篇一:《作文课后的感想》
作文课后的感想
西乡县峡口镇文贯小学 朱有波
11月13日，城北小学对我校进行了结对帮扶活动，有来自城北小学的杨梅教师在我校三年级进行作文教学其课程是示范课，参加人有来自城北小学的三位教师和峡口镇三--六年级的语文教师及其相关领导参加了这一次的学习和培训，会议由我校主办。
首先第一节课由来自城北小学的杨梅教师上作文示范课---一处美丽的风景，在这一堂课中，杨梅教师提前做好了充分的准备，发给学生词语宝典，让学生提前做好了预习，课堂上用自己的下水作文美丽的樱桃沟，引导学生开口说一说峡口镇的特有资源--茶。点出了话题-美丽的茶园，结合自己的实践让学生从作文结构入手，开展了写作训练，说先让学生说一说茶园春、夏、秋、冬各季节的特点，然后分各族来写春夏秋冬的特点，让每个学生分头动了起来。他的这一节课缩小了写作范围，拓宽了学生的思路，运用激励启发性的语言让学生从字词句短篇开口说，然后让学生分头写出来。再来评一评，抓住了三年级学生固有的特点，让他们展开想象，多用比喻句，拟人句，以及学过的词语来进行创作，采用师生互动，讲练结合，课堂激励评价等多种教学手段把课堂气氛推向了高潮，使得课堂教学目标更加明确，把难点进行了分解，变得简单易学。如果课题的结尾能和第22课《富饶的西沙群岛》的结尾进行仿写，或许会有更大的进步，让学生体会到社会主义的优越感。例如：“这么美丽的茶园是谁打造出来的？是文贯的老百姓用勤劳的双手打造出来的，相信在社会主义的领导之下必将更加美丽、富饶。”
第二课时由我来上的编写童话故事,在课程中我的教学目标明确，引导学生听懂和看懂童话故事，从各个角度来分析童话的特点，首先要有丰富的想象，其次采用拟人化的写法，着重强调了什么叫拟人，接着说了童话要有一波三折的特点，这一点没有分析好，最后讲了童话要有完整的故事内容，并告诉了人们一个什么道理。我运用故事录音导入，效果比较好，但是在呈现动物图片时没有处理好学生常见的动物图片，从而导致学生思维分散，最后讲了写作结构让学生思维，写作。这一节课我感想颇多，未能很好的把握住重难点，忽视了学生的主体地位，对学生的开口说没有做很好的引导，没有送给学生词语宝。
通过下午的作文讲评和作文培训活动，我着实受益匪浅，让我感到了杨梅老师的妙语连珠，教学设计有方，思维清晰，课堂层次结构合理，评价法师多样，让学生亲近自己，让学生喜欢自己，让学生爱上写作，整个课堂流程达到了高度
的完美。
在今后的作文教学中我打算从以下几方面入手：
一、作文离不开阅读，抓好阅读教学。
古人云：“读书破万卷，下笔如有神”；“熟读唐诗三百首，不会作诗也会吟”。所以要让学生广泛地阅读，不断增加词汇量，并在积累中有所发现，有所创新。引导学生在生活中学习生活的语言，写出自己所要表达上的事情。
鼓励学生写观察日记，写感想，写话题作文 ，有意识的让学生背诵优秀篇目，好的段落，把自己在阅读中学到的佳词美句抄录下来。因为只有大量的输入，才会大量的输出。从而学生的头脑才会被激活，才会有话可说，有话可写，激发了学生写作兴趣，学生就再也不怕写作了，就会提高了学生写作水平。
二、写下水作文，引导学生作文要生活化，本土化，情景化。
下水作文是一个很好的范本，让学生体会到写作斌不是一件难事。有了下水作文，我们的教学才不显得紧张忙碌，才会在教学上有的放失，教学起来才会游刃有余，引导学生写作，注重生活，写出自己得真情实感，让文章绽放地方特色，把我们的传统文化写入作文，再加上固有的山水文化，就会显得作文就有本土化特点，才会新颖别致。
三、创设写作情境，激发写作兴趣。
如开展活动、实物演示、现场表演等各种游戏活动，把学生带入特定情境之中，使学生通过亲身体验、仔细观察，在欢乐的气氛中亲自动手、动口、操作、思考，再写出自己的亲身体会，让他们在实践中尝到写作的乐趣。
四、适当地欣赏学生，鼓励肯定学生。
小学生年龄小，但他们上进心强，荣誉感强。他们非常看重教师对他们的评价，渴望成功、期盼正确评价是学生共同的心理，他们常常把教师的鼓励性评价视为最受鼓舞的精神褒奖。因此，教师适当地鼓励学生，肯定学生的成功。这样才能激活学生的写作兴趣，增强他们信心，从而提高学生写作水平。我相信长期持之以恒，做生活的有心人，做勤劳的小蜜蜂，多思考，多练笔，通过各种渠道激发学生写作兴趣，培养创新思维，一定能培养出学生对作文的浓厚兴趣，才能适应新课改的浪潮，才能提高写作能力。
篇二:《小学生优秀课后作文范文大全》
贴心的妈妈 上海闵行区田园一小 四（3）班 张宇飞 妈妈是我最贴心的人，冬天怕我感冒，夏天怕我中暑，不管春夏秋冬，无时无刻都在关心我。 记得有一天，我和妈妈走在街上。当时正是寒冬，天气特别冷，我都要缩起来了。妈妈亲切地问：“冷吗？”我点了点头，她毫不犹豫地把自己的大衣披到了我的身上。 我转向妈妈，看得出来，
因为脱了一件大衣，她比我还要冷。我心里像打翻了五味瓶似的，酸甜苦辣一起翻腾起来。 我对妈妈说：“我不冷了，你把衣服穿上吧！”妈妈说：“你穿着吧！你要是冷，我穿着大衣会觉得暖和吗？” 妈妈朝我笑了笑，顿时，我明白了她的意思。 指导老师 赵凤尧 家乡的风俗 太仓市新区第四小学 五（2）班 麻智怡 我们回到老家温州过年。老家在乡下，那连绵起伏的山峰，一片片翠绿的竹林，真是太美了。这天本是雾霾天气，恰逢雾开始消散，我便拿起手机，拍下了这美丽的风景。 过年的时候，家家户户都忙着做糕。千层糕，一层层又薄又软，糕里夹着肉，蘸点醋吃味道很香。 每家也做清明饼，鲜绿的颜色，又圆又扁，夹着笋干、瘦肉、萝卜，味道也十分好。 除了这些，还有很多风俗，如分红包、吃饺子„„在老家过年真快乐呀！ 指导老师 仲怡新 “小淘气包”和刺猬 太仓市双凤中心小学 五（3）班 赵旭彤 小狗咪咪是我家的“小淘气包”， 晚饭后，我正在楼下和咪咪玩，奶奶对我说：“快去把刺猬放出来，也让咪咪玩一玩。” “奶奶，哪儿来的刺猬？”奶奶笑眯眯地说：“呵呵，你爸爸捡到的。” 我回家里拿出了刺猬，放在了地上。咪咪很好奇，上前嗅了嗅，一会左边，一会右边，要不就绕个圈子嗅它。突然，刺猬动了一下，好像吓着了咪咪，就一直“汪汪”地叫个不停。猛然，咪咪扑了上去，却被它刺着鼻子，叫得更厉害了。 刺猬呢，怯生生的，咪咪每叫一声，它好像就发抖一次。我几次阻止咪咪叫喊，奶奶总在一旁说：“动物之间的交谈，只有它们懂，我们不要去打扰。”我让它俩这么玩着，奶奶突然一脚把刺猬踢给咪咪，咪咪机敏地躲闪了开去。我说：“奶奶，你把刺猬踢疼了。”“呦呦呦，不得了了！”奶奶站在那儿不停地笑着。 我上前摸了摸刺猬，咪咪也停止了叫喊，似乎疑惑怎么
摸这长满刺的小东西？刺猬缩成了一团，这时，咪咪的胆子也大了，它俩就这样玩了起来。 “哈哈哈哈”一阵欢笑声在楼下的空地上回荡着。 指导老师 王银菊 魔方与橡皮 太仓市沙溪镇第一小学 三（2）班 徐济成 魔方和橡皮碰到了一起。橡皮说：“小主人喜欢我。”魔方说：“不，小主人喜欢我！”他俩争得面红耳赤。 橡皮不屑地说：“得了吧，你只能转呀转的，根本没什么用，我却可以帮小主人改错字。”魔方反驳说：“我可以用来锻炼脑力。你呢，不用多久，就落得粉身碎骨的下场。”橡皮说：“小主人珍惜我，每次作业都尽量少用。再说，粉身碎骨又怎样，我可是派了大用场。” 魔方决定去找小主人评理，橡皮说：“去就去，谁怕谁！”他俩找到了小主人，小主人说：“你俩各有自己的本领，橡皮可以改错字，魔方可以开发脑力，都是我的好帮手。” 从此以后，
魔方和橡皮不再争吵，他俩不仅是小主人的好帮手，而且也成了好朋友。 这不是梦 浙江宁海县实验小学 尤洵越 我想自己能有一块土地，它不在老家的村子边，也不在外婆家的小院里，而是在月球上。 我穿上宇航服来到月球。那里插着一块特制的牌子，上面写着中国、写着浙江、写着宁海实验小学、写着我的名字、写着土地面积„„我一踏上这块土地，立即俯下身去，捧起一掬泥土，细细地看着。任风吹乱我的头发，思绪像八月中秋的钱塘江潮，我设想怎么利用和开发这块土地。 在这块土地上，我撒下神奇的种子，伴着晨雾，给它们洒水施肥，让它们发芽、开花、结果。我要研究一种果树，树上结出各种水果：苹果、梨子、枇杷、桔子、香蕉、荔枝，还要培育出新的品种，以桃子来说，它像西瓜一般大，味道也比西瓜好吃„„ 我会邀请爸爸、妈妈、爷爷、奶奶、外公、外婆、舅舅、舅妈和我的老师、同学参观这块土地，还要邀请外星人到这里来作客。 这是梦吗？我想，这不是梦！ 指导老师 干 冰 种蚕头 上海交大子弟小学 三（3）班 战家熠 星期天，我把活动课老师给的蚕头，种在家里阳台上的花盆
里，又给它浇了水。 每天，放学回家，第一件事就是到阳台上去看它，怎么还没长出叶子呢？我都有点急了。妈妈说：“耐心等着，大约要一个星期才能长出来呢。” 这天，我又跑去看，发现土里钻出四棵小芽，我高兴地喊起来：“蚕头发芽了，蚕头发芽了！” 豆芽一天天地长大，很快长出六、七片叶子。我希望快快结出蚕头，天天都在等待收获的日子。 赏菊 我们一家来到植物园，这里正在举办菊花展。 菊花为草本植物，有夏菊、秋菊和长春菊等种类，中国人最喜爱秋菊。植物园里摆放着一盆盆菊花，白色、黄色、紫色、粉色，五颜六色，还有菊花拼成的各种图案，煞是好看。植物园里有一个大棚，棚里展出了近百种菊花，有宝辛东天红，万里金光、女皇冠、水晶秋，还有从日本送来参展的菊花。 这些菊花让人赏心悦目，也给植物园增添了亮丽的色彩。 我们为爱而生 太仓经贸小学 三（1）班 罗金瞳 妈妈给我买了一本《活了一百万次的猫》。它描述一只100万次也不死的猫。这是一只虎斑猫，有100万个人宠爱过它，最后还是成了野猫。不管哪只母猫都爱它，惟有一只猫连看也不看一眼，那是一只美丽的白猫。 谁知白猫却和虎斑猫结合，它俩一起生活，生了许多小猫。白猫死的时候，那只虎斑猫哭了100万次，后来一动不动地躺在白猫身边，永永远远的待在了一起。 这本书让我明白，我们为爱而生，没有了爱，就算活100万次，也没有一点意义。虽然我们只能活一次，但世界充满了爱，爱让生活多姿多彩。有了爱，我们就是最幸福的。 指导老师 王 静 送给奶奶的画 江苏海门市东洲小学 一（6）班 陆艺轩 奶奶过生日，我准备画一幅画送给她。平时，奶奶总是驼着背，忙着做家务，我就将这模样画了下来。突然，我想起了老师教的成语：情深似海、恩重如山，便端端正正地写在画上。 我把这幅画送到奶奶手上，大声地说：“奶奶，祝您生日快乐！” 奶奶戴起老花镜，瞧了又瞧，半晌也没说话。我着急地问：“奶奶，你不喜欢吗？”奶奶说：“傻孩子，奶奶看你懂事了，高兴着呢！” 指导老师 顾英华 意外 太仓市经贸小学 二
（5）班 胡为杰 妈妈早上去杭州进货，答应给我带礼物回来，我真高兴。放学以后，我想着心爱的礼物，脚步越走越轻快。回到家里，我赶快做好作业，然后去车站接妈妈。 妈妈从105路公交车下来，她将我的礼物遗落在了车上。这时，路口亮着红灯，妈妈刚上了车，绿灯就亮了。妈妈没来得及下车，急得我哭了起来。我一边哭一边回去叫爸爸，我俩又在车站等了好久，才看到妈妈从车上走下来。 在从车站回家的路上，妈妈不停地喘气、咳嗽，我望着她疲惫的样子，心疼地说：“妈妈，都是我不好，要不是因为我，你怎么会累成这个样子呢？” 指导老师 石红英 香蕉 太仓市新区第四小学 二（1）班 王 垚 我最喜欢吃香蕉，它弯弯长长的像小船，外皮金黄，摸上去丝丝滑滑。如果香蕉熟过了头，表皮出现一粒粒芝麻般的小黑点，像有雀斑的美少女。 熟透了的香蕉，老远就闻到它的浓香，剥开果皮，奶白色的果肉，像涂了一层奶油。我咬了一口，又软又糯，甜甜的，味道美极了。 指导老师 曹丽萍 拔牙 太仓市新区第四小学 四（2）班 王妍慧 换牙的时候，其他同学的牙齿都自然地脱落，我呢，有颗牙摇摇晃晃，就是不肯掉下来。奶奶对我说：“你的这颗牙，只有去医院拔掉。” 爷爷带我去医院拔牙，刚到医院门前，我吓得畏畏缩缩，就不敢走进去。爷爷拉着我的手，一步一挪地走到了牙科诊室。我慢吞吞地在那张椅子上躺下来，医生拿出针筒朝我牙齿周围注射药水，过了一会，就动手给我拔牙。 我吓得闭上了眼睛，突然，“咔擦”一声，那只牙就拔下来了。这是我第一次拔牙，其实一点也不痛，就像被什么扎了一下。拔牙以后，我和爷爷又说又笑地回家去，好像根本没发生这件事。 指导老师 仲怡新 越狱大逃亡 太仓市沙溪镇第一小学 四（2）班 吴文天 早上一起床，我就冲到水池边，去看昨晚来的“贵客”，咦？怎么少了五只螃蟹！我疾呼：“奶奶，快来呀！螃蟹越狱逃跑啦！”奶奶闻声赶来，开始了拉似的搜捕行动。 我从床底下发现一只，正在探头探脑，奶奶用拇指和食指轻轻一夹，它就成了俘虏。“第二只在哪儿呢？”我环顾四周，哦！
在那儿呢！这只螃蟹的大螯夹着窗帘，正在往上爬，很快，它也束手就擒喽！ 这下，还剩下三只，一只吓得东逃西窜，也没有躲得过去。另一只自作聪明，以为最危险的地方才最安全，躲藏在厨房里，却被盆子压住了，动弹不得。
篇三:《课后作文2》
1--Answer:{关于课后的作文}.
A decade ago, Nancy did what so many Americans dream about. She quit an executive position and opened/set up a household equipment store in her neighborhood. People like Nancy made the decision primarily because of/owing to/due to their desire to improve the quality of their lives.
But, to run a small business is by no means an easy job. Without her steady income, Nancy had to cut back on her daily expenses. Sometimes she did not even have the money to pay the premiums for the various kinds of insurance she needed. Once she could not even pick up the phone bill and had to ask her parents to loan her some money.
Fortunately, through her own hard work, she has now got through the most difficult time. She is determined to continue pursuing her vision of a better life.
2--Answer: Henson's painful life as a slave strengthened his determination to struggle for freedom. Shortly after he achieved freedom he became a member of an organization that assisted fugitive slaves. He secretly returned to the United States several times to help others to travel the Underground Railroad to freedom. Once some slave catchers closed in on the escaping slaves and Henson when they were on the run. He disguised them and successfully avoided capture. In addition, later he built a small settlement in Dresden, Canada for escaped slaves, setting up a chapel and a school where they could learn useful ways of making a living. He held to the conviction that slavery would be abolished, all the slaves would be liberated, and the day was bound to come when racial discrimination no longer existed.
3--Answer: A burglary is reported every 15 seconds in the United States. Statistics show burglars entered more than 2 million homes last year. Actually it is almost impossible to keep a determined burglar out. All you can do is discourage him for a few minutes, thus exposing him to police patrols or those wandering around. Common sense tells us that lighting is a barrier to criminal activity. A light should be fixed in the doorway and switched on at night. Believe it or not, some people, particularly children who happen to be the last to come in, leave their doors on the latch at night. Doors of hollow core, even when locked, are vulnerable to break-ins. Thus doors of solid core or steel are much preferred as they make it difficult for the burglar to pry open. If you decide to buy an alarm device, be sure to ask for its signs and put them up on both windows and doors. Finally, a word of warning -- when you travel, make sure that you have a trusted neighbor collect and keep all the deliveries of newspapers and mail until you return. This is because a collection of newspapers and mail on the front doorstep or in your mailbox is an advertisement that no one is home.
4--Answer: The Extraterrestrial has been a topic of interest to experts and laymen /nonprofessionals alike. Researchers of various nationalities and organizations are adopting different modes of investigation in search of them. Some make close observation of stars with extremely high level of rare, radioactive elements. They believe those elements result from extraterrestrial technology that is still beyond human wit to understand. Some try to isolate radio signals from the "noise" of the universe. And some claim that they have caught sight of extraterrestrials and can even describe their appearance in detail. Researchers work up the complicated data they collect into a series of reports and books. Although no definite answer has yet been found, the explorers' hope shows no sign of fading out on account of their frustrations and they hold to the belief that their hard efforts will prove worthwhile.
5.Answer: Amid the atmosphere of Thanksgiving, rather than joining his friends in
celebration of the holiday, George was immersed in the diary left to him by his father, who died at sea after he completed two successive trips around the world. The diary brought back every moment George had spent with his father and many of the specific things his father did on his behalf. George's father used to impress on him the need to undergo all kinds of hardships in quest of excellence. He also taught him that nothing in the world could be taken for granted. Even today, George still remembers how his father would quote Aesop's famous saying "Gratitude is the sign of noble souls" and tell him to accord the greatest importance to it.
5--Answer: Robert E. Lee was born into a distinguished Virginia family in 1807. Not only was Lee's father a personal friend of George Washington, but he served three terms as governor of Virginia. Unfortunately, his life had been plagued by poor financial investments. He was jailed twice for unpaid debts and in the end was forced to flee the country. Lee's mother was the dominant force in shaping Lee's personality. Against the poignant failure of her husband, she was determined that the tragedy should not be repeated in the life of her children. Self-control, tenacity, a sense of obligation and an indomitable spirit were the virtues she taught Lee. In 1825, with an aspiration to win back the family honor, Lee began studying at West Point Military Academy. This began a new chapter of his life. Over the four years, he strictly adhered to the academy's code of conduct and consistently finished near the top of every course.
6--Answer: Here and there we see young artists who stand out from other people. They may be in worn out jeans all year round, or walk barefoot / in bare feet even in winter, or drink to excess, or cling to the fancy of creating a masterpiece without actually doing any creative work. In fact, many of them act like this just to look the part, or to be "in tune with" other artists. They have forgotten that only through persistent effort can one achieve success. 7--Answer: Tom was born a cripple, with one of his lower limbs useless. Early in his childhood, he learned that unless he exerted himself to rise above his limitations, he could not earn a living, and unless he succeeded in making a living on his own, he could not win/gain the respect of others. That was the price he had to pay for his dignity as a human being. Tom applied for numerous jobs, only to be turned down before he finally got one as a delivery boy for a Pizza Hut. He then worked as a sales representative of a sports wear company in a territory no one would want. Today he owns a fairly protitable retail shop in his hometown, and hires several people to work for him on straight commission.
8--Answer: After Dolly was born, cloning could no longer be dismissed as science fiction. The ability to create an identical twin of a lamb is but one step short of cloning humans, which many find terrifying and offensive. However the technology holds great potential for medical application. Scientists could cultivate a batch of cells and direct them to grow into whole organs or even limbs that will be genetically identical to those of the patient, thus eliminating the problem of rejection caused by immune reaction when they are transplanted into his body. Or they could take an organ from animals such as a pig that has been genetically altered so that it will be tolerated by the recipient. Then the lives of thousands of patients who die every year before a replacement heart, liver or kidney becomes available would be saved.
篇四:《关于课外活动作文》
中秋赏月
中秋之夜，黑的特别早，甚至太阳还没有落山，就已经有一个淡淡的月亮挂在天边。听新闻说，今天的月亮是近18年来的中秋节中最小但是最亮的，所以，这更增加了我对今天的月亮的兴趣。
往年，中秋节对我的吸引力往往是在那些大小不一，有荤有素的月饼上。今年不同，我更关心那轮娇小可爱的明月一些。
今年中秋的月亮，圆、亮、小巧玲珑，洁白又圆润，像一个天真可爱，调皮聪慧的小女孩在愉快地摇着裙边儿。藏蓝色的天幕上，除了皎洁的月光，还有几颗小星星。仿佛上天认为今天这个家人团圆的日子里光有月亮不够，就随手增添了几颗银星儿。。。月亮上有些黑影，那是月宫里的仙子嫦娥和小玉兔吗？难道她们也在思念吗？一阵凉风吹来，我摸了摸我的围巾，这时我发现不知什么缘故，月亮在夜空中发出了一道银光，仿佛也围了一条围巾，给人一丝亲切，一丝温柔。 这时的小花园，金色的桂花摇摇曳曳。一阵清风吹过，吐出了阵阵香风。水池中，泛起了道道波纹。大理石桥上、柳树上都泛着银光，叶子上好像被抹上了一层银粉。最奇怪的是，那些平时一入夜就开始高唱的秋虫，是在相思？是在赏月？还是在陶醉？总之，它们一声不响。 这真是一个花好月圆的夜晚啊！
钓鱼
星期天，太阳火辣辣的照着大地。小明扛着鱼杆，提着鱼桶，兴
高采烈地来到郊外的小河边钓鱼。
郊外的景色好美呀！一排排垂柳碧绿碧绿的，垂柳上有几只蝉“知了、知了”地叫，好像在说：“夏天真热呀！”绿绿的草地像铺了一块地毯，河边的小花五颜六色，它淡淡的清香引来了几只翩翩起舞的蝴蝶，小河里隐隐约约可以看到几条鱼在欢快地嬉戏、游玩。
小明开始钓鱼了，他先在鱼杆的钩上挂鱼饵，然后一甩放到水里，接着他眼睛都不眨，一直注视着水面，过了一会，鱼杆沉了一些，肯定是一条小笨鱼上钩了，小明一下子提起来，哇，钓上来一条又大又肥的鱼，他喜出望外，自言自语地说：“鱼肉大餐到嘴了。”
小明这时已经是满头大汗，可他一点都不在乎，拎着钓到的鱼高高兴兴回家了，小明今天真是大丰收了。
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