第一篇:《火灾作文》
我需要做的
记11·15上海火灾
2010年11月15日，这原本是很平淡的一天，但却因为一场大火，让这一天变成了很悲哀的一天，因为这场大火，夺去了58个人鲜活的生命，70余人蒙受不同程度的伤害，40余人至今下落不明；因为这场大火，让多少家庭支离破碎；因为这场大火，让多少人失去了自己至爱的亲人。这就是著名的11·15上海特大火灾。
当得知是一栋正在进行外墙保温施工的居民楼起火的时候，作为一名EPS行业的从业人员，当时就心里咯噔了一下，第一感觉在想是不是EPS保温板起火造成的火灾。敏感的神经一下子就促使我马上打开电脑，随之而来的都是铺天盖地的关于大楼起火的报道，看着那一幅幅惨不忍睹的画面，心里的揪心无从说起。那一刻办公室的其他业务同仁也很关心事态的发展，其中王峰就马上给我们上海的业务常同峰打了电话，据说当时常同峰就在火灾现场，反馈来的信息是现场很乱，火势很大，整个大楼已经形成了一个立体燃烧体，救援难度很大，作为保护措施的建筑尼龙网已被烧的不见踪影，主要的火源来自墙体正在施工的聚氨酯泡沫保温板，常同峰还说，与起火大楼一街之隔的另一栋大楼也正准备施工，在院子里堆满了来自我们公司客户上海大道的一些EPS泡沫保温板。当时听到这些，心里真的是凉了半截。随后就从网上来自的报道，此次火灾的主要原因是因为无证电焊工违规
实施电焊施工，导致溅落的火星点燃脚手架上的尼龙网、竹排等可燃材料而引发大火，继而引燃墙体的聚氨酯泡沫保温板，导致火势进一步蔓延。
此次大火，给整个社会带来的影响是巨大，特别是保温材料行业。痛定思痛，火灾之后，留给我们的是什么？特别是从事保温材料行业的我们，我们该如何看待此次事件的发生，带给我们下游客户的影响我们该怎么与他们一起克服。我想这是我们日后的关键。
大楼起火，夺去了这么多人的生命，网上报道，尼龙网、聚氨酯泡沫是罪魁祸首，而作为EPS生产企业，与保温材料是紧密不可分割的，因为我们下游客户生产的聚苯乙烯泡沫板也在大量的应用于各种建筑的墙体保温材料中，试想，如果此次燃烧的不是聚氨酯，而是聚苯板，那给我们的客户以及我们企业自身带来的影响是直接而巨大的，很明显的一点，火灾发生后的第二天，上海的客户都来问我们要阻燃料的B1级阻燃报告，因为他们已经被告知，生产的保温板必须要达到相关的要求，这就是一次因为此次火灾事故而引起的一次直接的行业反应。随即，在之后的拜访客户的过程中，大部分客户都告知，各个地方的政府已经加大了相关的监管力度，对于客户来讲，形势是严峻的。因此作为他们的供应商，每次都极力劝说他们不要在乎蝇头小利，而在阻燃料里参入普通料。也许在他们看来这无所谓，但是作为
生产企业，生产的原料明明是合格的，因为客户不按规定操作， EPS
导致产品不合格，这给EPS生产企业也会带来间接的负面影响。因此，给客户树立正确的观念也是我们需要攻克的困难。
间接的，由于聚氨酯的燃烧，给聚苯乙烯泡沫板提供了一定的市场，但相关的监管是很多客户都始料不及的，因为聚苯乙烯本来就与聚氨酯是属同一大类的保温材料。因此，合格的产品是保证市场的唯一价码。而作为龙王的一名业务，这个时候需要我们给予客户更多的信心，说服客户来购买我们的原料，提高我们的销量。
总之，良好的行业的氛围，是需要企业与客户一起去创造的，而这其中就需要我们这些直接面对客户的业务坚持不懈的努力，为企业树立良好的形象，带动客户也努力效仿。一步步使整个行业更加理智，更加趋向成熟。
郑涛{火灾练习作文}.
2010-12-2
第二篇:《四六级作文练习及范文》
（一）Fire Prevention on Campus
1.前段时间校园火灾频发，造成生命和财产损失
2.分析火灾发生的原因
3.作为学生，如何预防校园火灾发生
●审题概述●
这是一分析火灾原因和如何预防火灾为中心的文章，撰写时重点即在于此。开篇综述校园火灾频发情形及造成的生命和财产损失，然后说明火灾原因，最后提出可能的火灾预防措施。第一段，主要概述；第二段，说明原因；第三段，详细论述措施。{火灾练习作文}.
【范文】
Fire Prevention on Campus
People are alarmed by the succession of campus fires in recent years. In each of these accidents, heavy casualties were reported – houses were burned down, students lost their lives, and properties were damaged. Faced with such a chilling fact, people keep asking, “What on earth results in these repeated tragedies?”
A brief survey of them reveals that human factors still prove to be the leading causes. For example, three of these fires were caused by the students’ use of electric water-heaters. As students often leave the heaters unattended, the risks are rather high should the water in the bottle boil dry while no one is around to turn off the power. In other cases, fires were also caused by stoves, candles, cigarette butts, etc.
Since most of these disasters could have been prevented if proper precautions had been taken, students should be better educated on the importance and measures of fire control. The following three reminders are of particular importance for us students: First, learn how to use a fire extinguisher. Second, double-check candles, heaters, stoves and other electric appliances, and make sure there are no open flames before leaving rooms. Lastly, do not smoke in the dorm.
◇第一段思路点评：概述并引入下文
◇语言点提示：
（1）此句What on earth results in these repeated tragedies? 常可作为过渡句，引出下文
（2）注意描述有关火灾客观事实，多使用被动语态，如are alarmed by，were reported，were burned down，were damaged，Faced with。
◇第二段思路点评：论述火灾的主要原因是使用电热水器，还有造成火灾的次要原因是实用电炉、蜡烛和乱扔烟蒂◇语言点提示：electric water-heaters电热水器
◇第三段思路点评：详述预防火灾的三点措施，注意使用连接词语first, second, lastly。
◇语言点提示：
take precautions采取预防措施
fire extinguisher灭火器
（二）Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts
1. 校园盗窃案件时有发生
2. 物品被盗的原因
3. 学生如何加强防盗意识
●审题概述●
这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章。第一段，主要陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况。第二段，主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。
第三段，主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。
【范文】
Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts
“If you don’t want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, you’d better put them on in sleep,” goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts have become increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses, pre-paid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen.
What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard to find. But I believe of all these reasons, the lack of anti-theft alertness is the most important. For lack of alertness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, they’ll also leave their bikes unlocked before a store or by a road, or forget to take away their personal stuff before they go out of the classroom to make a phone call. These acts undoubtedly have increased their exposure to the light-fingered monsters.
In order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay on guard in the first place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be more specific, the students should not hide any tempting amount of cash in the dorm. Put it in the bank instead. Besides, do not leave any valuable items unattended. Take them wherever you go. In addition, it’s advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch programme with other students in the dorm and neighbouring dorms.
◇第一段思路点评：陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况
◇语言点提示：it seems that此句型表示一种可能性
◇第二段思路点评：说明被盗原因
◇语言点提示：
（1）What makes students the easy targets?此句引出下文
（2）anti-theft alertness防盗意识
（3）lack of alertness缺乏警惕
（4）light-fingered小偷小摸的、惯行扒窃的
◇第三段思路点评：阐述如何加强防盗意识
◇语言点提示：注意关联词语in the first place，Besides，In addition的使用可使行文更富逻辑性。
（三）How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?
1. 网络提供给了人们丰富多彩和便捷的生活
2. 很多人开始感觉离开网络寸步难行
3. 你对网络依赖症的看法
● 审题概述●
本文是一篇论述你对网络与人们生活关系的文章。第一段，侧重简述网络给人们生活的多彩、便利。第二段，详述网络与人们生活的紧密度。第三段，论述对网络依赖的观点。
【范文一】
How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?
If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant life.{火灾练习作文}.
Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition. Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support. Companies and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if they’d seek international cooperation or funding. Common folks like us also rely on the cyber world in various ways, for communication, entertainment, banking and shopping.
True, the power of the Internet is all pervasive and its many negative effects are already visible. For example, Internet addicts tend to withdraw to their own fantasy world rather than communicate with a real person. Children are exposed to online pornography and violence. Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence. In view of all this, you are advised to use the Internet with wisdom. Keep it at a safe distance and never lose yourself. ◇第一段思路点评：综述网络给人们生活带来的多彩和便捷。两个长句足矣。第一句用if引导的条件句引出“网络”话题，第二句概述网络带给多彩和便捷的生活。
◇语言点提示：
has drawn…, realized, and provided此为谓语连动式的运用。
◇第二段思路点评：详述网络与人们生活的紧密关系，先总述，后分述。
◇语言点提示：
resort to借助、诉诸、求助于
◇第三段思路点评：先陈述人们对网络的依赖，再谈对此的看法。 ◇语言点提示：
（1）negative effects副作用、反面作用
（2）addicts成瘾者、依恋者
（3）fantasy world虚拟世界、虚幻世界
（4）pornography色情表演、色情作品
（5）fraud欺骗、诈骗
【范文二】
As a primary source of information as well as an efficient means of communication, the Internet offers people a colourful and convenient life. Just by clicking the mouse, we can enjoy a brilliant and easy life that could not be achieved ever before: shopping, making friends, contacting relatives, looking for jobs, downloading music and movies, conducting business deals, and freely airing our opinions.
For its convenience, the Internet has attracted people like magnets and some people even claim that it is indispensable. To them, life can’t go on without it. Every day millions of people spend hours on end surfing the Internet. They are obsessed with it so much so that they forget many other important matters.
As for me, I don’t approve of unrestrained Internet reliance. Although the Internet is a gift of the technological revolution and a blessing of this information age, we should never let it control our life. The Internet absolutely doesn’t mean the whole world to us. Instead, we should guard against its negative effects. To those Internet addicts, I would add: “Self-control can make or break your life. With proper use, the Internet serves you; otherwise, it kills you.”{火灾练习作文}.
（四）Craze for Civil Service Examinations
1. 现在有越来越多的大学毕业生报考公务员
2. 引起此现象的原因
3. 你的看法
● 审题概述●
本文是一篇主要论述大学生报考公务员增多的原因和对此看法的文章。第一段，主要综述大学生报考公务员增多的现象。第二段，侧重分析引起此现象的原因。第三段，重点谈你对此的观点。
【范文】
Craze for Civil Service Examinations
Every year hundreds of thousands of people in China take civil service exams conducted at various levels in the hope of becoming government employees. Among them, college graduates are a fast-growing force that can’t be ignored. The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as it’s also gaining popularity among science and engineering students.
In the final analysis, this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly attributable to two factors – ambitions and comforts. On the one hand, many ambitious college graduates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social status, greater power and prestige, on which many of their other wishes rest. On the other, as being a civil servant generally means a stable income, enviable healthcare and pension programmes, as well as other comforts of life, it’s quite an appealing career option to many people, especially in this age of sluggish world economy.
Personally, the desire to be a government official is beyond reproach, as the nation and the people do need an injection of new blood into the civil service sectors. The fresh-faced college graduates, armed with lofty ideals, new vision, and strong drive, are undoubtedly among the best candidates.
◇第一段思路点评：第一句总述人们蜂拥参加公务员招考，第二句点明大学生是其中的主力军，第三句再述热衷于公务员报考的大学生不仅有文科的，还有理工科的。
◇语言点提示：
liberal arts majors文科专业学生
◇第二段思路点评：先总述引起大学生热衷报考公务员的两点因素，再详细分述。
◇语言点提示：
（1）On the one hand…On the other起到衔接上文作用
（2）is attributable to归因于
（3）sluggish world economy衰退的世界经济
◇第三段思路点评：重点谈对大学生热衷报考公务员的观点。 ◇语言点提示：beyond reproach无可厚非 来源:考试大-英语四级 （五）Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes?
1. 现在社会上有各种各样的培训班
2. 有些人认为有必要参加课外培训班，有些人则认为没有必要
3. 你的观点
● 审题概述●
这是一篇主要论述人们和你对社会上各类培训班看法的文章。第一段，概述各种各样培训班的状况。第二段，论述人们对参加课外培
第三篇:《南京市中考满分作文-火灾》
1. 线型感烟火灾探测器与光电式感烟探测器的相同点：都是利用烟雾粒子能改变光线传播
特性而制成的。不同点：线型感烟探测器的光束发射器和光电接收器是在现场中相对位置的两个独立部分而形成的一个完整工作装置，不像光电感烟探测器是将他们置于同一个位置（暗室）中。
2. 线型感烟火灾探测器具有监视范围广、保护面积大、使用环境条件要求不高等特点，适
用于火灾有烟雾形成大空间、大范围场所。
3. 系统产品型号由“系统代号”、“类别代号”、“特征代号”以及规格代号四个部分组成。
（1）系统代号：Z代表自动，S代表水
（2）类别代号：T（头）——表示喷头；F（阀）——表示阀门；J（警）——表示报警控制装置；P（配）——表示配件及附件
例：ZSTD—10/68：表示玻璃吊顶型洒水喷头，公称口径为10mm，公称动作温度为68℃
4. 压力开关与水利警铃统称为水（压）力报警器，当系统进行喷水灭火时，管网中水压下
降到一定值时，安装在湿室报警阀的延时器上部的压力开关动作，将水压转换成开关信号或者电信号，实现对喷淋泵自动控制并同时产生喷水灭火的回馈信号。
5. 在下列场所应设置二氧化碳灭火系统：高层建筑物内设置的可燃油油浸电力变压室及装{火灾练习作文}.
有可燃油的高压电容器室。电信、广播建筑的重要设备机房，大中型电子计算机房，以及图书馆的珍藏库等。医院、百货大楼、展览馆、财贸金融大厦、电信广播大厦、省级邮政大楼、高级宾馆、高级住宅、重要的办公楼、科研楼、图书馆、档案楼等自备发电机房、以及其它贵重设备室、仓库等。
6. 抑爆峰值测定法（1211灭火效能测定）：所谓抑爆峰值是指在可燃气体混合物中，加入
1211灭火剂，当1211浓度增加到一定值时，爆炸上限和下限将重合成一个极限值，此时1211的浓度称为爆炸极限峰值，又称为抑爆峰值（抑爆浓度）
7. 防烟分区：在建筑平面上进行区域划分，对发生火灾的房间和作用疏散通路的走廊加以
防烟隔断，以控制烟气的流动和蔓延。
第四篇:《消防演习作文：消防火灾演习》
消防演习作文：消防火灾演习
火灾，是一个恶魔，永远缠在我们的身边；火灾，就像一把可以摧毁人生的刀，给我们带灾难，使许多人的生命瞬间消失；火灾，也许就是我们生命的尽头！{火灾练习作文}.
嘀嘟，嘀嘟火灾的警报声响了起来，广播里面一直在呼喊着火灾的信息，学校的学生都以最快的速度奔跑着来到了大操场，此时大雾弥漫着，在天空中飘荡。这一幕让我大吃一惊，难道这里着火了吗？不是，原来这里在进行火灾的消防演习，全校的师生都来到了大操场，这次的消防演习进行的十分顺利、完美，好，接下来有请来自消防队的叔叔为我们示范一下展开水枪的方法。老师一说完，消防队的叔叔就拿着水枪过来了，只见他用力的往前一抛水枪就笔直的展开了，有哪几位同学愿意尝试一下，请到台上来。老师那有力的声音又响了起来，话音刚落，就有5位六年级的大哥哥走了上来，消防叔叔拿了5个水枪分别给了他们，并细心的告诉他们怎么展开，只听一声开始，大哥哥们双手用力一抛水枪展开了，有的长，有的短，有的中间打了一个结，有的歪歪扭扭，真是五花八门！看来要笔直的展开水枪可不是一件容易的事。接下来，看一看消防叔叔是怎么用灭火器来灭火的吧！老师又说道，就在这时操场中间出现了一个黑色的锅，上面燃烧着火，消防叔叔拿着一个红色的灭火器，一喷白色的气体顿时弥漫开来，就像云朵那样雪白，但又有云雾那样的朦胧。火还没有灭，消防叔叔又一喷火灭了，过了一会儿，火又复活了，好像在说：你是弄不死我这伟大的火的。几经周折，火终于灭了。又轮到水枪了，现在演示的是水怎么从水枪里喷射出来的一幕了，只见消防叔叔打开水枪的开关，水顿时从开口喷了出来，有