篇一:《作文traffic》
As our economy grows at a fever pitch, there is no doubt that traffic congestion becomes a growing worry for the residents of most urban areas. Some major roads are regularly choked with traffic in rush hours. The limited transport capacity contributes largely to the vexing problem.
There are many factors leading to the current situation, large and small. But small road capacity is the main one. When a volume of traffic or modal split generates demand for space greater than the available road capacity, traffic congestion occurs. So, too many vehicles, too old or narrow roads, and any other immature road infrastructure will lead to traffic jam. Traffic accident is another problem leads to traffic jam. Some of them are caused by road works and weather events, but for most of the time, this situation attributes to lax traffic rules and people’s disregard of them. The last cause is the insufficient management of the traffic systems and people's lack of awareness about traffic regulations. Many pedestrians cross the street when the traffic is red ,which is a reason for the flow of traffic.
As for the solution to this problem, in my opinion, government must play an important role in kicking this problem. On one hand, they should cooperate to control the prices of cars and improve the technology of their country to
develop electric or solar cars. On the other hand, if possible, I think building an extensive subway system can be the ideal answer. And having special lanes reserved for bicycles and motorcycles should encourage more people to use bicycles and motorcycles instead of cars. As a long-term solution, extensive subway, or surface monorail systems should be built for all the major cities.
篇二:《Obeying traffic rules》
Obeying traffic rules
There are many traffic jams and accidents on the road nowadays. More and more people die in traffic accidents. How terrible it is !
So we should do something meaningful to help us .For of all, we must be patient to wait when the traffic lights are red. Besides , we should cross the road carefully. If you like riding to school, do not ride too fast. We should try our best to obey traffic rules .
If we want to treasure(珍惜) our life ,we should obey traffic rules.
篇三:《作文》
PEP小学英语六年级上册各单元作文范例及点评
Li Ying ’S Hobby
Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV only on Saturday evening. Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy.
【要领点评】
这一篇写爱好的文章,小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习,他没有具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好,而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手,对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画.从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的
话，我们会觉得这个形象很饱满。
小朋友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时，可以从两个角度下手：一是具体地描绘；二是和上面小朋友一样，粗线条地勾画，二者各有所长，另处在行文中使用一些问句，使用一些转述的话，可以使作文更有灵气，避免了平铺直叙的缺点。比如上文的“Does she
like dancing? No, she doesn’t.”和“she says her hobbies make her happy.”就是十分不错的句
子，使读者眼前为之一亮。
Don’t be against the traffic rules
I go to school from Monday to Friday .I go to school by bike at 7:30 in the morning .I must cross two busy roads .If the traffic light is red or yellow,I know I can’t cross the road ,so I
wait.
If the light turns green, I know it means “Go”, and then I walk across the road .I always ride on the right side of the road .I am never
against the traffic rules.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规则”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的经历写起，叙述自己以什么方式去上学，在上学的路上是怎么做的，很
形象。{traffic,rules作文}.
小朋友们在作文时注意不要图大，那样很容易使文章显得空洞，而要写自己身边熟悉的事情。要注意
行文中字母的大小写、句子的标点符号等。
I Love My Family
Here is a photo lf my family. These are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother,
my brother and I.
My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital far away. He goes to work by subway. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school near my home. She goes to work by bike. After work, they like reading books. Who is the tall boy? He is my brother. He is five years older than me. He is a singer. He’s now in Beijing. He goes there by
plane.
I love my family.
【要领点评】
一个平凡的题材，一篇生动的作文。这样的命题，我们可能面对几次，甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧，了了数言，让一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上，很值得我们去思考，我们能做到吗？ 小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外，在结构上也有闪光之处。先总说，将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍，后分说，把家人的工作、上班方式，爱好一一细说。最后以一句话进行概括，起到点题的作用。我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢？
How to get to the science museum
We are going to the science museum tomorrow. There is an old thing show in the Museum. Do you know how we can get to the science museum? The science museum is next to the People’s Park. It’s isn’t far from our school. So we can go there on foot .Walk straight to the west from our school, next turn left at the post office
and walk for about 5 minutes, then turn right at traffic lights. You can find the People’s Park on the right . Walk straight, and you’ll see the
science museum.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“怎样去科学博物馆”。怎样才算是一篇好作文呢？通过你的叙述，能让别人很容易找到博物馆，这应是最基本的要求。小作者在文中告诉我们什么呢？首先他写了去博物馆的位置，最后浓墨重彩，指明从学校去博物馆的具体路线，这条路
线够清吧！
小朋友们在写这类作文的时候，总有些无从下手的感觉，不知从何说起。其实介绍路线，无非就是告诉他人某段路的起点和终点，还有就是如何从起点走到终点。要给他人说清楚，你自己首先得清楚，然后再通过自己的叙述，将路线清清楚楚得呈现出来。一定要注意行文中一些关键的地方，如在哪儿转弯，向哪儿转，经过哪些重要的交通标志或显眼的标志建筑
等。这样，你就能说清，别人也能弄明白。
Planting Trees
It’s spring. It’s time to plant trees.
篇四:《2013年宜宾市中考英语优秀作文五篇赏析》
2013年宜宾市中考英语优秀作文{traffic,rules作文}.
第三节：写作（共1题，计12分）
最近媒体对“中国式过马路”这一现象进行了尖锐的批评。请你以一个中学生的角色，写一篇短文，对“中国式过马路”这一现象加以评论。{traffic,rules作文}.
注意： 1. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和学校名称。
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。字数：80词左右，不可逐字翻译。 3. 参考词语：红绿灯traffic lights，缺乏安全意识 lack awareness of traffic safety
遵守交通规则 obey the traffic rules
Chinese Style of Crossing Streets
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A
Nowadays, many people cross streets without looking at the traffic lights. Why? I think there are two main reasons. Some people lack awareness of traffic safety. Besides, some people are so busy that they don’t want to wait for the green light.
However, it has brought danger to themselves as well as to others. So I hope something must be done to avoid traffic accidents. First of all, whoever breaks the traffic rules should be punished. Secondly, I hope government should make the crossroads more convenient and available for people to cross the street. As a student, I must observe the right light to cross the road, and never follow those who lead themselves to danger. What’s more, I will try my best to advise people to obey the rules. Only in this way can we cross streets safely.
【作文评析】
作者用了比较高级的词汇和句子结构，面面俱到，思维缜密，上下文连贯、成熟。
【优秀作文二】
B
These days, most of Chinese people don’t look at the traffic lights when they cross the street. There are two different reasons for this. On the one hand, they lack awareness of traffic safety. On the other hand, they hurry to save time because they are too busy all the time.
It’s always dangerous for people to cross the street without looking at the traffic lights. It’s reported that many people died of car accidents every year. In my opinion, we’re supposed to obey the traffic rules. We mustn’t cross the street until the traffic lights turn green. Next, it’s very important for us to help the old and the young cross the street.
As we know, life is very important for us. If we follow the rules, there will be fewer traffic accidents and we will be safe when we cross the street.
【作文评析】
作者思维细腻，使用词汇和语法结构准确、上下文连贯及语言表述得体，把所学知识运用得淋漓尽致，恰到好处。
C
Now many people cross the streets without watching traffic lights. So the traffic accidents often happen to those people who don’t obey the traffic rules. It has been a serious problem. Why don’t they obey the rules? Because some of them lack traffic rules awareness. And most of them are busy going to work. But how do we solve the problem? First of all, we must obey the traffic rules. Secondly, whoever breaks the traffic rules should be punished. At last we should te3ach kids how to cross the streets safely. If we did like that, the traffic accidents would be fewer and fewer. And we would live happier and happier.
【作文评析】
作者思维缜密，环环相扣。要点齐全，言简意赅，语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，过渡自然，字迹工整。
【优秀作文四】
D
Nowadays, Chinese people have trouble in crossing streets. Many people cross the streets without looking at traffic lights when they cross the streets. Because most of them lack traffic safety awareness. And they always do everything in a hurry. They don’t realize how dangerous they are. It’s necessary for everyone to obey the traffic rules. At the same time, people should pay more attention to traffic lights before they cross the streets. I think government should do something to deal with the problem.
【作文评析】
作者思维细腻，环环相扣，惜墨如金。表达连贯自然，语句通顺, 言简意赅。使用词汇和语法结构准确、上下文连贯及语言表述得体。{traffic,rules作文}.
【优秀作文五】
E
The picture shows what the Chinese style of crossing streets is！Many Chinese people won’t observe the traffic lights when they cross the streets. Why? Some of them lack{traffic,rules作文}.
awareness of traffic safety. Some of them are so busy that they have no time to wait for the green light.
We should obey the traffic rules. And we should advise our friends and family to obey the traffic rules, too. No matter who breaks the traffic rules should be punished. Only in this way can we live safely and happier.
【作文评析】
作者使用感叹句开头一语中的，言简意赅，还恰如其分使用了倒装句。一针见血地提出了现象，恰如其分地分析了问题，建议略显单薄。
篇五:《范文及满分作文展示》
How to Deal with the Exam Stress
Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. If we have proper stress, we can think actively and work harder. Besides, it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them. So we can pass the exams easily.
However, if we have too much stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired. We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end.
In my opinion, to deal with stress, we’d better plan and prepare well. We should also form some good habits, such as enough exercise and healthy diets. Then we’ll feel relaxed and do well in the exams.
江苏泰州卷（2015）满分作文展示
Hello,everyone,
I’m Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.
As we all know, not everyone is beautiful. I’m not tall and have an ordinary face. However,I’m not troubled for it, and instead I have confidence in myself.
What’s more, it is my sorrow that my parents sometimes don’t understand me. Worse still, I find it difficult to make friends. In this situation, I try to communicate with my parents and be friendly to others. Only in this way do I succeed in solving it.
Another problem is that I feel stressed in my studies and hardly have extra time to join in outdoor activities. In order to deal with it, I always finish my homework quickly and effectively. Finally, I improve myself greatly.
That’s all. Thank you!
湖南郴州卷（2015）范文
As a middle school student, we should have good manners. First, we should respect our parents and help them do some housework. Second, we should be polite and honest. Also, it’s always good to be kind and friendly. We should try our best to help the people in need. Third, we’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw rubbish everywhere. It’s our duty to keep our city clean and beautiful. Fourth, we are supposed to save food and water. Lastly, it’s important and necessary for us to help protect the environment.
In a word, good manners can make a difference and lead a better future.
四川资阳卷（2015）满分作文展示
Dear editor,
There are many ways for us high school students to relax ourselves. When I’m tired and stressed, I often communicate with my friend, parents and teachers. They usually give me a lot of help. Sometimes I go to the movie or listen to music to make myself relaxed. What’s more, joining in sports club is a good way to make me relaxed. For example, I play football with my friends. I also go shopping, and I will buy lots of things I like. That is the way I relax myself.
All in all, we should learn how to be relaxed. I hope all of us can enjoy our school life.
福建泉州卷（2015）满分作文展示
How to Deal with Difficulties in learning
No one can avoid meeting difficulties, let alone we students. However, it is no use complaining that we are so unlucky. We should find proper ways to deal with the difficulties that we meet.
Every time I come across some difficulties, I will refer to the reference books or search for an answer online. What’s more, I can ask my teachers or classmates for advice. To my joy, I have made great progress by dealing with the difficulties in learning.
Therefore, no matter what difficulties we meet, we’d better keep calm and try our best to overcome them.
范文1
As students, we may meet all kinds of difficulties in learning. Everyone has his own way to deal with them. Here I’d like to share mine.
Whenever I meet difficulties, I’ll look up in reference books or search for an answer online. However, when it’s something too hard for me. I usually turn to my classmates or teachers, and sometimes I ask my parents for advice. As a result, I have made great progress in my study.
By doing this, we can not only improve our study but also develop our abilities to overcome difficulties.
范文2
Everyone may face difficulties in learning. Once I could hardly follow my teachers in class and I made many mistakes in my homework and tests. I really felt sad.
Now whenever I meet difficulties, I’ll try hard to overcome them instead of giving up. Sometimes I look up in reference books or search the Internet, sometimes I turn to my teachers or classmates. With hard work, I have done much better in my studies.
Nothing is too difficult if we put our heart into it. Whatever difficulty we meet, there’s always a way for us to deal with.
内蒙呼和浩特卷（2015）满分作文展示
Dear friends,
In order to make the environment more beautiful, we should try our best to do the following things.
First of all, we must forbid people to throw rubbish at random and try to keep the environment clean. Besides, obeying traffic rules is very necessary. Only in this way, can we live more comfortably and conveniently. Thirdly, we should plant more our city look more beautiful. Last but not least, we should fight against serious air pollution.
Therefore, let’s take action now. I believe our action will make a big difference and lead to a better future.
Thank you!
Wangdong
范文
Dear friends,
In order to make the environment more beautiful, we should do what we can to protect it. First, we should plant more trees and flowers to make our city more beautiful. Also, always remember not to throw rubbish or pour waste water everywhere. As we all know, water is becoming less and less. So it’s quite necessary to save water. For example, turn the tap off after washing. Last but not least, we’d better ride a bike or walk when going out instead of driving a car.
In my opinion, if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, our city will become nicer and cleaner.
Thank you!
Wangdong
贵州安顺卷（2015）满分作文展示1
How Can We Protect Ourselves?
As we all know, safety is the most important thing for us teenagers. So there is no doubt that we should always remember to protectourselves. As a matter of fact, there are many ways to protect ourselves. First of all, we can’t swim alone at any time because it is very dangerous. Besides, we should be careful to make friends and try to eat healthy food. When in danger or trouble, we should be calm enough to call the police for help. Last but not least, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs and downstairs.
In a word, it