【第一篇】美丽章丘我的家作文
我的家乡济南我的家乡济南作文
【第一我的家乡济南
我的家在济南。济南的风景非常美，古人就有“四面荷花三面柳，一城山色半城湖”的诗句，就是说济南有山有水，景色优美。最著名的山是千佛山，最有名的水是大明湖。 济南又被称为“泉城”。为什么说济南是“泉城”呢？下面，就让我给大家介绍介绍吧。 济南有著名的“七十二名泉”，比如趵突泉、黑虎泉、珍珠泉、百脉泉、金线泉、漱玉泉，等等。就说最著名的趵突泉吧：那里面有三个泉眼，水大的时候，泉水就从泉眼喷到几十厘米高的空中，紧接着又从四周落下来，就想秋天盛开的菊花一样，可美呢！清澈的泉池里还有许多绚丽多彩的鱼儿欢快地游着，我最喜欢到泉边喂鱼了。泉底还有许多从地下咕噜咕噜冒出来的小水泡，就像一串串的珍珠。趵突泉还是“天下第一泉”呢，我爱趵突泉，因为它是七十二名泉之首。 五龙潭公园里的泉水也非常多，连石板路的石缝里都能咕噜咕噜地冒出好多小泉水来，石板路都淹在水里了，水凉凉的、清清的，我们小朋友最爱在那里踩水玩了。妈妈经常给我带着替换的衣服领我到那里玩，因为我们经常滑倒在水里湿了衣服，但是我们还是玩的非常开心！ 我为我生活在被称为“泉城”的地方感到自豪。 我爱我的家乡，更爱家乡的泉。
【第二我的家乡济南
济南自古以来是一个风光胜地，曾有“家家泉水、户户垂柳”的美誉。朝气勃勃的趵突泉，冒个不断。宏伟壮观的千佛山，清亮见底的大明湖，如两颗明珠隐瞒在这片大地上，用“四周荷花三面柳，一城山色半城湖”来形容她，真是太形象不外了！网 小学 我的老家被人们称为“泉城”，由于在她这个“百宝箱”里，有七十二颗珍珠，它们老是闪闪发光，照亮了整个“百宝箱”，在她内里最亮的一颗珍珠就是“趵突泉”，她有三股泉水，个中一股最大，冒出的泉水一波接着一波，就像一个大车轮，因此得名“趵突泉”。古代词人李清照曾经住在这里，她昔时洗漱过的处所，其后人们把它叫做“漱玉泉”，多好听的名字啊！在趵突泉的周围尚有很多小泉，如“卧牛泉”、“珍珠泉”、“白石泉”、“黑虎泉”等等，在她们的装点下，济南变得越发璀璨锦绣。 老舍曾写了很多关于济南的文章，《济南的春天》《济南的秋日》《济南的冬天》《三个月来的济南》《趵突泉》、小说《大明湖》等。老舍爷爷的“第二家园”便就是济南，他把一个山川奇丽的济南，活脱脱地写进他的散文里。 济南的小吃大概多呢。像较量闻名的即是泉城大包，草包包子 ，孟家扒蹄 ，名人多烤全羊，油旋等等，来济南的话，必然要尝一尝济南的风味小吃。 听妈妈讲，已往的济南与“泉城”这个美称很不相当，就拿我们住的处所——南辛庄来说，在妈妈上高中时照旧一片低矮的平房，这儿的马路很窄，最多只能容得下一辆小车通过，每年都要产生很多交通事情。 此刻可纷歧样了，我们的南辛庄已被改建成南辛小区了，一片片的楼房拔地而起，楼前楼后就像花圃一样大度，有瑰丽的草坪、喷泉、尚有人们休闲娱乐的康健器械等。笔挺的马路不只变宽了，交错路口处都装上了红绿灯、监控器等，马路两旁的集市不见了，此刻栽上了高峻挺拔的松树，马路中间的垃圾也没有了，此刻改成了交通安详指示线，每年产生的交通事情也在逐年降落，马路上竟然有序，再也没有喧闹声了。市区的高速公路也建起来了，高等的汽车也开进了我们的家庭。 济南，一座古色古香的都市，一座瑰丽的泉城，这即是我的老家，它的名字，叫做济南。
【第三我的家乡济南
济南是我的故乡，它时时刻刻都印在我的心中。 我喜欢济南的夜晚，每当那一轮玉盘高高地挂在天幕时，皎洁的月光总会倒映在水面上，把粉嫩嫩的荷花衬托的更加美丽动人，犹如那白雪公主在睡梦中一般的秀气和高贵。微风缓缓的吹过，那长长的柔软的柳枝，随风飘动着，婀娜的舞姿，是那么美，那么自然。当柳枝在水面上画着粼粼的波纹时，流水也唱和着，发出悦耳的声音。 记得济南的大明湖有这样一句话：“四面荷花三面柳，一城山色半城湖”。出淤泥而不染的荷花配上拥有优美舞姿的垂柳，加上风景宜人的大明湖，这样美好而又优美的景色怎能不令人陶醉呢？ 济南拥有美丽的七十二名泉，其中，趵突泉是济南的一大亮点。每到冬天，趵突泉上就会出现一层蒙蒙的雾气，就像一朵朵软软的云彩围绕着泉水，让我永远无法忘记！ 我爱我的家乡，不管我走到哪里，它永远都深深印在我的心里！当我走到别处看到流水时，我总会想起家乡那美丽的趵突泉！可能家乡的景色不如别处的景色优美，但在我心中，济南才是最美丽最优雅的地方。 我爱我的家乡，济南！
【第四我的家乡济南
我的家乡在济南，这里风光秀丽、景色宜人。济南有七十二名泉，有趵突泉、黑虎泉、百脉泉、玉泉等，我最喜欢的是黑虎泉。 黑虎泉因“水激柱石、声如虎啸”而得名。从远处看，三个石雕虎头气势汹汹，巨大的银色水柱从虎口喷涌而出，直泄入池中，激起层层白色水花，十分壮观。黑虎泉里的水清澈见底，清的能看见沉积池底的沙粒和水草，水中有一些美丽的金鱼在嬉戏、玩耍。黑虎泉的水不仅清澈而且清凉甘甜，这吸引了许多的人来打水。他们有的拿着油桶，有的提着水壶，甚至有人直接拿饮料瓶来接水，喝上一口泉水顿时让人神清气爽。 琵琶泉是黑虎泉群之一，这里的水十分柔和。泉底不断地冒出串串水泡，升到水面时破裂，发出丝丝的响声，夜深人静时听，很像琵琶的声音，故称琵琶泉。 这就是黑虎泉，我家乡的泉。欢迎你们来做客！
【第五我的家乡济南
记得有句老话说：金窝银窝，都不如自己的草窝。而我的草窝，就是美丽泉城—济南。 济南泉水历史悠久，七十二名泉，甘。美。济南泉水，有的“水涌若轮”，有的像瀑布倾泻，有的如串串珍珠，有的似细雨飘洒，真是千姿百态。有的泉水流经千家万户，大街小巷，或穿墙流入庭院，或临窗便可取水，别具情趣。“郭边万户皆临水。”整个泉城沉浸在泉水淙淙，杨柳婀娜，鸟语花香，诗情画意之中。 春天的济南像穿上了一件万紫千红的艳装。你瞧！树枝上已微微露出了一些青色，一串串杜鹃花嫣红姹紫，窗子外面开始听得见唧唧的鸟鸣了，那是小鸟正在唱着春天的歌儿呢！下过一阵雨后，在我家乡的田园里，万物生辉，美极了。在阳光的照耀下，家乡的小溪显得更加清澈，微波荡漾，泛着金色的光。春天的家乡显得生机勃勃，富有活力。 秋天的济南像换上金红色的庄严的晚礼服。家乡的田野里，到处是金红的果子。大街两旁的树叶，萧萧地落下，发出"簌簌''的响声。家乡的秋天是成熟的季节，是收获的季节，是充实的季节，也是播种的季节。 冬天的济南盖上了朴素的雪白长袍。在家乡小镇的街道上到处是雪，电线杆上也结了冰。下雪了，雪像柳絮一样，像芦花一样飘落下来，美极了。雪停了，村子的屋顶上，篱笆上，木棚上，到处都覆盖着一层雪。这真是一幅美丽的雪景。 这就是我的家乡—济南，它没有“桂林山水甲天下”的名声，也没有“上有天堂，下有苏杭”的美誉。但是，它有“泉水之城”的“头衔”。它是独一无二的，是我心中最美的地方，我爱我的家乡。
【第六我的家乡济南
我的家乡济南，它以泉水而闻名于天下，有“泉城”之美誉，是一座非常美丽的城市。 白天，登上美丽的千佛山往下看，有许多高楼大厦，护城河两岸有成行的绿柳，有绿绿的草坪，马路上来来往往的汽车在奔跑，热闹非凡。 在西边趵突泉位于济南的中心位置，居72名泉之首。趵突泉又叫槛泉，据说已有二千七百年的历史。泉水一年四季恒定在摄氏１８度左右，即便到了严冬，水面上水气袅袅，薄雾冥冥，一边是泉池波光粼粼，一边是亭台楼阁，飞彩流丹，构成了一幅奇妙的人间仙境图。历代著名文学家、哲学家、诗人诸如曾巩、苏轼、张养浩、王守仁、蒲松龄等都忍不住在此留下美文以志之。进入趵突泉公园，未到泉边，那趵突喷涌的声音就会响彻耳畔。泉池中央三股泉水喷涌而出，高约半米，水势强劲，声音洪亮，很壮观。金色的鲤鱼悠然自得地穿行其间，像片片红云落入水中，又像朵朵落花飘在水面。到了冬天就更好看了，泉上起了一片热气，白而轻软，在深绿的长的水藻上飘荡着，不由你不想起一种似乎神秘的境界。听妈妈说前几年这里的泉都不喷了，所以我们一定人节约用水，不然的话我们就看不到泉水了！ 除了趵突泉，公园内还散布着漱玉泉、金线泉、柳絮泉、马跑泉等很多名泉。 另外，在济南的东边城郊还星罗棋布的着许多泉，章丘的百脉泉群尤为引人注目。 去年我就和刘先晴等几个同学去了百脉泉, 那里的泉群喷涌得也很厉害! 在济南的北边有大明湖。大明湖风景秀丽，清雅迷人。岸上花繁树茂，杨柳依依；湖中碧波粼粼，小舟点点穿梭，夏天更有大片的荷花竞相开放。我和爸爸曾经泛舟湖上，感觉就象在画中一样。有空也请全国的小朋友来美丽的泉城济南玩吧! 我爱我的家乡——济南。
【第七我的家乡济南
我的家乡在济南。它是一座美丽的城市。这里有七十二大名泉，所以也有“泉城”之称。 济南的名胜古迹可多啦！趵突泉、五龙潭、大明湖……让人流连忘返。 特别值得一提的还有芙蓉街，到处都是卖小吃的，有羊肉串、糖葫芦、米线……川流不息的人群，各种济南名吃，一派繁荣的景象。我和爸爸妈妈也在那里饱餐了一顿，味道非常棒。 我的家乡济南真是个好地方。
【第八我的家乡济南
我的家乡济南，是个美丽富饶的地方。家乡的湖叫“大明湖”，湖里荷花繁多，碧绿的荷叶上，嫩黄的花蕊旁，闪亮着晶莹的露珠，湖边环绕着翠绿的柳树，春风吹来，柳枝就像一片绿色的云，使大明湖显得异常美丽。这就是著名的“四面荷花三面柳，一城春色半城湖”。要是天气晴朗，在湖里会看见一座山的倒影，这座山叫“千佛山”，山上有许多的大佛，据说一共有一千个佛呢！要是在有雾的天气里，你在千佛山顶就会看见著名的“齐烟九点”这梦幻般的景象。每当夜幕降临，在千佛山上就会看见那灯火通明的泉城广场，就像镶嵌在泉城上的一颗巨大的夜明珠。还有那美丽的经十路，好像一条闪闪发光的项链。
【第二篇】美丽章丘我的家作文
我的家乡坐落在美丽的章丘今年暑假，我随妈妈回家乡探亲。我的家乡坐落在镇里一个偏僻的地方。那里山不高， 水不清，没有引人入胜的名胜古迹，所以，这只是一个普通而小的村庄。
然而，这次回到家乡，家乡的土，家乡的地，家乡的人，家乡的一切都变化了，短短三年时间，家乡变化了，再也不是我认识的家乡了。 一进村口，就看见那笔直而平坦的水泥路通向村中心。这条路变了，它再也不是以前那崎岖不平的小路了，但让我大吃一惊只是开始而已。随着那条路我们来到了村中心。“哇！”我禁不住喊了一声，但眼前的情景，真是我所意料不到的—一座座新修的瓦房，两三屋的小楼房代替了那残旧的平房，还有几处鸡鸭满地跑的养殖场，摩托车在村里满街跑。真是一派繁荣而兴旺的景象，
然后，我开始独自走在变了的家乡。离开养鸡场不远，便听见一个熟悉的声音在叫我，我闻声而去，是以前的好朋友小希。他给我们打招呼后，便拉着我的手，说要让我参观他那“变”了的家。这次，我来到她家一看，新修的瓦房，花园似的小院子里，并排着两辆新自行车。小华说：“这两辆自行车是我和我哥哥的。”我也高兴地说：“小华，以前你多么盼望骑上自行车啊！现在终于如愿以偿了。小华说着领我进屋，随手打开录音机放起流行音乐来。
当我和小华一边听音乐边说话时，一个瘦小的老头闯了进来，沙哑地问道：“小华，你哥呢？我约他下午浇水去。”“我哥没回来，回来后我就让他去找你。”这时，瘦老头发现了我，说：“是彤彤吧，什
么时候回来的？”我才认出他原来是村里的李老头，以前他是村里的神汉，专耍神骗鬼，就只简短的回答：“刚回来。”便心不在焉地转过头去。不久，李老头走了。小华告诉我，原来李老头不当神汉了，他变了。我听了后，想到连他也变了，真是不可思议啊！
不久，我告别了小华，心里感到特别高兴。一天的时间眨眼间过去了，我和妈妈走在那通至村口的路上，我回头看见那新瓦房、楼房，望着那养殖场，听着那喧闹的人声，从内心感叹：“变了，家乡的一切都变了，这都是党的富民政策引起的变化。”
【第三篇】美丽章丘我的家作文
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我的家乡在桐庐，桐庐是个美丽的地方。这里山清水秀人杰地灵。
桐庐的山好高好高，一座挨着一座，层层叠叠。山上的树木郁郁葱葱。
桐庐的水很清。一条分水江和一条富春江，围绕着桐庐，清清的江水倒映着青山绿树。江上小船点点，河里有很多鱼，鱼儿肥壮。山山水水构成了许多美丽的旅游景点，尤其是颇有名气的瑶琳洞，吸引了不少游客来观光旅游。美丽的山水哺育了桐庐勤劳的人民。一条条宽阔的马路纵横交错，马路两旁耸立着一座座高楼。路上人来人往，车水马龙。
我爱我的家乡：美丽地桐庐!
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我的家乡在遥远的小山村，那里风光秀丽，春天百花盛开，尤其是那些白白的梨花，就像雪花一样挂在树枝上，一股山泉汩汩的流到村庄里各家各户的水缸里，村边一条小溪一条条小鱼欢快的游着。山上有许多竹笋，爷爷经常上山拔给我吃，还有那些说不出名字的野果呢。
我爱我的家乡!
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我的家乡在中国的济南，济南的章丘，是一个美丽的地方。
我的家乡不但有好玩的地方，而且还有许多好吃点特产。比如说：天下奇观百脉泉，连外国人都来看;明清古村朱家峪，《闯关东。》就是在这里拍摄的，景色可美了!说完好玩的再说好吃的：章丘大葱蘸酱吃可香了，黄家烤肉炖豆腐香极了欢迎你们来章丘做客。
我的家乡真美呀!我爱我的家乡。
【第四篇】美丽章丘我的家作文
山东省章丘市2016高考英语二轮复习 短文选练(3)山东章丘市2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）选练（3）
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以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
On May 25, 1944, Roosevelt was re-elected the President of the United 76.______
States for the four time. A journalist interviewed him and asked, “How 77. ______
do you feel now?” Roosevelt smiled without answering any words, and 78._______
treated the journalist with three small sandwiches. The journalist failed 79. ______
to understand Roosevelt’s point, but felt honor, so he picked 80. _______
up the sandwich to eat. What he wasn’t hungry, he managed to 81. _______
finish all three sandwiches. Roosevelt picked up the 4th sandwich and 82. ______
asked him to eat it as well. The journalist looked embarrassing. 83. _______
So Roosevelt said, “I think I don’t need answer the question you’ve 84. _______美丽章丘我的家作文
risen, for you have had your own experience now.” 85. _______
【参考答案】1、
短文改错 （共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。 Dear Sir,
How are you? As an exchange student, I am writing to 66. ________________ tell you I would prefer to move into a single room in next 67. ________________ term, as I found it inconvenient to share a room with others.
My roommate often holds parties at night, made much noise.
Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturbs me
a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem. If
you think in my position, I am sure he will agree that the
68. ________________ 69. ________________ 70. ________________ 71. ________________ 72. ________________ 73. ________________ 74. ________________ 75. ________________
only solution for me is get a room of my own, one not in the
same building and as near to the school campus as possible.
I would be thankfully if you could do me the favor.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【参考答案】2. 66. 正确
67. 去掉in 68. found-find
73. is后加to
69. made-making 70. that-which 71. attentions-attention 74. and-but
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
72. he-you
75. thankfully-thankful
下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend / weekend with you．Luckily I was the am
completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”．I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8
pm in Friday
on
evening．
Harvey had eight umbrellas but they were all broken．He decided have them repaired．He took the
umbrellas to the shop and left them here．The shopkeeper said, “They’ll be ready tomorrow．”
That evening Harvey went home from a office by bus．He sat next to an old woman．She had an
umbrella on the floor between the seat．When the bus reached his stop, he picked up her umbrella
and standing up．“Hey!” the woman said, “That umbrella belonged to me．” “I’m so sorry．”
Harvey said, giving it to him．“Please excuse me by taking your umbrella by mistake．” The next
day he was collected the umbrellas and got on the bus and saw the same woman．As he sat down,
she said, “You have certain had a successful day!” 【参考答案】3.
Harvey had eight umbrellas but they were all broken．He decided∧ have them repaired．He took
to
the umbrellas to the shop and left them here．The shopkeeper said, “They’ll be ready
tomorrow．”
there
That evening Harvey went home from a office by bus．He sat next to an old woman．She had an
the
umbrella on the floor between the seat．When the bus reached his stop, he picked up her umbrella
seats美丽章丘我的家作文
and standing up “Hey!” the woman said, “That umbrella belonged to me．” “I’m so sorry．”Harvey
stood belongs
said, giving it to him．“Please excuse me by taking your umbrella by mistakenext day he was
her for
collected the umbrellas and got on the bus and saw the same woman．As he sat down,
she said,
“You have certain had a successful day!” certainly
假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Thanks very much for your story. The plot is very touched. OK, now listen to me carefully. It’s very funny. One day, a young man was going from house to house on his street so he wanted to introduced him to all his new neighbors. Outside one house,
【第五篇】美丽章丘我的家作文
山东省章丘市2016高考英语二轮复习 短文选练(1)山东章丘市2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）选练（1）
1.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Playing the violin was once one of my dream．Because of lack of practice and playing skills，I did it very bad in the beginning and was often laughing at by other students．Gradually，I lost confidence to myself and wanted to give up．But my teacher told me．“Nothing was easy．Struggle is a vital part of our life．”Heard that，I pushed myself harder and began making a rapid progress．Eventually，I won the first place in a violin competition．
From his experience．I’ve learned a lesson that it is struggle which leads us to success．As long as we don’t give up and learn from our mistakes，we are sure overcome whatever difficulties we’re faced with．
【参考答案】1
、
2.短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有十处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该词下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意；1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词，
2．只允许修改10处错误，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is known to all that nothing is much precious than time. A famous saying goes,
“Time is money”, which shows that time is invaluable. When time is gone, it will never return back. But it is pity that some people didn’t make full use of their time. They spend a lot of time sleep, chatting or playing computer game. They don’t realize that wasting time is actual equal to killing themselves. We always regret not having made great achievements. However, to be successful, they should first form the habit of being on time. Don’t put down what can be done today until tomorrow. Being lazy will eventually lead to failure.
【参考答案】2. It is known to all that nothing is much precious than time. A famous saying goes,
more
“ Time is money”, which shows that time is invaluable. When time is gone, it
will never
return back. But it is∧pity that some people didn`t make full use of their time.
They spend a
划掉back a don`t lot of time sleep, chatting or playing computer game. They don`t realize that
wasting time is
sleeping games actual equal to killing themselves. We always regret not having made great
achievements.
actually They
However, to be successful, they should first form the habit of being on time. Don`t put down
Therefore Off
3.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
I saw a traffic accident on my way home on last night. A car hit a motorbike. The motorbike driver badly hurt and sent to hospital. After a while, the traffic police came. Under the help of the people who witnessed the accident, the police found out a truth. The driver of the car was drinking and his car went out of control. At last he was taken to the police station. All the people there think the car driver was to blame for this accident.
Which is reported in the news reports, drunk driving causes many people lose their lives, such as the accident that happened in Hangzhou and Chengdu. It is high time that we prevent drunk driving.
【参考答案】3.
【小题1】第二个on 去掉 【小题2】badly前加was
【小题3】Under With 【小题4】a the
【小题5】drinking drunk 【小题6】think thought
【小题7】Which As 【小题8】lose前加to
【小题9】accident accidents
【小题10】prevent prevented或加should
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 Li Hua is a senior three student who devote himself to his 1. lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several courses.In the evening, he studies at home until deep into 2. the night.He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn’t work 3. effectively. In Sunday morning, Li Hua was about to study 4. when his father came up and advised him to have a break. Soon they had good idea. They bought a kite which they 5. liked it very much and then the family went to the suburbs 6. where Li Hua enjoyed himself fly the kite. The family had a 7. picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On 8. Monday, Li Hua was energetic and actively in class. He 9. said it was only why he had a better weekend. 10.
【参考答案】3.
1. devote---devotes 2. studies---studied
3. too sleepy---so sleepy 4. In Sunday--- On Sunday
5. had good--- had a good 6. liked it---去掉it
7. fly---flying 8. but---and
9. actively---active 10. why---because
短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加﹑删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（﹨）划掉。美丽章丘我的家作文
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend ,he lent to me lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
【参考答案】4.
My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to
buying Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for∧ long
there a holiday.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized
and
that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had
in was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my
were luggage friend ,he lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
friend’s felt
【第六篇】美丽章丘我的家作文
山东省章丘市2016高考英语二轮复习 短文选练(5)山东章丘市2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）选练（5）
1.短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
In recent years many flowers shops have been appeared in our small town. It is common for people
to buy flowers when they go to a gathering, visiting a sick friend, or attend a wedding or birthday
party. I still remember clear one day last year when Tom, a disabled student, presented some
flowers to his mother to express his gratitude for her. He owing his entire life to his mother’s kind
and care. With her he would not have had the confidence or the courage to fight his disability. As a
result the great effort he has made, he was finally admitted to a key university.
【参考答案】1.
In recent years many flowers shops have been appeared in our small town. It is common for people
flower
to buy flowers when they go to a gathering, visiting a sick friend, or attend a wedding or birthday
vistit
party. I still remember clear one day last year when Tom, a disabled student, presented some
clearly flowers to his mother to express his gratitude for her. He owing his entire life to his mother’s kind
to owed
kindness and care. With her he would not have had the confidence or the courage to fight his disability.
Without
As a result∧ the great effort he has made, he was finally admitted to a key university. Of had
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，共10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear sir,
I'm glad to recommend (推荐) you to my friend Li Ming. Li Ming was born in July
15 , 1974 in Beijing. ,He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986 . When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, physics and chemistry and
fond of art. After graduating from No. 4 High School, he entered Beijing University study physics. After four year of hard work there, he went to the United States for further study. Because of his excellent work, he get a doctor's degree in physics in this year. He is now in good health but would like to make contributions to our country．I will be most gratefully if you consider my recommendation．
Looking forward to receive your early reply
Yours truly,
Wang Lin
【参考答案】2. 76 .in July 15— on 77. did good in maths —well 78. and ∧fond — was
79. ∧study physics — to 80. four year —— years 81. he get ——got 82. in this year删除 in 83. but would like—and 84. gratefully — grateful 85. receive ——receiving
短文改错（共10小题；每小题0.5分，满分5分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，从第11处起不计分。
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please? I have anything important to tell you. Next Sunday afternoon, our class was going to hold an English story-telling competition in lecture hall. Everybody is required to take part in the activity. Two foreign teacher will be invited to act as judges. The activity will benefit from you in many ways. For example, it will give us a good chance to practicing your oral English and train your communication skills. However, it will inspire your interest at English. The requirements are as follows. First, the story can be original. That is, the story must be made up by yourself. Second, the story must be presented in English. Finally, your story should be finished within three minutes. That’s all, thank you.
【参考答案】3.
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please? I have anything important to tell you. Next Sunday
something afternoon, our class was going to hold an English story-telling competition in∧ lecture hall.
is the
Everybody is required to take part in the activity. Two foreign teacher will be invited to act as
teachers us a good
you
chance to practicing your oral English and train your communication skills. However, it will
practice Besides
inspire your interest at English. The requirements are as follows. First, the story can be original.
in must
That is, the story must be made up by yourself. Second, the story must be presented in English.
Third, the story should be interesting. Finally, your story should be finished within three minutes.
That’s all. Thank you.
短文改错
The other day after work，I was walking down the street ewhil I saw a boy riding
when
a unicycle，one of those bicycle with only one wheel. Dressing in all pink from head
bicyclesDressed
to toe，he was singing a song which was—— sounded like a kid’s song.I thought he must be total crazy.Just then，a lady dropped ∧ 20dollar bill on the ground，totallya
but he didn’t realize it and started to walk away.The guy in pink picked out the美丽章丘我的家作文
sheup
money and gave it back to her.After that，he rode on but soon disappeared before the and
lady could thank him.How a strange and good guy!
What
短文改错(
第一节：短文改错(共10小题)
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有十处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个词。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改十处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police arrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
参考答案、、 短文改错(共10小题)
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra
happen 去掉to
【第七篇】美丽章丘我的家作文
作文一次作文指导
今年，我刚送走一班六年级小学毕业生，这学期最后一次作文，结合课本要求，我让学生围绕“难忘的小学生活”这个主题写一篇文章，为了让学生有啥可写，在作文前我是这么导入的： 我们每个同学都拥有 一个五彩斑斓的童年，童年都有着丰富多彩的生活。六年的小学生活多么难忘，许多老师和同学都给你们留下了深刻印象，在如诗如画的童年里，你们每天都遨游在生活的海洋里，在感受这生活、体验着生活。小学生活中的人、事、景、物汇成了丰富的生活轨迹，带给了我们快乐、迷人、难忘、忧伤、成功、失败等不同的生活体验。今天我们欢聚在这里， 让我们的思绪尽情驰骋，从记忆中搜寻最让你心动的场景，将自己最难忘的东西流于笔端吧。说完这些，我就让学生 开始 回忆自己的小学生活，并在学习小组里和同坐交流，我在黑板上写出如下提示： 1 在什么情况下想起过去的事 。2 什么人和什么事给你留下了难忘的印象。
3 回忆过去时，把自己生活中的具体情节描述出来。 4 做到前呼后应。
（学生在小组中发言非常积极，因为难忘的事情太多了。 ） 在此基础上声情并茂地 做了如下写作指导： 1 时间过得飞快，六年的小学生活转眼间就要结束了。不久我们将要告别美丽的校园，告别朝夕相处的老师、学生，带着欢笑与理想跨进崭新的中学校园，然而，不管我们走到哪里，都不会忘记这短短六年的小学生活。 在这六年里，我们留下了许多的美好的回忆，除了这些美好快乐的经历让你难忘以外，还有不同的感受让你难忘吗？可以是惊险的一段历程；可以是紧张的一个画面；可以是兴奋的一个瞬间；可以是一次勇敢的尝试；可以试一次后悔的经
历；可以是一种心酸的滋味；可以是一个难忘的老师；可以是一个难忘的同学------
小学生活是难忘的，之所以难忘，就是因为记录了你自己的亲身感受，刻骨铭心的历程，也许是快乐的，也许
是心酸的，也许是神奇的，也许是挑战的，只要你写出自己的滋味来，就是有价值的好文章。
那怎样把你选的事写精彩呢？要把人和物写得具体些，比如：把动作、语言、神态等些具体生动；还要写出自己的
感受，心理活动；经过要具体些。写出自己的真情实感实习做成功的基础。
讲完这些学生就开始动手写作了，用了一节课的时间，学生就完成了这次习作。学生写完后，我看了一遍，他们大
部分都写得很好。其中， 高洁同学的《李老师 我永远忘不了您》经过投稿，被《章丘日报》刊登。
实践 证明，只要让学生动了情，学生就会有啥谢。