篇一:《作文点评网络版》
命题作文
我们是初升的太阳；我们是风华正茂的中学生。
校园里，我们生机勃勃；
校园外，我们热情奔放??
以我们是初升的太阳为题作文。（2004年上海中考试题）
我们是初升的太阳
十五岁，活力四射的年龄。风华正茂、生机勃勃、热情奔放这些词都一直被用来形容我们。我们就像那初升的太阳，永远闪耀着活力的光芒，散发着青春的气息，只要有我们在，就会有一片生机。
初三了，毕业了，也同样意味着同窗四年的同学要分别了，大家都很舍不得，大家都想为初三留下点纪念。
在写同学录时，小k的狗吠猫散图以其搞笑的风格，简单明了的构图，传遍大江南北，好评不断。这就像我们的生活，多姿多彩，活泼开朗。
尽管写了同学录，但我们却觉得还少了些什么，大概是热血沸腾，活力四射的感觉吧。
于是我们决定举行一场s校初三友谊比赛。
尽管美其名曰是友谊赛，但大家都虎视眈眈地把目标锁定为冠军奖杯。大家都想为初三再添一笔灿烂。
比赛时，队员们抱着只要进球不要命的宗旨，拼了命地把足球往对方半场踹，年少轻狂，年轻气盛啊。在场边，大家也没有闲着，在那儿比试吼功。夫战，勇气也。我们女生扯着嗓子直喊加油，真希望自己练过狮吼功呀！
热闹的还在后面呢。无论裁判有多公正，只要一做出对我们不利的判罚，无论裁判与我们交情有多深，我们立马翻脸不认人，一律开骂。你可以感觉得到整个操场都弥漫着青春的味道。
其实，青春就是该有这样的冲劲和冲动才名副其实。
十五岁，活力四射的年龄，可以轻狂的岁月。十五岁的我们闪烁着智慧的光芒，青春的光芒，活力的光芒。在我们的身上可以找到活力与热情，活泼与开朗，只要青春有的，我们都有。
红日初升，其道大光，十五岁的我们就像初升的太阳，永远闪耀着活力的光芒，散发着青春的气息，前程一片光明，我们给世界带来了光明，带来了希望。
我们是谁？我们是初升的太阳。
点评：这是一篇情文并茂的好文章。作者用诗化的语言，写出了中学生的虎虎生气。字里行间洋溢着青春的激情，散发着青春的气息，仿佛青春的宣言，令正处于青春期的学子充满向往。文章选取典型的校园生活片段，着力表现初中生活的多姿多彩，
同学之间的纯真友情。精彩的初三足球友谊赛进一步把情感推向了高潮。主体部分语言幽默诙谐，充满着时代气息，与全文的感情基调融为一体。尤其是文章的开头和结尾部分，感情激越，语言精美。感情真挚，文采飞扬是这篇作文的最大亮点。
半命题作文：
我美丽，因为我
要求：(1)文体不限，不少于600字。(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名。(3)卷面整洁，字迹清楚。（2004年长沙中考试题）
我美丽，因为我热爱自然
放眼自然，处处有着迷人的色彩：第一丝清风拂过，是万木吐翠的春，这是一个细腻的季节；第一缕阳光洒下，是鱼跃荷开的夏，这是一个清爽的季节；第一片金黄铺开，是五谷丰登的秋，这是一个寂寞的季节；第一片雪花飘下，是凛冽萧条的冬，这是一个温馨的季节。自然，将我的世界妆扮得格外美丽。
春雨潇潇洒落时，总会牵动我的心弦，把我带入那如烟如雾、如沙如尘的世界。那丝丝细雨，像滴滴甘露，让我感受着生命的活力，它们让我摆脱人间约束，放
开心情，在虚空中狂奔，在寂寞中追逐。
夏风轻轻吹拂时，绿色向我扑面而来。山绿如碧，水清如镜，徜徉其中，你会感受到自然无穷的魅力。空闲时，我喜欢坐在窗台上，打开窗户，让夕阳的余辉照在脸上，让夏日的凉风无私地吹来。不管心中有多少怨恨、多少惆怅都可以任它吹走，只留下心灵的蓝天，任思绪飞翔，此时，我总是禁不住在心里高呼：多么美好的人生啊！
秋月掠过大地时，我总喜欢趴在床上，打开cd机，听一段欢快的乐曲。窗外虽然秋雨不断，夜空虽然风急云低，但我的内心却丝毫没有染上半点愁绪。
冬雪慢慢飘落时，屋内外的灯光交织着飘落的雪花，像一曲飘扬的音符，像一幅美丽的图画，让你浮想联翩。再过一阵，小孩们便会欢呼着堆起了雪人，打起了雪仗。想想自己小时侯的情景，一种欢乐莫名地涌上心头。要是遇上圣诞节，这雪花便成了自然送给我们的最好礼物，看着窗外的雪花，带着期待的幻想，美梦会伴你到天明。
自然就像一条无比绚烂的彩虹，生活像一杯浓郁可口的咖啡；自然像一支悠扬委婉的乐曲，生活像一片蔚蓝浩瀚的大海。不管生活是酸、是甜、是苦还是咸，看一看美丽的自然，我的生活便充满了情趣。
细细品味自然，我发现一切是如此色彩斑斓；细细感悟生活，我发现世界是如此美丽。
点评：自然对每一个人都是公平的，我们一样享受明媚的阳光，一样享受新鲜的空气；我们一样享受草木的碧绿，一样享受天空的蔚蓝。但是，享受了并不意味就能够表达，不一定能够有所收获，这就是人与人的区别。本文作者细心观察，深入感悟，用整齐而美丽的语句将四季的画面刻画得多姿多彩，而且作者将四季分别描绘，层次清晰，结构井然。尤其是排比句的运用，显示了作者不一般的写作基础。{以互联网为题的作文}.
话题作文
（一）声音无处不在：大自然中的风声雨声、蝉鸣鸟语；生活中的歌声书声，笑声哭声，亲人朋友的安慰、鼓励、批评；来自心灵深处的呼唤??其中，一定有某种声音让你难忘。它也许会让你想起一段往事，也许会让你产生丰富的想象，也许会让你领悟到可贵的哲理??请你以“声音”为话题，自拟题目，自选文体，写一篇500宇以上的文章。（2004年广东中考作文题）
大自然的声音
去年暑假时，我回到故乡，至今想起，仍然回味无穷，因为那里山明水秀，到处可以听到大自然的声音。
晨曦初露，村内到处飘飘缈缈，笼罩着一层轻轻的薄雾，犹如羞达达的少女蒙上一层薄薄的面纱，给人一种轻柔朦胧的美感。不久，拂面的清风吹走了薄雾，映入眼帘的是一片大大的荷花池。池中荷花千娇百媚，有的亭亭玉立，有的鹤立鸡群，有的则边冒出水面的勇气也没有。这一景，流淌着淡淡的碧光。我犹如进入了蓬莱仙境，鸟语花香，一天的开始由大自然的美景拉开了序幕。
来到村后面的小山，只见青树绿蔓，草盛花繁，一派生机勃勃的景象。蜜蜂从睡梦中醒来，嘤嘤嗡嗡地开始了它一天的工作。蝴蝶也展开漂亮的翅膀，在繁花绿草中翩翩起舞。空地上，一群天真无邪的小孩在追逐吵闹，追蜜蜂，扑蝴蝶，采鲜花??你争我抢，玩得不亦乐乎。大自然在唱歌了，它以优美的旋律告诉我们——这是它的声音，使人快乐的声音！
篇二:《大学英语四级10类话题作文三：网络科技话题》
新东方在线 [ ]网络课堂电子教材系列
大学英语四级10类话题作文三：网络科技话题
网络科技话题
这类话题近几年考的比较多。去年四级真题中全部都是网络话题。今年考的可能性可能相对小一些，但是同学们也要在自己脑中储备一篇范文以备不时之需。
网络科技类
The bar chart given above reflects that the number of readers choosing paper book or electronic books experienced some changes during the past four years. The number of paper book readers decreased slowly from 10 million in 2010 to 8 million in 2013. However, during the same period, the number of electronic book readers increased steadily from 8 million to 12 million.
We learn from the bar chart that people in mounting numbers would like to choose electronic books while less people like paper books. What might account for this phenomenon? Reasons can be listed as follows: for one thing, with the widespread availability of electronic devices such as smartphones，tablet PC and Electronic Reader，it is much easier for electronic books to be applied and popularized. Secondly, compared with paper books, electronic books are
characterized by convenience in terms of carrying and saving spaces. Furthermore, the costs of purchasing and downloading electronic books are lower that of paper
新东方在线 [ ]网络课堂电子教材系列
books, which enables readers to save a great deal of money. Last but not least, electronic books sometimes stand for high fashion and efficiency.
Whether electronic books will totally replace paper books one day still seems to be uncertain. However, no matter what kind of books will vanish, the habit of reading books should not be eliminated. (218 words)
参考译文：
这幅所给的柱状图反应了纸质图书和电子版图书的阅读者的数量在过去的四年发生了一些变化。纸质书籍的读者的数量从2010年的1000万缓慢下降到2013年的800万。而相反的是，电子书读者的数量从800万稳定增加到1200万。
我们从这幅柱状图中得知，越来越多的人愿意选择电子书而越来越少得人喜欢纸质书。有什么可以解释这个现象?理由可以罗列如下：首先，随着诸如智能手机、平板电脑、电子阅读身背这样的电子产品的广泛普及，电子书的使用和传播变得相对容易。其次，相比纸质书而言，电子书的携带更加方便，也更加节省空间。再者，购买或下载电子书的成本比购买书籍要低得多，这可以为读者省下一大笔钱。最后，电子书似乎也是一种时尚和高效的象征。 是否电子书会在某天彻底取代纸质书不得而知。然而，不管哪种书会消失，阅读的习惯是不能消失的。
篇三:《英语作文话题：有关网络》
高考英语作文话题：有关“网络”
高考英语话题作文：有关“网络”
例1：报纸和网站是当今两大主要媒体。请根据下表内容，以 “Newspapers and Websites” 为题，用英{以互联网为题的作文}.
语写一篇短文，简要介绍这两种媒体的优缺点。 报 纸1. 传统媒体，天天更新，信息可靠 2. 携带方便，随时随地可以阅读 3.仅有文字和图片 网 站1. 新兴媒体，信息更新速度快 2.依赖于电脑及互联网 3. 包含文字、图片、音频和视频 注意：1. 短文必须包括表中所有内容，可以适当发挥; 2. 词数：100-120 3. 参考词汇：更新update;音频audio;视频video
Newspapers and Websites
Newspapers and websites are two major new media in the world today, both of which can provide us with
lots of news and information. But they’re different in some ways.
Newspapers enjoy a longer history and often come out daily with more reliable news and information. They
can be carried and read almost anywhere you like. So many people like reading them. But they can only contain
texts and photos.
On the other hand, websites are quite new and popular, especially among young people. Websites have not
only texts with pictures but also audios and videos, which makes stories more interesting. What’s more, they are{以互联网为题的作文}.
updated from time to time. So the latest news is always seen on websites instead of in newspapers. But it is not
quite convenient for people without a computer connected with the Internet to get information from websites.{以互联网为题的作文}.
例2：目前，一些诸如GG, MM, Xia Mi 等网络语言在青少年中极为盛行，并且出现在家庭作业报告，甚至全国入学考试的作文中。请你以 “Should Internet Slang Be Prohibited (禁止)?”为题，根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文，并谈谈你自己的看法。
一些同学认为 网络语言生动、时尚 网络语言充满幽默与智慧 使网上聊天更快捷；另一些同学认为 网络语言缺乏思想
性没有被大部分人理解、接受过多使用使人不解，甚至误解?；你的看法 注意：1. 短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数; 2. 词数：100左右 3. 参考词汇：生动的vivid;智慧intelligence{以互联网为题的作文}.
Should Internet Slang Be Prohibited?
At present, Internet Slang, such as “GG, MM, Xia Mi”， has become popular among the teenagers.{以互联网为题的作文}.
There are different opinions on Internet Slang. Some students think Internet Slang is vivid, fashionable and full of humor and intelligence. Besides, it makes chatting on the Internet quicker.
However, some other students think Internet Slang lacks depth of thought and is too simple. Also, it is hard to understand and not accepted by most people. The words sometimes might make people confused, even resulting in misunderstanding.
Every coin has two sides. In my opinion, living in the Information Age, if we don’t know the Internet Slang, we seem to fall behind the times. It will be OK as long as these terms are used correctly in proper situations.
例3：假如你是李华，最近你对本班的60名同学(男女各半)进行了上网目的的调查，结果见下表。请你用英语给某报社写一篇报道，反映你调查的内容，以引起公众的关注。
注意：1.报道应包括图表中的所有内容; 2. 叙述中要适当增加个人观点，对学生上网情况进行评论，并提出建议; 3.词数：100左右; 4. 参考词汇：做调查make a survey
Dear editor,
I have recently made a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls in our class about their purpose(s) of getting on the Internet. The girls’ favorite is chatting, but few boys like it. What boys like to do most is playing games and the girls also like them. Both boys and girls like to read news or send e-mails on the Internet. Maybe they think it’s the most convenient way to get information or keep in touch with friends. As for studying, the numbers of boys and girls are equal, but altogether only several of them will use the Internet as a tool to study.
篇四:《各种有关网络话题的托福作文》
各种有关网络话题的托福作文
网络的作用
The technology revolution is upon us. In the past, there have been many triumphs in the world of technology. To this date, people are able to communicate over thousands of miles with the greatest of ease. The Internet connects nearly 400 million users worldwide and is an essential part of how we work, play, communicate, and conduct commerce. We use the Internet in ways that seemed unimaginable in the past.
互联网使用的四大障碍
local information barriers
literacy barriers
language barriers
cultural diversity barriers
网络的好处
The Internet provides convenience for people to learn at home.
Internet based training gas become a common business tool used to gain advancements in current jobs. Tutoring over the Internet is also available. Business on the Internet is a growing technology. Business on the Internet has no geographic boundaries; it has access to more consumers.
Approximately 150 businesses join the Internet every day. There is less labor force needed and it is open 24 hours a day. The Internet is also a bigger and cheaper way to advertise. In the past 20 years, the Internet has changed a number of areas in society, especially the business world. In the last 40 years, the Internet has gone from a method of defense communication for the government, to a business venture for an
entrepreneur or a fortune 500-company. The Internet is a way for gaining consumers, products and capital for a business.
In a world of light-speed data transmission, any individual with little training and expertise can make a fortune from the Internet. Many
companies, like Amazon.com or eBay, thrive from business done through Internet transactions.
网络的危害
data leakage
virus infringe one’s privacy
national security
censorship
The Internet has many great uses, but, as anything else, negative things can be done there as well. The beauty of the Internet is that it is so large that it’s nearly impossible to keep track of what bad things everyone is doing. A few examples are someone can steal a cell phone and then by using the Internet, they can reprogram the telephone to work off someone’s account and not be traced. Other examples are the pirates of software. Someone can get a program that Microsoft sells for about one thousand dollars for free and it can’t be traced. There is another fact that nearly anything can be traded online, like drugs, weapons such as high power guns, bombs, and the list for these items goes on and on. One of the worst things that the police really want to get their hands on is Child Pornography. It is not so hard to keep track of when people had to go out and hand deliver this stuff, but through the Internet the scum who partake in this don’t have to leave their homes. A big problem is the fact that underage kids can see what they are not meant to. This does not just end up back at porn though; there are images of extreme violence on humans and animals.
技术提高了人类生存条件还是恶化了人类生存条件
Philosophical debates have arisen over the present and future use of technology in society, with disagreements over whether technology improves the human condition or worsens it. Neo-Luddism,
anarcho-primitivism, and similar movements criticize the pervasiveness of technology in the modern world, claiming that it harms the environment and alienates people; proponents of ideologies such as trans-humanism and techno-progressivism view continued technological progress as beneficial to society and the human condition. Indeed, until recently, it was
believed that the development of technology was restricted only to human beings, but recent scientific studies indicate that other primates and
certain dolphin communities have developed simple tools ad learned to pass their knowledge to other generations.