篇一:《英语批改网作文》
The person I love/ admire most
要求
1. No less than 90 points by Pigai.
2. No less than 26o words.
3. Deadline Nov. 3.
作文号:357928 教师:邵春 字数:260~500 满分:100
Attitude
要求
For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Attitude by commenting on the famous saying, “A man can succeed at almost anything for which he has unlimited enthusiasm .” You should write at least 260 words but no more than 500 words.
作文号:357929 教师:邵春 字数:100~500 满分:100
第一篇
The person I love/ admire most
Everyone has someone in his heart that he admires most, who may be a scientist, a writer, a musician or a movie super star. But,as for me,the most admirable person of mine is Christian Ronaldo, who is one of the greatest football player in today's world. Ronaldo was born in 1985, He was played for the Manchester united and now plays for real Madrid, when he was 18 years old he became a main force of Portugal national team. As for the world’s most brilliant super football stars, he not only has a handsome appearance, also has a special skill and efficient scoring ability. However, this is not reason why I admire him, the really point let me be his fans is his gratitude feelings and persistence of perseverance.
Ronaldo is a tender feelings man under his tough appearance,the most important things he teach me is that we should gratitude everyone who ever helped us, When he was 18,of which playing for Manchester united，even though he has unparalleled football talent，he was always neither well with team cooperation, nor handle for his applause and criticism. At this time, the Manchester united coach Sir Alex ferguson give most patient guidance to him. Latter, When Ronaldo every time honored, he always expresses his gratitude to Alex ferguson.“He is just like my father and friend!”
Moreover, another point he inspired me is his persistence for his persuit. From a youth to the leader of the national football team, Ronaldo is always to spare no effort to devote his time and energy, and as for the life of football. He is always the first came to the training ground, the last to leave. Now, he is nearly thirty years old, but he still keep the highest level on the field.
In sum, it is my general description about Christian Ronaldo above, I learn to be an gratitude person with strong mind from he. no pains, no gains. Only when you work hard, you can come true your dream. These lessons exercise a great influence on my life. Ronaldo, thank you so much for not only giving interest of football to me but also teaching me how to be a good person. Recently, the New Year's golden ball players will reveal, Ronaldo remains at the top, all is own to his gratitude mentality and unremitting persistence, and I will continue to give my greatest respect, Hala Madrid!
The person I admire most
Everyone has someone in his heart that he admires most, who may be a scientist, a writer, a musician or a movie super star. But, as for me, the most admirable person of mine is my dearest mother. My mother is an ordinary woman. She is not very beautiful and a little heavy as well as me. But sometimes, you will think she is very kind and enthusiastic. Although she doesn’t have high education, she is very capable. She is excellent in social contact and bargaining. She loves me and my brother, tries to give us the comfortable surroundings to study and live in. She is a sensible person, but she can’t stand someone screwing the number of my family over. No one in the world loves you more than your mother. While she gave me life, she takes me as her concern. She devotes her whole life to the family. I learn to be an optimistic person with strong mind from my mother. She also teaches me that no pains, no gains. Only when you work hard, you can come true your dream. These lessons exercise a great influence on my life.Although my mother is an ordinary person, she is still the person that I admire most. Mom, thank you so much for not only giving birth to me but also teaching me how to be a good person. No matter what will be in the future, I will always love you.
第二篇
Altitude
It is said “A man can succeed at almost anything for which he has unlimited enthusiasm!”,we can known how altitude play a important role to our success. A person who even though take a extraordinary talent, he will hard to get outstanding achievement without a good altitude to his work or study.
These are two causes why a positive altitude is so significant to our career,on the one hand, we can build a strong confidence from a good mental state facing unpredictable challenges,in turn, which will unleash your
unlimited enthusiasm to push you to devote time and energy to your work. Beethoven, who is the greatest composer and pianist in the history of music,who also is a blind man at the same time,even if so, he was optimistic in the facing of life, come over all blocks we can not image with a strong determination ,and finally compose the many wonderful music . On the other hand, as the saying goes, “Failure is the mother of success”, but I think it better to say,”Failure will always around you without a good attitude!”,there is no doubt that it is be so difficult for us to succeed. When I was third grade in primary school, it was very popular for us learning play the guitar, Before that, I have had some music knowledge due to study for a year, for which , I don't have to go to learn to play guitar with a good altitude, of course, in the end, those who had not studied or without any basis students learn better than me under the positive and careful study. So it is a enthusiastic attitude that make their life full of music and make goal has been achieved.
In sum, which the factors of success dominated by altitude after all ? Confidence, optimistic, courage or all above ? Perhaps,it is not necessary for us to discuss the answer to it, because someone have adjust a good altitude to facing their life,stress and work ,when you are consider this question.
篇二:《作文》
大学英语四级考试作文预测（2011.11）
预测作文（一）
Unhealthy Lifestyles of University Students
1． 不少大学生的生活方式消极，不上课，不运动，不出去社交，而是宅在家里或宿舍，导致知识水平下降的同时身体素质也在下降。
2． 你对此有什么看法和建议？{929作文网}.
【范文】
In recent years, many university students would like to stay at home or dormitory rather than to attend compulsory courses, take exercises or join in social activities. This kind of unhealthy lifestyle will do harm to their physical conditions to some extend, and reduce their scope of knowledge.
Unhealthy lifestyles of university students are caused by their reversed biological clock, addiction to computer games, irregular dietary structure, all kinds of competition pressures, and so on. To improve this way of life, joined efforts are needed. As to universities, they should hold the idea “health comes first” and educate students to conscientiously observe the rules of discipline and study hard. Parents should cooperate with universities by creating comfortable atmosphere at home. Most importantly, university students themselves should form good habits and
healthy interests, take extracurricular activities positively and do exercises regularly.
预测作文（二）
Character Education
1． 学校教育除了培养学生的学习能力之外，还应注重诸如孝顺、诚实等的品德培养；
2． 品德培养的重要性。
【范文】
Normally school education aims to cultivate students' abilities to learn and think. But more and more people realize that without the cultivation of moral norms and ethics, we can hardly expect a society to be nice enough for leading a harmonious life. As a result, schools should attach more attention to develop students’ character education, such as qualities of honesty and filial piety.
Character education plays an important role in the development of future society. It meets the need of emphasizing and developing the students’ all-round qualities. In the long run, it protects students from being selfish, indifferent, conceited as well as impolite in their daily lives. What's more, it teaches students how to learn efficiently, how to live colourfully, how to do things seriously, for their own future, and also for the future of their
motherland.
预测作文（三）
Does Knowledge Change Fate?
1． “知识改变命运”曾是无数寒门子弟奋斗的动力所在，可如今现实却是，不仅知识难以改变命运，穷孩子能接触到知识的机会也在减少。
2． 你对此有什么看法，且应采取什么措施阻止这种现象？
【范文】
Large number of children from poor families once held the belief "Knowledge can change fate" and thought that hardworking could reward them-- As one sows, so will one reap. But now the true fact is that not only knowledge can't change fate, but also the chances for poor ones to gain knowledge have decreased.
This phenomenon brings more harm than good to society. First, it makes the rich-poor divide ever widening, and sense of injustice ever deepening. Second, it may let many real potential genius go away. Third, it runs against the repeated call for building a people-oriented, harmonious society.
Therefore it needs to take urgent measures. On the part of government, it
should increase its investments on education and urge all universities and colleges to make preferential policies for enrolling poor students. As to colleges and universities, they should establish completed systems for scholarship and fellowship in order to assist poor students.
预测作文（四）
Indirect Employment
1． 工作难找，大学生流行“曲线就业”，通过实习或做一些杂活积累社会经验。
2． 你对此有什么看法？
【范文】
Confronting the more and more severe employment situation, university graduates have tried indirect employment for finding ways out. Instead of getting good jobs, they try to gain social experience by doing internships or taking in some social activities.
I am completely in favor of taking indirect employment. Firstly, it can not only relieve employment pressure, but also let students gain new knowledge and practical experience which can't be gotten from books. Secondly, it benefits students a lot since it helps them to realize clearly what their real potentials are, and in which kind of jobs they really show interests. Last but not the least, it improves university students' social skills, qualifications and personal qualities, which are the main factors for their future jobs.
预测作文（五）{929作文网}.
Who Should Pay the University's Tuition？
1． 大学学费不断上涨，有人认为大学学费应由学生自己赚取，有人认为应由父母供给。
2． 作为大学生，谈谈你自己的观点，并给出理由。
【范文】
University education plays an important role in a person’s career since it offers people more opportunities. With the rising of university's tuition, hot discussions have arisen about who should pay the university's tuition. Some say students should pay fees by themselves as they pay for their own life. Some think that tuition fees should be paid by their parents because that amount of money is beyond students' ability.
As far as I am concerned, I think parents should pay part of the fees while university students bear the rest part. It is true that trying to make money will affect university students' studies. But doing part-time jobs will help them gain working experience, learn more of society as well as realize the importance of saving money. Most importantly, it helps to lighten financial burdens of parents.
大学英语六级考试作文预测（2011.11）
预测作文（一）
篇三:《感受》
加入名师工作室的体会
我参加名师工作室时间虽不长，收获却颇丰，这是因为工作室为我们几个成员提供了宝贵的学习机会，也为我们搭建了一个良好的信息交流平台。我相信，通过名师工作室的努力，我们几个成员一定会实现促使教学质量飞跃的目标，人的成长是人的经验积累和不断更新的的历史，经验积累帮助名师构建个人知识体系，孕育实践智慧，丰富人生的经验。这个积累的过程也真正使老师们夯实基础，厚积而薄发。
首先，我想谈谈参加名师工作室的初衷。一是出于对邹老师人品和教学风格的景仰。她非常无私地帮助年青教师，她的指导让我获益匪浅。二是出于对近几年自身教学现状的反思和不满。在这几年的教学中，我发现学生缺乏对数学学科真正的热爱，盲目地追求分数，没有感受到数学的魅力。是我的教学模式僵化了吗?我应该怎样激发学生对数学的热情？怎样才能让教学寓教于乐同时又能使学生水到渠成地获得高分？我在寻找结合点和突破口，而名师工作室的成立恰好给我提供了契机。
我认为这种学习对一线教师是非常必要的，具有高屋建瓴的指导作用，因为我们在教学实践的过程中，往往会因为各种利益的驱使而使教学偏离了它应该遵循的轨迹，比如对分数过于执着的追求就有可能导致这种偏离，最终的结果是题海大战，狂轰滥炸，教师苦教，学生苦学，而效果还不一定好。在学习了新课标的精神之后，我领悟到数学教学是一门综合的艺术，不是简单地
教学生背定义，也不是反复地操练做题，虽然这些也是必要的，但数学教学更应该体现它的特质。我们是在不断应用中实现了提升。启迪思维，在学习中体会成功的喜悦，如果我们能本着新课标的精神来进行教学，培养学生的思维能力，激发他们的兴趣，帮助他们形成有效学习策略，那取得好成绩也是水到渠成的事。所以，在新课程标准下，教师被赋予了新的角色。我们不仅仅是知识的传授者，我们还是学习活动的组织者，学习过程的指导者和监督者，学习成果的评价者，更是学习动机的激发者。
在邹老师的带领下，我们工作室每个成员会努力以尽可能少的时间、精力和物力投入，取得尽可能多的教学效果，全面促进学生发展。我相信，这是所有教师追求的理想教学境界。如果我们的研究能给更多的教师启迪，能使更多的数学课堂减负，使更多的课堂充满乐趣，使更多的学生从中受益，那我们就算取得了成功，从而实现名师工作室以点带面的宗旨。
教师这一职业要求我们不断充实自我，与时俱进，才能使知识更新，教法常新。只有有活力的教学才能让我们更好地履行教育者的职责，回应社会的要求。
篇四:《作文精编文档》
苦趣
张作人
苦趣是翱翔天际的雄鹰回忆曾跌落悬崖无所畏惧的微笑，苦趣是蚌壳抚摸曾被磨伤却成为珍珠沙粒时
的喜悦，苦趣是势不可挡的流水追溯曾作为雨滴重重掉下却汇成江河的超然，苦是趣的基础，趣是苦的升华。{929作文网}.{929作文网}.
大漠黄沙
黄沙之中，你在深夜的寒冷和恐惧下写下了方程的最后一笔，多年研究，至此结束。当初，你来到这
简陋的办公室，却做着国家最重大的工程。你要用事实证明，我们简单而无器械的大漠中的小屋决不输于美国城中最复杂的工厂，我们木头做的算盘决不差于美国的机械电子计算机。时而 没有食物的饥饿不输于精美西餐的富足。
终于，你熬过了苦，在这苦中找寻到了乐趣，按下按钮的时刻，一声巨响，震惊了世界，一屋模图，
带动了中国，一个名字，荡涤了人心。你是邓稼先，两弹元勋，在无食，缺电，没有实验器材的苦中战胜了美国的的顶尖核物理实验室，得到了单独属于你的乐趣。是干渴旅人品尝到水的甘甜，那是你的苦趣。
修篱种菊
山间的清晨，天气总是寒凉，而在山中的寒风之中，一个衣衫单薄，瘦弱不堪的书生在山间的小道
上行走，他远离世俗，不食烟火，而短褐穿结，箪瓢屡空，其屋不遮烈阳，不避狂风。但他却在这清苦的日子中找到了乐趣，他采菊修篱，饮酒写诗，穿屐而行，爨豆而食，无丝竹之乱耳，无案牍之劳形，终成田园诗人之代表。
他是陶渊明，清苦日子中的山中仙人，他在苦中寻得了世间无法找到的乐趣，得到了心灵的升华。
苦是人生的沉淀，趣是人生的喷发，没有苦的阻拦，哪来趣的爆发呢？
故曰：天将降大任于是人也，必先苦其心志，劳其筋骨，饿其体肤，空（kòng）乏其身，行拂乱
其所为，所以动心忍性，曾益其所不能。
黑暗不就是为孕育光明而存在的吗？
丢
雄鹰丢掉了草原，你认为它会消失?不，它是去欣赏大漠的磅礴;企鹅丢掉了天空，你认为它会灭亡?不，它是去追寻大海的自由;红梅丢掉了春天，你认为它会枯萎?不，它是去探寻白雪的贞洁。丢，有时也是一种获得。{929作文网}.
鲲鹏展翅
河边，你手持一支钓竿，悠闲地坐在草苔上，口中还念道：“相濡以沫，不如相忘江湖……”身旁久立的二人等不了了，向前一步：“庄先生，大王请你入朝为相!”你充耳不闻，这时，一只乌龟游出水面，你便乌龟寻问：“你是愿意在野外玩泥巴，还是愿意被人关进金丝笼里?”龟说：“金丝笼虽好，还是不如野外自由。”听后，你抚掌大笑，头也不回地走了，只剩下两个人在风中凌乱。你就是这般超然，轻生死，仿佛一切都与你无关，你不贪慕荣华，箪瓢屡空，晏如也。
庄子丢掉唾手可得的富贵，获得了一双鲲鹏的翅膀，展翅高飞，摩云上九天!
瘦马骑行
古道荒原，落日熔金，只有你嗒嗒的马蹄声响彻天宇，一旁的双杠丘骑着驴，慢慢地前进。你丢掉了安逸的乡村生活，偏偏要去复兴骑士的光荣，解救中了魔法的杜西娅夫人。在平原上，你举长戈，冲进羊群里四处击杀;村落旁，你戴好淬下来的甲胄与风车巨人对抗，驿道边，你擦干满是奶酷的头盔与雄狮对视，你就这样游荡，任他人笑你疯癫。
堂吉诃德丢掉了传统乡村贵族的安逸，骑着瘦马举长戈地闯入了全世界的心里!
凤凰涅槃
天桥下，风雨击打着路上的行人，天压抑地快要窒息，你混着冰冷的雨水啃着难以下咽的干面包。与你同时代的弗洛德从帝国大厦的顶端跃下，你为什么不呢?是啊，你丢掉了自暴自弃，在几年后重返苹果公司。苹果公司当时正濒临倒闭，你又何苦去成为这样公司的总裁?你放弃了自暴自弃，研发新产品，一举抢占市场。
乔布斯，苹果公司的总裁，丢掉了自暴自弃，开创了一个网络时代的新领域!
雄鹰丢掉了草原，换来大漠的磅礴;企鹅丢掉了天空，换来大海般的自由;红梅丢了春天，换来了白雪的贞洁，我们是否也该丢了某些无须有的负担，换来一个更辉煌的明天呢?
抵 达
九年级（12） 陈龙平
你生活的起点并不是那么重要，重要的是最后你抵达了哪里。 ---巴菲特
几千年前，脍炙人口的儿童读物——《三字经》中，开篇便强调了“人之初，性本善；习相近，性{929作文网}.
相远。”的理论。几千年后，无独有偶，美国的《独立宣言》，也以“人生而平等”为中心展开了对独立和自治的论述。由此可见，每个人，在出生之时，并无多大不同，没有任何高低贵贱之分。
但，世界上没有真正的平等。人与人相比，总有高下之分。那么，高下之分，在于何处？其实，人的高下之分，实质上，在于此人的成就。
成就分为三等。
第一等，是个人所获得的名誉。被称为人生赢家的业界大佬——马云，当年也不过是人堆中一粒默默无闻的“沙子”，也曾经历过高考失败，创业艰辛等人生中的风雨。但是，他并未就此放弃，他励志创业，树立了自己的梦想。他说：“我跟所有人一样，一开始的榜样是盖茨、李嘉诚，但我后来发现他们不是我的榜样，我没法向他们学习，因为他们太强大了。真正的榜样一定在你身边，你做小饭馆，榜样就是斜对面的小饭馆。”正是明确了榜样的观念和人生的目标，马云才抵达了成功的彼岸。可是，敬佩马云的人数不胜数，而真正欣赏其精神的人，有多少呢？多半是觊觎他的财富罢了。
第二等，是抵达的人生境界。19世纪上半叶的美国，正处于向工业时代转型的初始阶段。伴随着资本主义社会工业化的脚步，经济不断发展，造成在社会中普遍流行的拜金主义和享乐主义思想成为人们心中的主导思想。出于对金钱的漠视和对自然的向往，亨利．梭罗隐居于瓦尔登湖湖畔，远离尘嚣。在那里，梭罗参透了人生的真谛，长年的隐居与思考，促使他写下名著《瓦尔登湖》。在生活与写作中，他的内心，得到了永恒的宁静。他的著作，使无数人开始重新审视和思考人生的意义；他的精神，使他抵达了非常人所及的境地；他的行为，映照了美国诗人杰克． 伦敦笔下的诗篇——
“宁做飞灰，不做浮尘；宁投入了熊熊烈火，兴尽而灭，不伴寂寂朽木，漠然同腐。宁为耀眼流星，迸发万丈光芒；不羡永恒星体，悠悠沉睡千古。”
第三等，是奉献毕生，为人类做出贡献。他，不顾自身安危，在雷雨天放风筝，证明了电的存在；在对电的研究过程中，发现了正、负电荷的守恒，为电学的发展作出了巨大贡献；他是美国独立战争的重要领导者之一，为美国《独立宣言》的起草和自治权的争取付出了心血和汗水；他是美国第一任驻外大使，通晓英、法、意、西班牙、拉丁等语言。在外交上起到了巨大的作用；他还是一位慈善家，帮助了不少穷人。他淡泊名利，墓碑上只有简单的一句话“印刷工富兰克林。”他是本杰明 富兰克林。经济学家杜尔哥这样评价他：“他从苍天那里取得了雷电，从暴君那里取得了民权。”在百元美钞上，他的身影赫然挺立；而在世界人民心中，他的形象也永垂不朽。他，抵达了人生的高度。
此三等成就，在本质上，并无多大区别；只因在价值观上，人们对其看法不同，所以，才有层次之分。而这三种成就，其共性，可简要概况为“抵达”
抵达成功，抵达境界，抵达价值和高度。人生正是因为有抵达，才有成就；有了成就，才能体现出人格的独特与层次的高低。
抵达，才是人生的意义所在。
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抵达是历经磨难的旅者看见家乡时的温暖，抵达是久经航行的帆船看见港湾时的欣喜，抵达是登山者筋疲力尽时看到平坦山顶的雀跃。在生活中，我们也许会有许多目标，但只要一个个抵达它们，你就是生活中的王者。
抵达目标，需要坚持不懈的精神。
战国时期的苏秦，从小便认为自己是一个可以成大事的人，然而面对游说各国时诸王的白眼，他沉默地回到了家乡，家中的兄弟姐妹讥笑他不务正业，苏秦十分惭愧，于是闭门不出，立志要将所有藏书都读透，到了晚上，苏秦感到困倦，为了让自己清醒过来，他用锥子刺自己的大腿，一刻都不敢懈怠，坚持埋头苦读一年后，苏秦已是学富五车。他引经据理，不仅成功游说了六国，还被授予了“六国国相”的至高职位。
苏秦正是凭借坚持不懈的精神，才成功抵达了自己理想的彼岸。 所以，拥有坚持不懈的精神，才能抵达自己理想的彼岸。面对成卷的书籍，面对君王们的冷嘲热讽，苏秦坚持了下来，从而抵达目标，反之，如果苏秦半途而废，那么历史上将会少了一个赫赫有名的贤臣，多了一个碌碌无为的庸人。
抵达目标，需要乐观向上的态度。
宋代文人苏轼，一心报国，但却屡次惨遭陷害，面对一贬再贬的悲苦境地，苏轼却没有就此消沉，他在自己的辖区惩办悍吏，整顿军事，关心民生，并作“门前流水尚能西，休将白发唱黄鸡！”的千古名句以表达自己对生活的乐观态度，之后尽管被贬至偏僻之地海南，苏轼却依然以每天吃牡蛎为美，以读书为乐，在不如意的官场中，苏轼的笑容从容洒脱，苏轼坚守着自我，从而抵达了心灵的驿站，以及让后世仰望的高度。
有了乐观向上的态度，那么哪怕在绝境之中，你也能看见那一丝希望的曙光，从而抵达人生的目的地。 只有拥有了坚持不懈的精神，乐观向上的态度，你才能抵达自己想要的目标，正如苏轼，苏秦一样，就让我们以坚持和乐观为船桨，一起抵达成功的彼岸吧！