篇一:《美丽的家乡--湾里》
美丽的家乡--湾里
美丽的家乡--湾里
在江西省南昌市的城西，平地上突起了一座西山。湾里就座落在西山的东山脚，在地图上要找到它都很困难。但是，湾里确实很美，有很多风景名胜，如：洪崖丹井、紫清山、狮子峰、肖峰、落马岭、长春湖、脚鱼潭、林彪别墅……只有到过湾里的人才能真正领略到这仙境般迷人的景色。
我们湾里有连绵不断的青山。有的像身背草篓的采药老人；有的像摩天大楼；有的像双峰，直插云霄，像两根尖尖的竹笋；有的一柱独峙，像一支长长的利剑。有山就有水，一条由山上的泉水汇集而成的小港穿城而过。
以前，湾里是一个贫穷落后的小山沟，居民居住的是矮小的砖瓦房。现在好了，湾里成了南昌的后花园，到处都是高楼大厦，到处都是宽阔的水泥马路，马路两旁的路灯是那么明亮、豪华，晚上从高处看就像一条条金黄的长龙。由于我们湾里三面环山，空气新鲜，城市里许多老年人都来这里买房子居住。
秋天，秋高气爽，走进我们美丽的湾里，很远很远就可以闻到一股浓浓的桂花香味。 走进长春湖，清澈见底、纤尘不染的碧水中，鱼儿欢快的游着，红、绿、白各色的卵石在水中闪亮。阳光透过林隙，在水面上洒落斑驳的影子，给人一种大自然安谧静美的享受。 我们湾里物产也很多，有毛竹、杉树、樟树、松柏……有蛇、野猪、各种鸟、孔雀、野兔子及牛、羊、马……还有许多好吃的，如山楂、板栗、狝猴桃……
如今，我们的家乡--湾里在改革开放的热潮中快速地变化，山在变，路在变，房子在变，人也在变，变得更新、更美、更有朝气了。一个生机勃勃的新湾里正在山山水水之间展现。 我的家乡湾里多么美丽，朋友，请到我的家乡来看看吧！
篇二:《美丽的家乡--湾里》
美丽的家乡--湾里
美丽的家乡--湾里
在江西省南昌市的城西‘平地上突起了一座西山,湾里就座落在西山的东山脚，在地图上要找到它都很困难、但是，湾里确实很美、有很多风景名胜：如‘洪崖丹井’紫清山,狮子峰’肖峰’落马岭'长春湖、脚鱼潭;林彪别墅„„只有到过湾里的人才能真正领略到这仙境般迷人的景色;
我们湾里有连绵不断的青山;有的像身背草篓的采药老人；有的像摩天大楼；有的像双峰;直插云霄?像两根尖尖的竹笋；有的一柱独峙/像一支长长的利剑;有山就有水?一条由山上的泉水汇集而成的小港穿城而过/
以前’湾里是一个贫穷落后的小山沟?居民居住的是矮小的砖瓦房/现在好了。湾里成了南昌的后花园，到处都是高楼大厦”到处都是宽阔的水泥马路：马路两旁的路灯是那么明亮，豪华”晚上从高处看就像一条条金黄的长龙“由于我们湾里三面环山“空气新鲜’城市里许多老年人都来这里买房子居住,
秋天，秋高气爽,走进我们美丽的湾里，很远很远就可以闻到一股浓浓的桂花香味、 走进长春湖;清澈见底/纤尘不染的碧水中"鱼儿欢快的游着‘红?绿/白各色的卵石在水中闪亮/阳光透过林隙‘在水面上洒落斑驳的影子’给人一种大自然安谧静美的享受’
我们湾里物产也很多,有毛竹’杉树'樟树、松柏„„„„有蛇”野猪?各种鸟;孔雀;野兔子及牛‘羊“马„„„„还有许多好吃的‘如山楂，板栗”狝猴桃„„„„
如今“我们的家乡--湾里在改革开放的热潮中快速地变化，山在变?路在变“房子在变‘人也在变’变得更新‘更美、更有朝气了’一个生机勃勃的新湾里正在山山水水之间展现。 我的家乡湾里多么美丽、朋友’请到我的家乡来看看吧！
篇三:《我看南昌》
我看南昌
十六年的坚持不懈，南昌终于被评为文明城市，被评上文明城市不仅由于市领导的努力，同时也是市民的素质不断提升，想较于先进城市，南昌的基础建设依然相对落后，城市管理水平还不高，但南昌近几的改变很大。
首先谈南昌的教育，南昌从古就是一个书香之地，至今南昌每天考取重点大学的人不计其数，南昌鼓励每个南昌人刻苦拼博。
南昌的环境相对于其它城市较好，南昌不仅有梅岭景区，特别是南昌城市中建了许多景观树，为城市区添上了亮丽的一笔，目前南昌交通方式较为单一，后来又建了昌北国际机场，便利了市民出国旅游工作，同时南昌市内也兴建地铁，不久之后，南昌交通的拥堵也相信可得到缓解。 南昌的景点有许多，其中之一的秋水广场于2004年建成，其即可防洪也可观赏，此处喷泉占地1.2平方千米，是全国最大的喷泉。
虽然南昌被评上了文明城市，但仍有许多不足，今后我们仍要做到人人文明，相信南昌会变得更好！
篇四:《7月28日南昌作文笔记》
第一段：描述相关细节，略微引向主题
思路一：
1. 图片基调
2. 相关细节
3. 引向主题
Sample 1
(1) an ironic (2) the first line reads, “Without cheating there would be no upgrade”, while the second line bears, “these students prefer decent scores to dignity”. The horizontal scroll summarizes their idea that they are to pass exams by any mean. (3) a mounting number of students no longer cherish the virtue of honesty.
Sample 2:
On Environment (1)an alarming (2) holding a gun and hiding people for revenge. (3) The cartoonist is reminding us that we may pay a price for what we did with the nature.
思路二
1. 反问共鸣
2. 自然过度
3. 图片细节
Sample 1
(1) Have you ever thought of being attacked by others? (2) If so, you may understand the anger of the bird in the picture. (3)Holding a gun and hiding in the bush, a bird, whose peers were once hunted by human beings, is to shoot people for revenge. The bird is reminding us that never commit such crimes again.
Sample 2
(1) Have you ever thought of the feeling of offering or accepting help to or from other?
(2) If so, you may understand the happiness of these two men in the picture. (3) a Mr. “Help-Provider” is lending what he could, in his mind what he should, while a Mr. “Help-Accepter” is extending his gratitude heart and soul. They are reminding us that mutual assistance is the right way to harmonious society.
第二段：点明图片寓意，范例原因影响{南昌的风景名胜的作文}.
思路一：化立论为驳论
1. 大众观点
a. It is widely shared that ……
b. It is hold by the vast majority that ….
c. It is imagined by many that ….
d. It is a “conventional wisdom” that …..
e. A conventional view goes that …..
f. Traditionally, ……
2. 质疑大众
a. However, is this view still the truth?
b. Nevertheless, is this public opinion still viable? c. Yet, is this point still acceptable / reasonable?{南昌的风景名胜的作文}.
d. But, is this notion still valid?
3. 详实论据{南昌的风景名胜的作文}.
a. Cases against this view are abundant and are within easy reach.
b. Cases against this view are abundant but this one will suffice.
4. 得出结论
a. Evidently, ….
b. It is apparent that…..
Sample 1: On Honesty
(1) It is widely shared that no other groups in the world can be as honest as college students. (2) However, is this view still valid? (3) Cases against this view are abundant but this one will suffice. It is not surprising to see some candidates gesturing, whispering, and even delivering keys by mobile phones.(4) Evidently, this rampant cheating behavior kills students’ honesty, threatening the quality of education, let alone social atmosphere of the future.
rampant -
prevailing =
popular +
Sample 2: On Environment
(1) It is widely shared that no other ages place more emphasis on environmental protection than today. (2) However, is this view still valid? (3) Cases against this view are abundant and are within easy reach. It is not surprising to see wild animals for fun, cooking them for food, or even selling them for profit. Equally, it is not uncommon that some factories let out wastes, or pollutant, endlessly. (4) Evidently, these misconducts kill the sense of environment protection of citizens, threatening eco-balance, let alone our survival in the future.
思路二：化苍白为哲理
1. 哲理引入
a. The extended meaning of the cartoon can be summarized as a simple truth, “……” b. What is conveyed in the picture is related to the motto / principle / doctrine , “……” c. What a wise man once put can sum up the implication of the cartoon - “……”
2. 阐释哲理（引出主题）
a. That is, ……
b. In other words, ……
c. Or, put it another way, …….
d. Simply put it, …….
3. 详实论据
a. illustration
b. statistics
c. cause
d. effect
e. comparison
f. contrast
4. 得出结论
No wonder the …in the picture is warning / is reminding / is suggesting us that ……
Sample 1:{南昌的风景名胜的作文}.
(1) What a wise man once put can sum up the implication of the cartoon - “the nature may treat us the way we treat it.” (2) Or, simply state it, the nature may reward us if we are on harmony with it, while punish us if we mistreat it. (3) Are not the following case familiar? The past decade has witnessed the exhaustion of natural resources, which triggers the increase of living cost, in turn the drop of living standard.
Sample 2
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(1) What a wise man once put can sum up the implication of the cartoon - “labor makes human, but mutual assistance makes human society.” (2) Or, simply state it, no one, without support from others, can lead a normal life. (3) Are not the following case familiar? The past decade has witnessed the revival of mutual helping, which triggers improved interpersonal relationship, in turn society of great harmony.
第三段：根据上文论调，态度决心对策
积极论调：社会风尚、箴言哲理
1. 曾经困惑
2. 图片启发
3. 个人决心
4. 乐观展望
(1) I used to wonder and ponder whether I should lend a helping hand at the cost of
my own time and energy. (2) With the enlightenment from the picture - it is a virtue to offer help without any hesitation, I am determined to spare no effort to assist those who is in need. (3) With this decision, I am bound to enrich knowledge, enhance my social abilities, and be ready to provide what I could to anyone in demand.
消极论调：社会弊病、生态环境
控制点立论：内控、外控
外控：
a. Corresponding laws and regulations (school disciplines and regulation) should be worked out / carried out / enacted to …..
b. Official / School intervention should be cast on ….
c. Penalties and fines should be activated to ….
d. Award and reward should be given to those who ….
e. New social norms should be established to ….
f. Supervision from the mass media should be put on …
内控
a. the awareness of ….should be advocated by media.
b. right attitude to …should be cultivated by families or schools{南昌的风景名胜的作文}.
c. self-restriction, self-regulation, self-discipline
从外控走向内控
1. 表明决心
2. 外控方案
3. 内控方案
4. 乐观展望
(1) We should put the problem of eco-destruction (2) laws and regulations concerning environment, fines and penalties, or intervention from environment groups. (3) That is a way, but a passive one. Actually, we are in desperate need of a package deal, or comprehensive programs, involving what mentioned above, and, more significantly, the awareness advocated by media that we would be homeless if we kept mistreating the earth, our only home.(4) With all the measures reinforcing each other, we could fundamentally draw the problem to an end.
1. 书信：
考研书信总公式
Dear XXX,
Dear Sir or Madam,
To whom it may concern,
第一段
1. 道明来意＊
2. 说明背景＊，（自我介绍，问候致意）；
第二段
A：罗列：理由、建议、困难、方案……
T - D1 (C1)- D2 (C2)
B：情节：来龙去脉（感谢信、祝贺信）
（蕴含一次转折）
第三段{南昌的风景名胜的作文}.
1. 重申来意＊
2. （适度拓展）
Yours Sincerely,
Li Ming
place was hit by ….
place was struck by …..
place was flooded.
Dear friends,
I am writing, on behalf of the student union, to seek help for residents in a disaster. A couple of weeks ago, X city was flooded, which results in homelessness of thousands of them.
They are now exposed to two difficulties. Currently, their daily necessities, including food, fresh water and medicine, are far from being adequate, while local administrators cannot afford to address their many needs. In addition, they need to be taken care of day and night, as only under such care can our friends recover from worrying, anxiety, or panic.
Knowing about their difficulties, how can we continue to stand with arm folded? Anyone who is to support can contact us at support@mail.cn. We would extend our hearty gratitude for your generousness!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
篇五:《夜晚的南昌作文150字》
每当夜幕降临的时候，南昌城就亮起来了。整个南昌城变成了灯的海洋，光的世界。 八一大道上，川流不息的汽车灯光闪烁，像一条银河从天而降。革命烈士纪念塔耸立在八一广场的中心，绚丽的彩灯勾画出广场迷人的景色。 步行街上，明亮的橱窗，绚丽多彩的广告，五光十色的霓虹灯，把繁华的大街装扮成妩媚的不夜城 夜晚的南昌，多么明亮，多么辉煌。美丽极了。南昌大学附属小学三年级:柳博
篇六:《南昌市中考满分作文-江西中考范文》
1）
我最喜欢的一堂课语文课
考场上，看到作文题目，我的思绪又回到了那节让我记忆深刻的语文课上——
上课铃刚打，教室里就嘈杂起来。同学们紧张地默背昨天学的《我爱这土地》。我一边背一边紧张地看着门口，祈祷着老师晚点来到。
这时，语文老师踏进教室，我心里紧张到极点：“完了，今天早上背的全忘光了„„要是一会提问就惨了„„”
老师清了清嗓子，大家背诵的声音停了下来。果不其然，老师说：“下面检查课文背诵。”他锐利的眼神夹杂着些许鼓励扫视全班，教室里鸦雀无声，比上自习时还要静。我偷偷瞅了瞅周围，大家的头都快低到桌子上了，紧张地看着书本。老师又突然来了句：“今天背诵，由同学们提问我。”
我们的头在一瞬间都抬了起来，眼睛齐刷刷地投向老师，都丈二和尚——摸不着头脑。我把疑问的眼神投向同（转载自出国留学网，请保留此信息。）位，她小声说：“老师葫芦里卖的什么药呀?”
老师接着说：“背诵一直是同学们的一个难关，今天晨读时有个同学问我，老师总是要求同学们背诵，自己会不会背?我突然意识到，要让同学们背会，首先老师要做出表率，所以，我决定这节课由我背诵。”
我们顿时兴奋起来，认真看着课本，检查老师背诵时有没有错误。
“假如我是一只鸟/我也应该用嘶哑的喉咙歌唱„„”老师富于韵味的声音回荡于教室，我们被带入一个崭新的诗歌世界中。这个世界里有诗人对祖国深沉的爱，有对侵略者切齿的恨，有对处于日本铁蹄蹂躏下祖国深沉的爱，有为国献身的热情„„
老师背完，我们都还沉浸在声情并茂的背诵中，稍后，教室响起了雷鸣般的掌声。老师脸上绽放开惬意的微笑。此时，室外，风儿沙沙，鸟儿啾啾。
这就是我最喜欢的一堂语文课。
2）
阳光竟然如此美丽
清晨。
天空像一个甜美的梦乡，载着希冀的梦幻。太阳从那里出来了，用金光灿灿的大眼睛，改变了世间的万物。雾霾泛起，山峰上的晨雾一丝丝地缠绕着，只留下青色的的峰尖，在阳光中镶出一道金边，显示出秀美的轮廓。高楼林立之间，太阳站在远处，斜斜地映出一片片千变万化的朝霞，投下无数城市与远山的剪影。 正午。
苍穹蓝得清澈而深远，羽毛般的浮云像飞鸟一样，越飞越远，追随着放出万道金光的太阳。阳光透过窗棂，带给人们光明和温暖。一切的一切，都被照得透亮。太阳高高悬在空中，像母亲一般，用光的手，轻轻地、悄悄地抚摸着大地，抚摸着天空中的云朵和一个个蓝色的深渊，以及生活中的一切。
黄昏。
阳光挥洒出无穷多的火焰，把天上的白云变成了晚霞。望着窗外，突然觉得，晚霞辉映的广阔平原很美，美得令人心颤，它绵延万里，无边无际，沉稳地扶衬着一只磅礴火轮，把充满力度的金焰无私地泼洒在广袤的大地上，让大地一片辉煌。
阳光竟然如此美丽!
6)
不想依赖母亲
窗外月色朦胧，思绪便不禁落在了儿时妈妈给我讲的一个故事上，也许是那个故事造就了今天自立、自强的我，是那个故事让我真正懂得了人生的价值„„
当我还是个小孩子时，我曾天真地以为，妈妈会为我做所有的事，帮我解决一切困难，所以我就事事都依赖妈妈，离开妈妈就好像鱼离开水一样，看不到妈妈，我就会吓得埋头大哭。可是有一天妈妈给我讲了一个故事：“小蜗牛不知道身上厚重的壳是干什么的，就问它妈妈，它妈妈说是用来保护自己的，从而小蜗牛又提出毛毛虫、蚯蚓等动物不用厚重的壳也能好好地生存，它妈妈回答说：‘因为它们有天地的保护，它们不用为此而担忧，而我们只能靠自己，因为我们不能靠天靠地。’”刚开始我还不懂这个故事的含义，可是当我坐下来静静思索时，才体会到，是啊，我们人也是一样，在生存的过程中也应依靠自己的力量，不应一味地去依赖外物给我们的帮助，所以我要学会自立，学会生存，试着不再依赖母亲，不再期盼着遇到困难有人替我解决，而是依靠自己的力量，这是经过一段苦思冥想后得到的最好的结论。
渐渐地，我已能离开母亲的保护伞，独自在天空中翱翔，缺少了母亲的呵护，我已不再茫然无措，看不到母亲的身影，我已不再泪流满面。而是感谢母亲给了我一个证明自己的机会。
我要依靠自己的力量，去寻找一份真正属于自己的天空。
我要依靠自己的力量，用最亮丽的色彩去描绘人生的蓝图。
蓦然间，夜已深，睡意也渐渐地袭来，但不同的是，此时的我已经准备好了，满怀信心地去迎接新的一天。