篇一:《创新英语作文导析》
创新英语作文导析
一、导语
What does beauty really mean? Everybody has it's own definition. The standard of beauty changes with different society, culture and nations. Some hold the point that the beautiful appearance is of great importance, which is visible to all. Others have the idea that the spiritual beauty is the loveliest one, which lasts long. However different it might be, their opinions are all acceptable.
什么是美呢？每个人都有自己的定义。美的标准因社会、文化和国度不同而产生差异。有的人认为相貌上的美是最重要、最直观的美；有的人认为心灵上的美是最可爱、最长久的美。虽然这些想法大不相同，但是它们对美的定义却都是不无道理的。
二、创设情境
以" What is beauty in your mind? "为主题，发表自己的观点，题目自拟。要求:
1. 行文流畅，观点鲜明，论证充分；
2. 内容丰富，层次分明，逻辑性强；
3. 词数 150 左右。
三、学生习作
※正方习作※
Beauty will buy no beef
Everyone admires beauty. Everyone has his own standard about beauty.
Nowadays some people tend to think that they own beauty if they have a good looking. They are not satisfied with their appearance. They spend much money taking a kind of operation. Can beauty really be man-made? If so, everybody can get beauty. As a result, there is no beauty at all. The appearance is given by our parents and is unique in the world. Everyone should value it. I'd （ 1 ） rather prefer nature as the standard of beauty. Just accept yourself, accept everything the god gives to you, and create the beautiful life （ 2 ） belong to you.
Many heroes don't have beautiful surface. However, their beautiful images often come to our minds. Their beauty comes from their contributions to the society.
Don't be eager to judge whether a person is beautiful or not without a thorough understanding of him. A beautiful person is not the one with a good looking, but with a broad and kind heart. Good looking is pleasant while spiritual beauty is more important. As an old saying goes, " Virtue is fairer than beauty. " If you have a kind heart, you own real beauty.
点评:
本文以谚语"漂亮不能当饭吃"为题，直截了当地亮出了自己的观点。全文以"美德胜于美貌"为主线，阐述了"追求外形美而放弃了内在美并不是真正的美"，"英雄之美源于奉献"。文章观点鲜明，行文顺畅，结构严谨，用词恰当。难能可贵的是，作者能运用谚语来强化自己的观点，有较强的英语语言组织能力和表达能力。
文中语言错误: （ 1 ） I'd rather prefer 改为 I'd prefer . would rather 表"宁愿", prefer 也是"宁愿"，两者不能连用在一起。（ 2 ） belong to 改为 belonging to . belonging to you 在此处作定语。
※反方习作※
A good face is a letter of recommendation
Some people say beauty is just a skin deep. I don't quite agree with them. Good appearance
often makes a big difference in social communication, competition, finding jobs and so on. Not only can good appearance help you become more confident, but also it helps you be impressed. If you want to get a good job, the first sight is important. Physical beauty is （ 1 ） probable to draw much attention.
However, we have to face this problem. We have no right to choose our appearance. When necessary, we can make up ourselves. If you think doing this is a good way to improve your confidence, just do what you really want to regardless （ 2 ） others' opinion. It is worth all the money and time. Facing a variety of social pressures, we young people should build confidence. Confidence is the key to success.
In a word, you may not be the most beautiful one, but you can be the most attractive one； you may not the best one, but you can be the most confident one. Show yourself and chances will kiss you in time.
点评:
爱美之心，人皆有之。一副好脸孔就是一封介绍信。作者围绕这一主题进行阐述。在现代社会里，美丽的外表在社交、竞争、求职等方面的有着不可低估的作用。作者立意大胆，构思巧妙，很有个性。文章叙述清楚，条理清晰，层次分明，过渡自然。在语言表达上，巧妙地使用了倒装、排比等句式和一些"亮点"词语，增强了文章的感染力。对于一名中学生来说，本文不愧是一篇优秀习作。
文中语言错误: （ 1 ） probable 改为 likely . probable 不能用某人或某物作主语，常用 it 作形式主语，构成 it is probable for sb. to do sth. 结构。（ 2 ） regardless 之后加 of . regardless of 是复合介词，意为"不理会，不顾"。
篇二:《初中英语作文范例：What is beauty in your mind？(什么事美)》
初中英语作文范例：What is beauty in your mind？（什么事美） Everyone admires beauty． Everyone has his own standard about beauty．
Nowadays some people tend to think that they own beauty if they have a good looking． They are not satisfied with their appearance． They spend much money taking a kind of operation． Can beauty really be man－made? If so， everybody can get beauty． As a result， there is no beauty at all．
The appearance is given by our parents and is unique in the world． Everyone should value it． I would rather nature as the standard of beauty． Just accept yourself， accept everything the god gives to you， and create the beautiful life belonging to you．
Many heroes don't have beautiful surface． However， their beautiful images often come to our minds． Their beauty comes from their contributions to the society．
Don't be eager to judge whether a person is beautiful or not without a thorough understanding of him． A beautiful person is not the one with a good looking， but with a broad and kind heart．
Good looking is pleasant while spiritual beauty is more important． As an old saying goes， " Virtue is fairer than beauty． " If you have a kind heart， you own real beauty．
篇三:《英语作文》
Being alone doesn’t mean being lonely
Being alone is a situation where you’re left without others. However, being lonely is a kind of unhappy feelings with power which can eat you away. What’s the important point is that being alone doesn’t definitely result in loneliness directly, let alone being alone means beings lonely. Being alone, one always falls in love with this tranquil moment, while people can never enjoy loneliness happily. Alone, one can also easily meditate and corresponding philosophy always comes into being in this case. The famous Chinese poet Li Bai said: “sitting alone besides Mount Jing Ting, we never tired of each other.” This is a pleasure as wonderful as Zhuang Zhou’s dream of becoming a butterfly. Both of them staying alone in mountains, they never felt lonely, and a feeling of fantastic harmony with the surroundings is what they get. Moreover, being alone is never the dispensable prerequisite of loneliness. Loneliness can overwhelm people even though they are surrounded by a crowd of people. Loneliness has nothing to do with the number of people around you, but what kind of people around you is the point. If one has no congenial friends or people to talk to, chaotic crowd only burdens him with more loneliness to unbearable extent.
In a word, people can enjoy being alone, but who can bear being lonely? Therefore, being alone does not mean being lonely.
Work and happiness
As we all know, an unhappy king cannot make his people happy. So, actually the relation between work and happiness is just simple. If you work happily, you achieve happiness. On the contrary, working unhappily, no matter what you get from it, you feel absolutely unhappy, and the achievement you gain even sicken you.
One person who enjoys his work feels each day is a fresh day; his work is just not a job, but a cause or a career for him. His achievement from work just adds more happiness. However, if a person does not like his work, his work is just a heavy burden put on him and no one can get happiness when bearing a cross, even a golden one. A famous poet, Tao Yuanming would become a famer rather than being an officer. It is evident that he loved faming work. The pity is that he was starved to death, but the point is that he died happy, not died working sickly.
Unhappy work is just a slow poison and one day, you will fall down unhappily. Happy work is honey making your days happier.
The kind of beauty that lasts longer
The world never lacks beauty, but a lack of eternal beauty always exists. What on earth can stand the test of time?
Fine complexion and good stature will always fade away irresistibly with the elapse of youth. Only the beautiful virtues within the beauty are left in people’s mind. That is what lasts longer even forever.
What people can remember forever will be everlasting. The memory of the external appearance of beauty springs up in every age like grass. But the benevolence, kindness, wisdom, purity and talents are impressed on people forever. They are tested by time like spirit in heaven. In fact, time witnesses their perpetual glorious beauty and also helps their eternity.
Briefly, the spare beauty with virtues can last longer just like the spirit in heaven.
What does work mean to me?
What does work mean? The answers vary from person to person. To me, work is my fountain of happiness. From it I gain pleasure, satisfaction, confidence, and independence; because of it I am respected, fulfilled, improved, and perfected.
篇四:《初中英语作文范例：What is beauty in your mind？(什么事美)》
初中英语作文范例：What is beauty in your mind？（什么事美） Everyone admires beauty． Everyone has his own standard about beauty．{what,does,beauty,mean,to,you英语作文}.
Nowadays some people tend to think that they own beauty if they have a good looking． They are not satisfied with their appearance． They spend much money taking a kind of operation． Can beauty really be man－made? If so， everybody can get beauty． As a result， there is no beauty at all．
The appearance is given by our parents and is unique in the world． Everyone should value it． I would rather nature as the standard of beauty． Just accept yourself， accept everything the god gives to you， and create the beautiful life belonging to you．
Many heroes don't have beautiful surface． However， their beautiful images often come to our minds． Their beauty comes from their contributions to the society．{what,does,beauty,mean,to,you英语作文}.
Don't be eager to judge whether a person is beautiful or not without a thorough understanding of him． A beautiful person is not the one with a good looking， but with a broad and kind heart．
Good looking is pleasant while spiritual beauty is more important． As an old saying goes， " Virtue is fairer than beauty． " If you have a kind heart， you own real beauty．
篇五:《英语作文》
（二）图画型
1.
（描述图画）This is a satiric but true-to-life drawing. As we can see in it, a man is sweating, with his hand on his chest and a regretful and painful expression on his face. The words above him should be his monologue, which goes, “Shit. I’ve forgotten to take a photo of the Starbuck coffee that I’ve just had. Then what did I drink it for?”
（点明寓意）Ridiculous as it might seem, the phenomenon mirrored by the cartoon is not uncommon in modern society. Actually, both the picture and instances in real life point to the fact that many people nowadays make too much a point of showing off their life experiences online, by such channel as weibo (micro blog) and weixin (WeChat).（举例论证）It is never too rare to see some people taking pictures of newly served dishes in a restaurant and upload them to their friend circle. Nor is it to find people busy taking photos and update their micro blogs when touring. Some even dine or tour merely for the purpose of showing off, just as the person in the picture does. Their only goal seems to be attracting as much attention online as possible.
（提出建议）Such being the case, it is high time that we
pondered over the problem and figured out a solution. Among all measures, I believe, the central one should be resisting the temptation of vanity brought along by such modern media as micro blog and WeChat, and coming more back to life itself.
2. My View on Plastic Surgery
（描述图画）This is a wittily designed photo. As we can see in it, a handsome husband and an attractive wife are taking a family picture with their three kids, whom look just opposite to their parents in their looking. The caption reads, “What you only need to worry about is how to explain it to your kids”. （点明寓意）Apparently, this picture is meant to reveal the surging trend of plastic surgery. Taking a look around, one can find examples too many to enumerate.（指出有争议）To this practice, people’s attitudes differ considerably. Some embrace it readily whereas others criticize and even condemn it harshly. （我的观点）Personally, I am inclined to agree with the latter and I base my position on the following reasons. （分析原因）In the first place, I deem that physical appearances are always of less great importance than inner beauty and practical ability. In the second place, I am definitely opposed to the concept that there is an established norm of beauty. Instead, I hold that beauty, even in the
physical sense, manifests itself in varied ways. Last but not least, as is well known, plastic surgery can be very dangerous, resulting in some irreversible injuries.
（总结）Taking into consideration all the above-mentioned, we may safely come to the conclusion that plastic surgery is definitely unnecessary for normal people. （建议）We should focus more on our inner world and try to attract others with our personality and intelligence.
3. Perseverance: Key to Success
（描述图画）This is a wittily designed and inspiring picture. As it shows, is searching for water. He has already dug many holes in the ground but none of them has reached the water. In fact, the water is just a few inches below the bottom of one of the holes. With a cigarette between his lips and his spade in his hands, he walks away leisurely, saying to himself in mind that there is no water here and I shall try another place. （点明寓意）Simple as the picture is, the message it conveys is profound and far-reaching. Obviously, it is meant to tell us about the importance of perseverance on our way to success. There is no denying the fact that nowadays an increasing number of youth lack the spirit of persisting on. （举例论证）A case in point is that many of them change their jobs or careers too
frequently. Faced with a bit setback or difficulty, they choose to quit and change their goals. （分析影响）If the situation goes as it is, the consequence will be disastrous not only for individuals but for the society as a whole.{what,does,beauty,mean,to,you英语作文}.
（总结 + 建议）Bringing what has been discussed into a conclusion, we may say that the lack of perseverance is a major barrier on our way to success. In a word, we should truly understand the profound meaning of the picture and try various means to cultivate our perseverance.aa
在阅读题和词汇语法题中，有这几个词的选项肯定是答案：beyond, entitle, available, bargain, lest, except for
在"自然科学"阅读中，有这几个词的选项肯定要排除：all, only, totally, compalatly, unlimiely.
在"态度题"中，有这两个词的选项要排除：indifferent（漠不关心的），subject（主观的）
作文题目强烈推荐－－－－－"网络的利弊"
词汇：（很有冲刺性）
come go keep hold get put make turn bring look call ask stand lay run live
以上词跟介词搭配必考几道！
重点记忆词汇－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－（括号内注明的是这次要考的意思）
bargain（见了就选） except for（见了就选） offer（录取通知书） effects（个人财物） gap（不足、差距） mark(污点、做标记) mind（照料、看管） moment（考了8次） present（拿出） inquire deliberate advisable accuse anything but for consume with extensive at intervals origin preferable to procedure profitable property pace point range refuse refer to relief religion relatively release rise single sole spoil stick suit surprise urgent vary tense tolerant trace vacant weaken wear off
需要辨析的：
1. call off（取消、放弃） 和 call up（召集、唤起） 2. adapt to 和 adopt
3. arise 和 arouse 4. count on = rely on 5. cope with = deal with
6. no doubt 和 in doubt 7. employee 和 employer 8. general 和 generous
9. instant 和 constant 10. lie（及物） 和 lay（不及物） 11. regulate 和 regular
12. supply（有目的提供） 和 offer（无目的提供）
语法：（分值小）
1． 虚拟语气：
表示建议的几个词：wish, would rather, had rather;
it is time that + 过去式；
it is high time that + 过去式；
but for、lest、as if、as though、would、should、could、might +动词原型。
2． 非谓语动词：
最常考：不定式 表示主动、将来，通常爱做后置定语；
其次考：分词 现在分词表示主动进行，过去分词表示被动完成。通常做状语。
再次考：动名词 动词名词化，做主语和宾语。
3． 时态：
按出题可能性大小依次为：将来完成时，过去完成时，现在完成进行时，现在完成时，一般现在时。
4． 语态：
篇六:《英语作文》
第一节 情景作文（20分）
假设你是李华，光明中学的学生。寒假期间你参加了社区居委会组织的社区服务活动。
请你按照图片顺序，以―Community Service‖为题，向学校英文校刊投稿，介绍这次活动情况。
参考词汇：sports facilities体育设施
Community Service
Fist we went to visit an old lady who lived all alone. While we were in her home, one of us chatted with her and the rest helped do a thorough cleaning. We swept the floor and dusted the table. When the work was done, the house looked really neat and tidy then we went to the sports center, where different sports facilities needed polishing. We set out to work at once. In no time everything was dust-free. To make the environment clean, we also picked up the litter on the grass and along the paths. As the Spring Festival was around the corner, we put up New Year decorations on the billboard and a poster with the characters Happy Chinese New Year on it.
Having done all these, we saw a more pleasant community. Tired as we were, we felt happy as all of our work paid off.
第一节 情景作文 (20分)
三年的高中即将结束。请你以―I will remember my school life forever‖为题，为英语校刊投稿。
After the College Entrance Examination , the three-year school life will come to an end. It’s hard to say goodbye to my school, teachers and friends ,because I have an unforgettable time here.
My school is beautiful，with trees，gardens，modern buildings and a large playground. The school flag at the gate greets me every day in the morning，making me feel great．
I also enjoy attending classes，listening attentively to the teachers or having discussions with my classmates. Everyone actively participates and every class is meaningful．
Teachers in our school are very helpful．They are not only experienced and knowledgeable，but we also patient and understanding. Whenever I have problems with my study or life, my teachers are always there ,ready to lend a hand.
We also have colorful sports activities at schoo1. In addition to PE classes，we have more choices 1ike playing basketball, soccer，table tennis，as well as swimming. In a word, everything here will be in my heart forever.