社会。教育只是一种手段，而人更多的是通过实现个人目标而对社会有意。
My personal answer to the purpose of education is that students and teaching staff should hold critical attitudes. It means that education involves the temporary and ultimate goals. The ultimate goal of education is the service of society. However, whether or not achieving it should take the accomplishment of personal goals as the prerequisite.
On one hand, students are expecting to acquire the survival skills with the aid of schooling training in the professional skills and thinking abilities. Personal ambitions also consist of the access to their preferred working fields and the progression in the professional fields. Besides, they finally win the social respect and acknowledgement.
至于教育是否应该为社会提供服务为标准，答案是多样的。而我坚定的认为，个人目标的实现和对社会有好处总体上并不矛盾。毕业生也只有通过找到好的工作，获得体面的工作，才能发挥才干，比如成为一个杰出的建筑师的同时，个人获得了很好的薪水，对于社会做出了一定的贡献，设计更多的建筑物，满足居住和审美的需求。
When it comes to whether or not taking the social service to the society as the education goal,views differed greatly. However, I firmly believe that the accomplishment of personal wishes does not contradict to the willingness to the service of society. Graduates have to acquire the decent jobs, reasonable salary and social respect first and
simultaneously contribute to the society. Take the excellent architects as an example, they design the fashionable structures for people’s living and aesthetic demand while they can acquire adecent income as well.
当然，也存在一些个人利益与社会利益发生的冲突的时候，有效的教育应该培养他们优先考虑社会利益的思维。比如官员的贪污行为，商人的不择手段。如果教育能够在这便是成功的教育.
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篇三:《巴中中考作文范例及点评》
巴中
你是我心中最美丽的风景
母亲啊，你是荷叶，我是红莲，当心中的风雨来了，谁是我无遮拦天空下的庇荫。
——冰心
尽管岁月无情的把道道深痕镶在您的眼角，一双柳眉也荒芜不堪，但只要有您，我便看到世上最美的风景。
那曾是怎样的一对眉啊！柳叶的弯俏，新月的娇媚，尽展女性之柔美。那一年，刚上幼儿园的我，牵着您的手路过超市，售货员阿姨还喊：“小莉，你姐送你上学呀？”
“不，”我自豪地说，“这是我妈妈。”心里那个美呦。
“呦，真年轻„„”背后留下一串赞叹。
就是这双俏眉，伴着一双慧眼，洞察我成长中的一切喜怒哀乐，成功与不足，给予我鼓励，给予我鞭策，使我能在这十几年的奋斗中走稳每一步。
尽管时光无情地把根根银线植入您的鬓边，满头青丝也日渐离休，但只要有您，我便看到世上最美的风景。
那曾是怎样的一幅画面啊！秀发随风飘扬，如新柳垂下千万条绿色丝绦，装点出天地间最美的景色。那一年，我已读六年级，尽管已经到了自以为长大的年龄，您仍然几年如一日地接送我往返于家校之间。对于您的施爱，我已习惯地接受，因为每天的早晚，校园外要么卷发飞舞，要么直发轻垂的你都是一道最靓丽的风景。
正是有了您的陪伴，我才更勤奋更刻苦地读书，来实现当年您未
圆的求学梦。
尽管生活无情地残蚀了您的青春，尽管您腰渐弯、腿渐曲、色渐改、容渐老，但，您当年的俏眉杏目长发纤腰早已在女儿的记忆中定格，这不仅仅是一幅蒙娜丽莎般的肖像画，更是我心中永远最美丽的风景！
满分理由：本文的突出特点之一：开篇点题。直接引用冰心关于母爱的名言来揭示文章主旨，意即母爱之伟大。突出特点之二：连续的生活画面展示了母亲的变化，她的变化正是为孩子付出全部真爱的结果，从而进一步表现主题。突出特点之三：记叙、描写、抒情等多种表达方式的综合运用使行文有美感，有美情，有美味！{巴中的吆喝声作文}.
烟台
敬畏生命
聪明的人类：
一向可好？
我是一只鸟，听说今日又有城镇被洪水洗过，又有粮食基地干渴难耐，我真不知是喜还是忧。
我是一只鸟，一只早已无家可归的鸟。爸爸临终前对我说：“孩子，一定要躲开一种叫做人的动物，遇见他们你性命难保„„”没等我明白过来，他就掩着枪伤永远离开了我和妈妈。
接下来的一切就都是妈妈伤痛的记述。
那一年，爸爸的爸爸的爸爸，带着全家在一个树木葱茏、山清水秀的地方安了家。成鸟白天出去觅食，夜里回来尽享天伦，一家鸟过得安然自在。
可是，不久，有一群人到林子里来了，围着一些粗壮的树叽里呱啦地说着人话。又不久，锯声四起，凡是他们看中的树全部应声倒地。那棵载着我先祖的家和梦的老树也被拖进了火柴厂„„
到了父母养育我们的年代，树光了，山秃了，水尽了，沙尘肆虐，石滚山崩„„四海之内竟无一处可以让我们鸟族得以安身立命。眼见我已到了婚龄，却仍在忍饥挨饿，到处流浪，天哪，这让我何以养家？
聪明的人类啊，不仅我们鸟类这样，据我了解，地球上每一秒钟都有一个物种走向灭绝，这罪魁祸首是谁？就是你们这所谓高智商的人类！
聪明的人类啊，我常常带着饥饿与疲倦飞在高空，用以躲避人类无情的枪口，也正因为有了这个高度，才让我有幸俯瞰你们的世界，才让我有幸目睹地震、泥石流、洪水、干旱、传染病，以及灾难中你们那难以捉摸的表情：是痛苦无奈，还是忧郁悲哀？是反思顿悟，还是冥想对策？
聪明的人类啊，你们总标榜自己要珍爱生命、敬畏生命，与自然和谐共处，不要让地球上的最后一滴水成为自己的眼泪，可是，你们做到了吗？
常冠以自己为万物之灵长的人类啊，救救我们，权当是救救孩子！
一只流浪鸟
2011年×月×日
满分理由：首先，考生做到了文体的创新，用书信体，以鸟的口吻来写《敬畏生命》，如泣如诉，发人深省；其次，同样是“环保”作品，该考生通过鸟的道白把人类破坏自然的行径暴露无遗，手法新颖，视觉独特；另外，构思精巧，由鸟及万物，由鸟的无家可归到众多生物的灭绝，警示人类救救孩子，从而揭示文章主旨。
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