篇一:《作文》
江燕宁
原文：
Our School Students' After-class Reading As is known in the chart,we can know who grade is higher who has spent more time to read the books per week on average.It is because when you are grown you will have more things to learn and to do,so that you have less time to read and have rest.I think students need more time to have rest and read.I suggest teacher could take less homework at weekend.
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Our School Students' After-class Reading As is known in the chart, we can know （we can know三词多余了，文章给出的第一句就是“从图表中得知”）who grade is higher who has spent more time to read the books per week on average. (这句的问题在于你没有掌握句子的主语+谓语结构，自己先要明确“谁做什么”，把句子的主要框架先搭好，比如“the students spend less time reading ”，然后再加入修饰的部分，如高年级的学生 “the students who are in a higher grade”，最后再组成完整的句子the students who are in a higher grade spend less time in reading.。) It is because when you are grown you will have more things to learn and to do, so that you have less time to read and have rest.（and to have a rest） I think students need more time to have rest (have a rest)and read (to read) .I suggest teacher could take less homework (suggest sb do sth. 布置作业：assign homework; I suggest teachers assign less homework) at weekend （在周末at the weekend/at weekends/on the weekend/on weekends）（此处可陈述少布置作业的目的 in order that students are able to have more time to do after-classing reading to increase their knowledge）. 根据要求还要简要描述图中信息，你只是概括了一下。可以补充描述，如： The Grade Six students spend seven hours in reading per week on average, while hours spent by the Grade Nine students decrease to only half an hour.
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As is known in the chart，the students who are in a higher grade spend less time in reading. The Grade Six students spend seven hours in reading per week on average, while hours spent by the Grade Nine students decrease to only half an hour. It is because when you are grown you will have more things to learn and to do, so that you have less time to read and to have a rest. I think students need more time to have a rest and to read. I suggest teachers assign less homework at weekends in order that students are able to have more time to do after-classing reading to increase their knowledge.
篇二:《初中英语作文大全》
1、 你最喜欢的人，可以是名人；是你的家人；老师，同学，朋友
等。请以The person I like Best 为题写一篇80个词左右的短文。
The Person I Like Best
I have many friends. But I like Li Lei best. He is a good student. He helps others, he likes reading books, he knows many things, he is very helpful to us. He often helps me with my study, we are good friends, we often play games and do sports together. We enjoy ourselves every day. Li Lei is the person I like best.
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2、My Good Friend
Tome is my good friend. He is 16 years old. He comes from America. He lives with his parents in China. He likes playing football, singing and drawing. He is good at English, but his Chinese isn’t good. He often helps me with my English, and I help him with his Chinese. We go to play football every Sunday. We always feel happy when we get together. Notes to the Composition:
3、 My Day
On weekdays, I get up at 6:30. I have breakfast at seven o’clock. And then I go to school. Usually I go to school by bike and get to school at about 7:30. I don’t like to be late. We begin our classes at 8:00. I have
lunch at school. In the afternoon we have two classes. We often play games after school. I get home at about six o’clock. We have supper at seven o’clock. In the evening I do my homework. Sometimes I watch TV. I go to bed at about ten o’clock.
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4、 My Family
There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and I. My father works in a factory. He is a clerk. My mother is a doctor. She likes her work. I am a middle school student. I like English, but I am not good at it. Every morning my parents go to work and I go to school. In the evening we have a good meal. Then we go out for a walk. We often talk about the sun, the moon and many other things during the walk. After we come back, my father often does some reading, mother watches TV and I do my homework. I feel very happy when we get together. I love my family. I love my parents.
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5、 My English Teacher
Mr.Hu is our English teacher. He has taught us for three years. He is a tall man. I think he is thirty years old. He likes wearing a white shirt and black trousers. He is one of the most popular teachers in our school. He
works very hard. He always comes to school early and goes home late. We enjoy his teaching. He is strict with us, but we love him very much. Notes to the Composition:
6、My Favorite Sport
I like basketball best. I began to play basketball when I was seven years old. So I have been playing basketball for eight years. My parents think it’s good for my health. My father taught me to play. I can play it well now. I often play it with my classmates after school. Basketball
makes me athletic and happy. At the same time, I also make many friends. Notes to the Composition:
7、My School Life
I am a student in NO.3 Middle School. I go to school from Monday to Friday. I often get up at six o’clock, and then do morning exercise. After breakfast I go to school. There are four lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. Of all the subjects can help me. I am getting on well with my classmates. After school we have colorful activities, such as sports, drawing pictures, singing songs. My friends and I enjoy playing football. Because sports not only keep our health, but also make us brave. My teachers are friendly to us and teach us very well. We love them very much. I make my mind to learn all the lessons well so that I can enter
senior middle school. I am sure my dream will come true.
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8、Self-taught Learning
There are many ways to things. In school, teachers do their best to teach us what they know. At home, my parents show me how to do the housework. I can learn somethings not only from books but also from life. Of all the ways of learning, I think it is the most important to learn
knowledge by myself. I can read many interesting books and think over the main ideas. I always keep asking questions, then try to answer them by myself . It’s helpful to keep a diary. I often discuss questions with my classmates so that I can solve them. I believe self-taught learning is a good way to learn everything.
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9、How to Learn English Well
The best way of learning a language is using it. If you want to learn English well, you should talk in English as much as possible. Then, I think an interest in English is very important. If you are interested in English, you will find everything easy. Finally, reading English stories, jokes and easy novels is also necessary. From these you will know English is not only interesting, but also useful. If you can do these, you
will be a good English learner.
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10、The Love from My Parents
My parents are very kind and helpful. They cook meals and wash clothes for me every day. On weekends, they often prepare some of my favorite food. Sometimes they help me with my lessons. They are very strict with me, but when I make a mistake, they first listen to me and then have a talk with me instead of just complaining about it. They always try to understand me. I think that is good way for a child to grow up. With their care, I’m living and studying happily.
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11、My Favorite Star
My favorite star is Jackie Chan. He is one of the most popular stars in the world. I like him very much not only because his movie are exciting but also because he very friendly. I like his new movie Rush Hour 3 best. I think it is a successful action movie. Jackie Chan lives in Hong Kong now. He likes doing sports very much. His favorite color is white .He also likes Beijing Opera. He has many fans at home and abroad. I hope he is happy all his life.
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篇三:《初一英语作文大全》
There are some photos on the wall. They’re very beautiful.
In the middle of the room, there is my bed. It’s not so big, but it’s very comfortable. Every night, I lay on the bed and have a good dream.
On the right of the bed, there is my desk and chair. They’re in front of the window. My computer is on the desk. There is a lamp on the desk, too. I can do my homework here and play computer games.
My bookshelf is on the left of the bed. There are a lot of storybooks and picture books in the shelf. I like them very much.
Not everyone has a bedroom. I’m very lucky, because I have a very beautiful bedroom. I’ll try my best to keep it clean and tidy.
1. Our School
Our school is in the west of the city. It is very big with a tall teaching building. There are thirty classrooms, a modern library, a dinning hall and a gym. There is a big playground where we often have sports. There are lots of trees and
flowers beside the playground. There are more than five hundred students and teachers in our school and we all work hard. Our school is so beautiful that we all like it very much.
2. How did you spend your summer vacation
I had a busy and interesting summer vacation. I did my homework every day so I finished doing my homework ten days before the new term. I also played table tennis and basketball with my friends every day. I sometimes went
movies and went to the parks with my friends. I surfed the internet, read books and watched TV every evening. I visited my grandparents and helped them with the housework, too. I helped my parents clean the room and cook meals. The most important was that my parents and I went to Hannan Island and spent a week there.{on,weekends作文}.
4.. A happy Day
It was sunny and very hot today. I got up early and helped my parents cook breakfast. Then I washed the dishes and cleaned the room. After a short rest I did my homework in the morning. In the afternoon I went swimming in the
nearest swimming pool with my friends. It was really cool to swim in such a hot day. I surfed the internet and read a storybook in the evening. I really had a busy and happy day. 今天天气晴朗比较热。 我起得很早，帮父母做早饭。然后我洗碗打扫屋子。休息一会后我上午做作业。 下午我和朋友去我家最近的游泳池游泳。 在如此炎热的夏天游泳的确很棒。 晚上我上网、看故事书。我今天很忙过得很快乐。
5.给笔友的一封信
Dear Lucy
I am very glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce myself to you. My name is Li Lei. I am eleven years old. I am tall with a pair of glasses. Now I am
studying at Yuying Primary School. I am in Class One，Grade 5. I like singing and playing the piano very much. I am good at English and Chinese. 很高兴收到你的来信。现在让我介绍我自己。我叫李雷。11岁。我高个子、带眼镜。 我在育英小学。我在五年级一班。我非常喜欢唱歌和弹钢琴。我数学和语文学得都很好。
6。暑假打算
I will have a busy summer vacation. I am going to do my homework every day . I am going to the library to borrow some books and go to the shops to buy
some books.I am going to do sports such as playing table tennis, swimming and so on. I am going to visit my grandparents and stay there for a week. I am going to help my parents do some housework. 我暑假会很忙。 我每天要写作业。 我打算去图书馆去借书、去商店买书。我要做运动，如：打乒乓球、游泳等。我要去看爷爷奶奶并在那住一周。我要帮父母做家务。
7.自我介绍
Hello, everyone. My name is Kelly. I am friendly and honest.I am good at English and maths. I like surfing the internet,playing computer games, watching TV and traveling. I also like playing table tennis and I am good at it ,too. I often play table tennis with my friends on weekends. And I want to be a famous table tennis player when I grow up. What I like most is to see the
seagulls flying freely in the sky so I often go to the sea in summer. My favourite colour is white because I think white is symbolize purity. 大家好 我的名字叫KELLY .我很友好、诚实。我擅长英语和数学。 我爱上网、玩电脑网络游戏、看电视 和旅游。我也喜欢打乒乓球。我经常和朋友们在周末打乒乓球，长大了我想当一个乒乓球运动员。最喜欢在海边看着海鸥自由自在的飞翔，因此在夏天我经常去海边。白色是我的最爱。因为我觉得白色是纯洁的象征。
8.海南之旅
went to Hainan Island with my parents for a holidy and we stayed there for a week. It took us only more than three hours to get to Haikou airport. We
enjoyed the warm sunshine and the softwind. We walked on the beach and picked up the beautiful shells. We also sufed on the waves and it was really exciting. We played ball games on the beach as well. I believed Hainan was really an attractive city with famous beach and mountains. We really enjoyed the beautiful scenery of Hainan.
9。A nice Sunday
It is Sunday and it is a fine day today. We come to the People Park with our English teacher who came from Canada. Look ! Tom and other five boys are playing football. Cina and some girl students are flying kites. Alice and I are taking photos near the park. Alice and we are very happy. Alice helps us a lot with our English.
今天是星期天，天气晴朗。我们和来自Canada的英语老师Alice来到人民公园。 瞧，Tom和五个男同学在踢球；Cina和一些女同学在放风筝；我和Alice正在公园附近拍照。Alice和我们都非常高兴。Alice在英语方面帮助了我们很多。
10.This morning,I woke up with a start: my clock was alarming. Unwillingly opened my eyes, I found it was 6:30 already.Nevertheless, the room was very gloomy, for it was raining outside. What a cold day! How comfortable it would be if I could stay in bed for the whole day, reading a favourite book in the sound of rain. But, I did have to go to work. Though it was a rush hour, on the
篇四:《英语七下作文》
Unit1
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a good P.E. teacher. I can speak many languages: Chinese, English,
French and Japanese. I‟m 27 years old and I‟m so strong. I can play a lot of sports,
but tennis is my favorite sport. It‟s interesting. I can play it very well. I can also play
soccer and volleyball. They‟re interesting, too. I think I‟m a good teacher. I can help
kids with sports. I‟m very good with them. I think your school is good, but a good
school needs many good teachers. Please let me join you.
Yours faithfully, Scott Li
Music Lovers Wanted
We need more music lovers in our club. Do you like music? Can you sing? Can you
dance? Can you play the violin, the piano, the guitar or the drums? If your answers
are “yes”, then you can join our music club. Please call Gina at 612-5568.
Hello, Mr Hall. I‟m Tony Chan. I‟m 12 years old. I want to join the Basketball
Club because I like playing basketball and I play it very well. I want to be a basketball
star like Yao Ming. I play basketball after school every day. I want to join the
basketball match on December 1st. My e-mail address is tonychan@163.com.
Thank you.
Dear Sir or Madam,
Hi, I am Peter, I am 16 years old. I am tall and thin, I want to join your camp. Because
I can sing very well and dance very well, too. And I like kids and camp. I think I am
good with kids. And I also like sports very much, such as tennis basketball and soccer.
So I can teach the kids for their sports.
As you can see, I am a good boy. I can sing dance play tennis play basketball and
play soccer. And I like playing with kids and I also like teaching them for their sports
or music. My telephone is 553-7640, call me.
Sincerely yours
Dear Sir or Madam,{on,weekends作文}.
I‟m writing to apply for申请 the position职位 on the notice. I am confident
that I am suitable for适合的 the job.
My name is Tony and I‟m 17 years old. I‟m outgoing and friendly so I can get
along well with相处 children. I have lots of hobbies in my free time, such as reading,
listending to music, swimming and so on. If I can be one of your members, I will tell
interesting stories and play sports with kids. Besides, I have learned piano for 6
years so I‟m capable有能力的 enough to teach children music.
I‟m sure I‟m the right one you are looking for. Look forward to your reply答复.
Yours Sincerely,
Tony
Unit2
My Day
Today is Monday. I get up at 6:00. I have my breakfast at about 6:30.Then I clean
my room, wash my face and brush my teeth. I have noodles
for breakfast. I go to school at 7:00. I do some morning exercises at 7:50.We have
four classes in morning. At 11:30, I‟m very hungry. I have lunch
at school. I have a rest at 12:00. We have three classesin the afternoon. I have a
computer class and an art class(电脑和艺术课). I like them very much. I go
home at 5:30. I do my homework after school. In the evening, my sister、brother
and I watch TV at 8:00. Finally (最后), I wash my face and brush my
teeth and go to bed at 10:00.
What a happy day!
My Day
I get up early at six every day. After doing some morning exercises, I read
English for twenty minutes. At seven I have breakfast. After breakfast I take my
schoolbag and go to school. My home is a bit far from the school, so I have to take
a bus to school. Our class begins at eight, and we have four classes in the morning.
After lunch at 12 o‟clock, I take a short rest in the classroom. We have three more
classes in the a