xx不容易的作文

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xx不容易的作文(一)

五(6)冯欣语

外婆,你真了不起

我的外婆个子不高,有一头花白的短发,鼻梁上架着一副眼,一副老知识分子的模样。别看外婆年纪大,她可是位心灵手巧的老人呢!

去年的冬天北风凛冽,下着鹅毛大雪。我和妹妹翻箱倒柜地寻找棉袄、棉靴、帽子、手套和围巾,正准备下楼和小伙伴一起堆雪人、打雪仗。

可是我们找不到合适的帽子,我最喜欢的红色小花帽上破了一个大洞,妹妹的小黄帽上的黄色绒球不见了。这可怎么办呀?我着急了,帽子破了一个洞,雪花就会“钻”进去的,我和妹妹愁眉苦脸的坐在沙发上,双眉扭成了麻花。这是,外婆来了,她看见我们双眉紧锁地坐在沙发上,便问:“怎么了?你们不是要下去玩吗?”我们把帽子递给外婆,外婆一看,笑呵呵地说:“你们交给我吧,我来补帽子!”她从抽屉里拿出一朵布做的小红花、一个白色绒球和针线。她先拿起我的帽子,用左手把小红花按在洞上,右手拿起针线,在小红花四周穿梭着。然后,外婆取下针,把线固定在帽子上,我的帽子就补好了。接着外婆又依样画葫芦地补好了妹妹的帽子。过了一会儿,两顶小帽子在外婆的“神手”下复活了。我们高高兴兴地戴着“新”帽子下楼玩了,小伙伴都夸我们的帽子真漂亮!

我的外婆年纪大了,但是眼不花,耳不背,手不抖,她的那双“神手”还是那么巧,还是充满魔力。

xx不容易的作文(二)

英语作文不会写?有这些就够了!

高考试卷中,英语作文的分数占英语科目考试的10%-20%,这个比例还是很大的。一部分同学短文理解轻车熟路,听力也顺利通过,偏偏卡在了最后一篇作文上,很容易就与其他考生的分数拉开距离。高中的英语作文要求不算太高,有些题型也能用固定的模式去套。小编整理出一些常见的英文写作题型格式,同学们掌握了这些,英语作文也就不用担心了。

图表类题型

As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture,____ has been on rise/ decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____. From the sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that _____.

There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____. In one hand, ____.In the other hand, _____ is due to the fact that ______.In addition, ______ is responsible for _____. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.

As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.

书信类

Your address

Month, Date, year

Receiver's address

Dear ...,

I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in .... And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising.

.../ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. On the one hand, .... On the other hand, .... I am enclosing my resume

for your kind consideration and reference.

I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.

Best regards for your health and success.

Sincerely yours,XX.

话题作文

Nowadays, there are more and more __ _ in __ _. It is estimated that ___. Why have there been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.

The first one is ______. Besides,_____. The third one is _____. To sum up, the main cause of it is due to _____. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing,_____. For another thing, _____. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____.

对比观点类

(1) 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。有一些人认为……另一些人认为……我的看法是……

The topic of ①(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③(理由二). Moreover, ④(理由三).

While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦(理由三).

From my point of view, I think ⑧(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .

(2) 给出一个观点,要求写作反对这一观点。

Some people believe that ①(观点一). For example, they think ②(举

例说明).And it will bring them ③(为他们带来的好处).

In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤(反对的理由之

二).

Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).

阐述主题类

要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述。第一,阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义,然后分析并举例使其更有说服力。

The good old proverb (名言或谚语) reminds us that (释义) . Indeed, we can learn many things form it. First of all,(理由一). For example, (举例说明). Secondly,(理由二). Another case is that (举例说明). Furthermore , (理由三).

解决方法题型

要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径:第一、问题现状;第二、如何解决。 In recent days, we have to face I problem A, which is becoming more and more serious. First,(说明A的现状).Second,(举例进一步说明现状)

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing,(解决方法一). For another (解决方法二). Finally,(解决方法三).

Personally, I believe that (我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because (带来的好处). 说明利弊类

这种题型往往要求考生先说明现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,要求考生表明自己的态度(或预测前景)。

第一、说明事物现状;第二、事物本身的优缺点(或一方面);第三、考生对现状(或前景)的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First,(A的优点之一). Besides,(A的优点之二).

But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,(A的第二个缺点).

Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects over weigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to (我的看法).

(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way,(预测).

xx不容易的作文(三)

孩子不会写作文?写好作文的8大诀窍,从此不烦恼

第一招:字数三四五

这个技巧说白了就是学习写短句。学了一段时间写作的孩子容易在作文中写长句,而长句写不好就变成病句。家长要提醒孩子注意控制每句话的字数,建议把十几个字几十个字的长句改成只有三四五个字的短句,孩子们会发现这样的作文有语感会舒服很多。

如某学生的原文:“高高的绿绿的草散发着诱人的清香。一根一根都看得那么清楚,很挺拔的样子。”经指导后改成:“草绿了,高了,散发着清香。一根一根,看得清清楚楚,很挺拔的样子。”是不是很有节奏感?

第二招:一秒钟的事写三百字

还是针对作文写不长的一种技巧训练:用三百字来描写1秒钟内发生的事。如关于破校运会跳高纪录瞬间的描写原本只有几十字:只见某某纵身一跳,一下子飞过横杆,新的校运会纪录诞生了!

怎么变成三百字?可以有条理地加上动作解剖:如何助跑、起跳、翻越、落地;加上联想:往届校运会有人挑战失败,平时如何一次次练习等等;还可以加上细节来充实,起跳前如何与同学们进行眼神交流,成功后同学如何向他祝贺……家长可以找一些1秒钟的素材让孩子进行写作练习,学会了这个技巧还怕考试写不出四五百字吗?

第三招:遇到“很”和“非常”想一想

对于文章写不长的孩子,可以训练的另一个技巧是:遇到“很”和“非常”想一想。看过无数学生习作,蒋老师发现出现频率最高的字眼包括“很,非常”,请家长提醒孩子,遇到要写这几个字时不要轻易下笔,停下来想一想,是不是非要出现这个字眼?

比如写热,别出现“很热”两个字,学会用其他的描写来体现热:骄阳似火,没有一丝风,树叶低垂毫无生气……文章自然就能写长。

第四招:环境里面有“真”“情”

到了五六年级孩子都要学习环境描写。如有的孩子会写:“早上天气还挺好的,放学回家时,却哗哗下起雨来。雨珠在下,泪珠在滴,老天也好像在为我哭泣。”

孩子能用环境衬托自己的心情首先要表扬。但是很多孩子只要一写环境,肯定就是小花微笑,小草点头、小鸟歌唱、小雨哭泣,成了套路,难道世界上只有小草、小鸟、小花吗?为什么不能写身边更真实的东西呢?云、雾、桌子,哪怕是电线杆都可以写,这个技巧是提醒孩子不仅要让人活在环境里,还要让人活在真实的环境里。

第五招:不用成语

作文为什么写不长?都是成语惹的祸!

不是说多用成语才显得有文采吗?其实不然,在“就是不用成语”写作技巧中,蒋老师指出:当作文中只会按照套路使用成语时,文章细节就没了,还不如让孩子老老实实把自己看到的感受都写出来。什么天高云淡、风和日丽、桃红柳绿、炯炯有神、心旷神怡……这些被用滥的成语还是少出现为妙。

比如,写春天别用“风和日丽”,而是这样写:“风儿拂过林梢,原本平静的湖面漾起了圈圈涟漪,湖边的柳树轻摇着身姿,我也忍不住张开双臂,任风抚过我的每一寸肌肤,暖暖的,痒痒的。”想办法用具体的句子替换掉别人用滥的成语,解决孩子作文写不长写不细的难题。

第六招:写说不单写“说”

让孩子比较以下三句话。

张三说:“……”;

张三无可奈何地说:“……”;

张三摊了摊手,一副无可奈何的样子:“……”

显然,让人物说话有多种方式,写语言可以不用出现“说”而是在语言前面加上动作和神态,通过一定的训练掌握这样的技巧让孩子的写作水平切实得到提升,让他们学会细节描写,不会仅干巴巴的地写“某某说”。 第七招:一段话里至少出现6个标点

很多孩子不会用标点,习作中常只有逗号句号逗号句号,甚至逗号都没有,把老师读到断气为止。针对这个现象,可以让孩子进行“一段话至少出现6种标点”的技巧训练。比如,。?!……:“”

这些标点你的作文中都有吗?没有的话请尝试用起来。经过几次训练后,你会发现孩子的惊人变化:意味深长的句子会写了、人物语言会加进去了,心理活动结合进去了,还会用反问句了,这些句子加进去后,文章当然生动起来。一位作家就曾用这种方法对自己作文写不好的孩子进行训练,收效明显,进步很快。

第八招:写外貌不用“有”

作文如何写外貌?孩子的作文里总会看到类似这样的名子:“XX可漂亮了,她有一头卷卷的黄头发,有一双乌黑的葡萄般的大眼睛,有一个高高的鼻子,还有一张樱桃小嘴。”

如果你试着让他们去掉文中的“有”,把文字重新串联一遍,会发现作文顺了很多。写上段文字的同学经蒋老师指导后修改如下:“XX可漂亮啦。一头卷卷的黄头发自然